Date: 09/27/11 11:00 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
Ohmy... I loved this and the fact that it actually followed the song in a somewhat detailed way. The writing style is truly unique. I love it! as I do with your stories that I've read. Just amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, huh =] I have loved this song for a very long time and I couldn't help but write a one-shot to it. It's beautiful, sad and so very emotional. This is my first time trying a new writing style and I have to say, I quite liked out it turned out. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the kind words =]
Date: 09/16/11 07:31 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! It really, truly means a lot to me that you like this so much =]
Date: 08/07/11 11:35 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
i listened to the song and it broke my heart. then i read the story and i cried like a baby haha. i loved this story!! i've read a few of your things and i think this one is my favorite!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's nice to read comments like yours where the reader feels the emotion that is in the story. I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 05/11/11 06:26 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
i like it alot. seriously, you're so good in writing fictions. :]
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much =]
Date: 01/16/11 03:21 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
Oh.My.God. I think I might cry! That is amazing. You're a wonderful Writer!
Author's Response: Thanks so much hun =] rnrn
Author's Response: Thanks so much hun =] rnrn
Date: 01/04/11 08:04 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
I like it. I'm not really into shortfics but I love everything you write.. it's just so sad you know :/ but it's ok. great storie :)
Author's Response: Well thank you for taking the time to read this one =] It really means a lot to me that you did =] rnrn
And yes, it is sad but she couldn't keep being the other woman. She couldn't keep having him come around when she knew he was never going to leave his girlfriend for her. rnrn
I'm glad you liked it =]
Date: 12/07/10 03:08 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
Awww Love It.
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 09/27/10 04:54 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
I saw and felt this all the way through, without having to listen to the song (it stands on its own without it) Just a couple of simple scenes and the reader knows about their relationship - and she did the right thing :)) I like the way it was written and I enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much =] It's really kind of you to say and it means so much that you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Date: 09/19/10 04:00 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
I totally love it ^^ It's written well and the song just fits.I can feel her bitterness and irrevocable love for him... :/ Gosh, I can't believe that he didn't stay :(((
It's sad but beautiful :)
Author's Response: That really means a lot to me. rnrn
This was a hard story to write. Probably the hardest out of all the ones I have written. Maybe it was because there was so much emotion put into it. I don't know...either way, it took a lot out of me. I am so glad you enjoyed it though. rnrn
I may have an idea for a sequel to this. Not sure yet, but we will see. I am still figuring out how to go about it. =]
Date: 09/05/10 06:47 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
Oh my gosh this is such a great story i absolutely love it
Author's Response: Thank you! =]
Date: 08/18/10 10:56 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
It's really sad. I love how you portray Tom as a different character than he is in WIYA (:
Author's Response: Thank you =] I was trying to make it completely different from both of my other stories and I think I accomplished that =D
Date: 08/15/10 11:50 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
This is really good!! I mean it. :) That was probably your best piece of writing to date. =D Normally I'm not a huge fan of present tense, but it worked really well with the style of the fic. There were a few times where you slipped into past tense, so maybe you want to go back and quickly fix that? But other than that, everything seemed fine and dandy to me. :)
And how did I know that it was going to be Tom in the end? lol
Author's Response: =D I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!! Like seriously! I have a huge grin on my face right now! I am such a goof when I write now. I always think, what would Sarah think of this? You are like always in my head now. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing LOL I think it's all because of the very first comment you ever left for me. Yep, I definitely think that's why HAHA. rnrn
I will go back and read it through again..for like the fifth time. Maybe I should get you to be my beta. What do you think about that? hehe Sometimes I seriously think I need to have someone read over my stuff! rnrn
Of course it was going to be Tom! Who else would it have been? Georg? LOL Heck no! HEHE Tom is always on my mind! KIDDING! But seriously, Tom was perfect for this one. I'm even thinking about doing a continuation with another song. Just need to find one that will work. =D
Date: 08/12/10 07:10 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
Holy crap. You are a very good writer. I must say that I enjoyed this alot. :)
(formerly know as selena boulevard)
Author's Response: =D Why thank you! That really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it and think that I'm a good writer.
Date: 08/12/10 12:04 pm Title: Why Don't You Stay?
sad, but good
Author's Response: I know =/ Very sad. Thanks for the comment =]
Date: 08/12/10 11:39 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
i loved it! made me tear up as well, which is always a good thing. that song is amazing as well. i must admit though, i thought tom would stay at the end.
Author's Response: Tom was going to stay at the end, but after listening to the song about a million times, I realized that I had to have her make him leave. It sucks, but that's how the song goes. rnrn
I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I was a bit nervous about this one because it's so different from my other stories. Thanks for the wonderful comment!
Date: 08/12/10 05:46 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
It's really good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 08/12/10 03:14 am Title: Why Don't You Stay?
There were a few grammar mistakes, simple things that can be fixed with a handy-dandy beta, but I liked the story overall. I'm not a huge Sugarland fan (I'm not a huge fan of Jennifer Nettle's voice) but when I hear this song, this is the sort of situation I envision. I truly think you captured the right situations to match the song perfectly. Wonderful piece, truly.
PS: I love how the story is written like actual thought. Sporadic little sentences. I know I don't think in paragraphs (at least not all the time) ;]
Author's Response: Thank you for being honest. I love honesty =D That's what I asked for and that's what I got =D rnrn
A beta probably would help me out in times of trouble, but I tried that once and the girl I had asked never got back to me. I guess I just gave up on the whole beta thing =/ Maybe I'll have to try again. rnrn
I am glad you liked the story though. Although it's not a happy story, which it's not supposed to be, I am glad you liked it. I didn't want it to be all paragraphs and conversations between the two otherwise it may not have came out the same way. rnrn
So, thank you very much for your honesty and for taking the time out to review. I am truly glad you enjoyed it!