Date: 06/09/11 03:10 pm Title: It's too late
comment1: at first i thought they were in the car already. Theyre arnt even on the ground yet
comment2: call me crazy but with her fear of strangers- and her being in the country 4 just obver a week- i doubt anas number is in the yellow pages.
comment3: “Just sleep with me tonight. Like, actually sleeping." lol
comment4:There too cute =)
Date: 06/09/11 03:02 pm Title: She won’t give in that easy
comment1: and here i was thinking i was the only one thats was in the kitchen early to greet everyone when they woke up lol
comment2: lmao poor toms pride seems hurt
comment3:
comment2: uh oh i think someone told someone else about a little kiss...!
comment3: I KNEW IT! haha
comment4: lmfao lea is so girly
comment5: i thought bills said "i dont think she will give it up that easy" 0_o
comment6: i family used to have a home made pizza every week and each week a different member picked the toppings =)
comment7: they remind me of little kids for some reason even though the 'i want to be with you thing' makes me think of sex.Maybe its because my childhood bf was always asking to kiss me ...
Date: 06/09/11 02:14 pm Title: Cold
cooment1: Idk y but bills doubt rubs the wrong way...
comment2: oh tom with your jokes and bill with ur some what uptight self lol
comment3:"She understood quickly that he was a ladies man, but she didn’t bothering to be charmed. The cornrows, the ridiculous big clothes around his obviously skinny body were just wrong. Very wrong." guess she doesnt like the wangstas huh? lmfao
comment4:" iv so had that happen. I sit very tall/streigh backed though so if they put their hand on my leg i sit with my elbows on my knees like a boy and prush it off
comment5: Ana seems a bit uptight too. i know that some big thing happened with her ex but you would think tom pinned her down and tried to force his tongue down her throat.
comment6: question: is her(ana's) speaking somewhat clipped on purpose due to her lack of german skills? iv been noticing that she speaks oddly and thought it wasJust you making mistakes but now I see that its only her that speaks this way.
comment7: i like bill a bit more for checking in on her in her room =)
comment8: whoa whoa whoa now... who kissed who exactly?
Date: 06/09/11 01:48 pm Title: Strangers
WARNING: I do comments instead of 'reviews'. They tend to be rather long so if they bother you tell me and ill stop...
commentone: Im already thinking about my trip to germany so the first paragraph made me think of me and my best freind/sister =(
comment 2: only an hour away?... where does her friend live/where is she leaving from?
comment3: i gigured they had to be some where in asia (korea first came to mind). is that where shes leaving from?
comment4: pssssh friends are most def. NOT always nice. My friends are sometimes completly ass holes
comment5: "really? hugging starngers" i go to a hippy music skool where the kids are always falling all over each other 9 by which i mean hugging and such) and this made me lol ... everyone in my quiet room glared at me >.<
comment5: let me guess who his 2 friends are *note my sarcastic tone* lol
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your comment :)rnrnShe is from, and lived in Scandinavia, but she has some heritage from Asia. So that explains her dark looks. I've always thought Bill should find someone dark and mysterious girl, but having a relationship with someone who lives in Asia is too far away (in my opinion). A girl with some interesting heritage may be right for him! rnrnScandinavia is only 1-2 hours flight away from Northern-Germany :)
Date: 01/23/11 11:13 am Title: Love the Way You Lie Part II
ana has a self-destructive streak a mile wide and no sense of self-preservation. bill is a control freak with non-existent self control. quite a mix. i wonder who`s more insane here.
Date: 11/27/10 01:01 am Title: Are you jealous?
Bill seems very passionate and ana just isn't .. I don't know she seems kinda Uptight , I mean bill seems to show more love to her than Ana does, it's like she doesn't even care , but I'm pretty sure this story will get better soon . I hope that ana shows alot more love now
Author's Response: Hi!rnYou are absolutely right - but that is a part of Ana's personality. She is more uptight and cold than Bill is, but she also is that kind of person. She needs to feel safe before she can be herself :) And trust me, she cares! But she don't always shows it properly.
Date: 11/24/10 03:34 am Title: Love the Way You Lie Part II
Evil Bill= awesome story.
Enough said.
Date: 10/30/10 02:51 am Title: Blackout
Omg! How horrible of him :(
Date: 10/28/10 03:07 am Title: Blackout
Bill is acting like a real SOB. It's his kid too. She better not forgive him.
Update soon
Date: 10/27/10 11:15 pm Title: Blackout
*puts on commentator voice* And *dun dun dun* we lost the baby, folks! Tsk, tsk. What an extremely horrible loss we're dealing over here. But what's this? Bill's still an egoistic, moronic jerk! *gasps* What will happen next? Will his brother, Tom, know? Will they have make up sex for this? stay tuned for the next chapter!
Date: 10/27/10 06:49 pm Title: Blackout
Bill's a sorry bastard. :)
Author's Response: I know! I hate him right now! :O
Date: 10/27/10 06:39 pm Title: Blackout
:( she's lost the baby hasn't she, thanks to bad temper Bill?
Awesome chapter! You have a way of tastefully writing about sensitive issues :) xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! That makes me happy. Well, we'll see, right?
Date: 10/27/10 05:44 pm Title: Blackout
you know its not very nice to stop it there :(
it was such a great chapter but i need moooore... <3
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Yeah, I know, but the next chapter is really a challenge. I want it to be perfect! But the good news is that school will not be that bad the next week, so I got some time to write something goood! :)
Date: 10/12/10 02:12 pm Title: Leaving
Ooooh I'm sensing some dark times ahead =z xxx
Date: 10/12/10 06:32 am Title: Leaving
Oh my gahd.. preggers... Would Bill still hit her even with life in her? *suspense music turns on* let's wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10/11/10 08:32 pm Title: Leaving
Pregnant? D: Didn't see that one coming!
Can't wait to hear how Bill's going to react!
Date: 10/02/10 07:14 am Title: I'll never leave you
wow!!!!
love it =)
Date: 10/01/10 10:24 pm Title: You promised her
i hope you keep your word tom !!! couse poor ana !!!
love it !!!!!!!!!!! =)
Date: 10/01/10 04:37 pm Title: What the hell is going on
omg Ana just tell her elida is your best friend !!!!! poor ana !!!
love it =)
Date: 10/01/10 05:45 am Title: You can barely breath
Ana you are way too nice he is going to do it again you really believe him ???
love it amazing chapter !!! =)