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Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 07:42 pm Title: I can't tell you what it really is

ooooh it's hotting up I can't wait for the next bit =) xxx

Reviewer: Autumn_Lane Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/10 11:56 pm Title: He can't decide

i love it please make more and FASTT

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapters are already written, so it's coooming :)

Reviewer: speed_angel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/10 10:29 pm Title: He can't decide

I actually can't imagine Bill being abusive *__* but it'll be interesting ^^ Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: It makes me happy that you are looking forward to more :) Personally, I could never imagine Bill being abusive in the reality, but it's really interesting writing him like that! I just hope the readers think so too :)

Reviewer: xcloserx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/10 03:00 pm Title: He can't decide

Ahhhh!!
I want to know what happens next!!
Please write more! : )
Pretty Pleeeaase?

Author's Response: It's cooooooming :)

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 09:54 pm Title: He can't decide

ooooh Bill you nasty pasty! :( xxx

Reviewer: frances17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 04:42 am Title: He can't decide

Wow. Please continue this. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: PhantomRider Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/10 11:41 pm Title: He can't decide

Oy, this is worse than watching Anakin Skywalker fall to the dark side in Star Wars lol XD As much as I can't imagine Bill acting this way, I almost can, it's very strange, and VERY intriguing! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Thunder HxC Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 07:28 pm Title: Cold

wow, you knw how to write dark. :) i luuuurrrve it.

Reviewer: xRawrrxRawrrxRawrrx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:53 pm Title: Are you jealous?

Yay! *Dances in a circle* You updated!

Bill is becoming jelous and controlling! I'm super happy. I love evil Bill charactes. I like that Ana stood up to him, somethings telling me that's shes not going to take most of the controlling actions Bill's going to set further into their relationship, I bet she's very strong willed and Bill is going to have his work cut out, *Shakes head at Bill* Why does he have to be so damn sexy when he's mean :D


I loved this chapter, one again it was amazingly written and just beautiful. I know it was just updated but I need more! *Waits patiently whilst dying suspence in the inside* I'm going to die in suspence *Fidgets nervously* Has it been updated yet? Hehe.

I'm going to end up writing an entire chapter of a review if I don't stop now, so I will. But I absolutely loved it!


Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! It makes me so happy that the readers love each chapter I write! rnrnI promise it will be updated soon (maybe sooner than you think? :), the chapter is already written! rnrnThanks again :)

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:16 pm Title: Are you jealous?

Ooooh Bill it didn't take you long before you started getiing Antsy XD

I know it sounds awful but I love controlling Bill. He always looks so fragile and sometimes shy. It's a very stark contrast! xxx

Author's Response: I agree! It's very interesting to write a Bill-character completely different from how I "know" him. It's sometimes difficult, but I also love it. I'm trying to do it in a way that is credible, and I hope that's what the readers feel too :)

Reviewer: PhantomRider Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 08:55 pm Title: Are you jealous?

Uh oh.. Bill's going dark already! D: But super chapter! Way to stand up for yourself, Ana! More soon, please! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter will be up soon :)

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:01 am Title: It's too late

How much would you love a midnight visit from Bill? It wouldn't be long before I'd of fallen for him either =) xxx

Author's Response: Haha, that's true! A girl can dream :)

Reviewer: PhantomRider Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 12:03 am Title: It's too late

AMAZING, again! I'm hooked on this story. I could really see Bill getting caught up in a whirlwind like this. More soon, please! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! It really makes me happy that you love this story :) And yes, he will be caught up in a whirlwind!

Reviewer: PhantomRider Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 11:54 pm Title: She won’t give in that easy

This is AMAZING. But I'm already dreading how Bill turns bad.. :S

Reviewer: Annak808 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 11:18 pm Title: It's too late

Hey!! Ok, so first I wanted to congratulate you because I'm really enjoying it. The tittle really pulled beacuse I love that song, so here I was, reading the summery when I read it was about Bill and I girl named Ana. It was really a shock because, well, my name Is Anna hahaha :D I started reading it and when you mentioned Ana has dark long hair it was a total shock because I have dark long hair. One of the reasons I love your story it's because I can relate (a lot) to the character and because it is perfectly writen.So please continue!!! I want to se what happens with Ana and Bill. Congratulations again and Thanks!! :D
Anna or Ana ;)

Author's Response: Hi!rnrnThank you for the wonderful review! I love to hear how readers can relate to the character, for that means that I've done something right :) I myself love to read stories when I feel that I can really "know" the OFC person, and it makes the story so much more interesting! rnrnThank you again :) It makes me happy!

Reviewer: xRawrrxRawrrxRawrrx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 09:15 pm Title: It's too late

I've just found this story and may I say; I love it! I'm so excited for the next chapter, I hope it's soon, please tell me it is *o* I absolutely love abusive Bill as crazy and weird as that may be but evil Bill is hot :D When will he become abusive? *Waits patiently* Enough of me trailing of on Bill, back to the subject :D I adore this story already, I like how Bill's all inlove and adorable just now and how wonderfully you've written it so far.

Amazing begining chapters, hope you continue soon (: x

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review, it makes me really happy! The next chapter will be up soon, it's already written (lots of chapter is!) so it wont be too long :)rnrnHe will become abusive pretty soon, but it is important for me to show how their relationship develops. I mean, Ana will very soon learn that it is in fact something "crazy" and weird about Bill, and yeah... you can imagine... it will develope itself! :)rnrnThanks again for loving the story! You have no idea how happy it makes me :)

Reviewer: MiaMalene Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 07:53 pm Title: She won’t give in that easy

Aw, Bill found his soulmate! :D
I'm looking very much forward to the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! It will be up soon :)

Reviewer: sakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 07:31 pm Title: She won’t give in that easy

well this is somthing different i love it update again soon please thanks x

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it - and find it different from other fics :) I'm trying my best to be at least a little bit original! :)

Reviewer: kcrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/10 06:08 pm Title: She won’t give in that easy

can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: LoveIsWasteful Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 08:34 pm Title: Cold

Ooooh Bill has infiltrated her mind XD xxx

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