Date: 09/14/10 01:31 am Title: What the hell is going on
Uh oh.. Now I'm scared. If Bill finds out... :S
Date: 09/13/10 08:45 pm Title: What the hell is going on
Oooh the shit has hiteth the fan...eth xxx
Date: 09/09/10 10:00 pm Title: You can barely breath
Ahhh this is sooo amazing!!! :)))
Date: 09/09/10 03:41 am Title: Strangers
This is really excting! zomg XD Bill's being a bitch. lol. I really like this story. The title caught my eye because I have been addicted to that song for days already. This really suites that song! keep going! :D
Date: 09/07/10 10:32 pm Title: You can barely breath
*sings* "I look up, there are dark things comin' down.." ;X Oh Bill.. I don't even know what to say. It's so terrible what he's doing but I also know the pain and desperation he feels. And I can even understand Ana's reasoning and forgiveness to keep staying with him, and that's frustrating because anyone else and I'd be screaming LEAVE HIS SORRY @$$!! x.x lol, more soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you again for the nice review. Well, yeah, and this is only the beginning, I'm afraid.. It will get so much worse. It's almost like I'm afraid sharing the next few chapters with you!
Date: 09/07/10 08:21 pm Title: You can barely breath
Ooooh...dangerous =(
Loved it =) I'm guessing the sex is gonna turn violent as well xxx
Author's Response: Thanks!rnrnYeah, maybe :) They have only had sex as "lovers" and not "haters" until now, but I'm not quite sure yet how I will do that in the next chapters. All I know is that the relationship will be much more violent and abusive.
Date: 09/05/10 07:05 pm Title: You can't stop me
I'm really beginning to hate Bill. But I think it's good that Ana doesn't listen to him!
Great chapter, as always =D
Author's Response: Thank you! :) If you hate him now, it will get worse...
Date: 09/04/10 11:09 pm Title: You can't stop me
O.o OMG!!!!! Amazing
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I appreciate :)
Date: 09/03/10 03:39 pm Title: Strangers
Ahhhhhh!
This is getting so interesting!!!
Update Pretty Please? :)
Date: 09/03/10 09:15 am Title: You can't stop me
Loved it! Bill you big crazy jealous shit head :( xxx
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! :)
Date: 09/03/10 08:51 am Title: You can't stop me
OMG it's starting XD im soo excited for the next chapters!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are, I am too! I hope you like it :)
Date: 09/03/10 05:30 am Title: You can't stop me
oh my god. if i was ana i would have run out of that room, and never talked to him again. i know she love him, but when a boyfriend hit a girlfriend she needs to get away from him, no matter how much she loves him.
Author's Response: Hi! That's true! In real life, a girl should never stay with an abusive boyfriend. But after all, this story is about how Ana can't leave him, no matter how mean he is to her.
Date: 09/02/10 10:06 pm Title: You can't stop me
Oh, finally violent Bill XD Call me crazy,but I just can't hate him, despite he was wrong XDDD
Update soon please ^^
Date: 09/02/10 10:03 pm Title: You can't stop me
Ok it's really starting to freak me out how easy it is to imagine Bill like this for real :S But aside that, AMAZING chapter! You write the emotions so well, everything is so easy to picture. More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! I will post the next chapter soon! :)
Date: 08/31/10 09:29 pm Title: I can't tell you what it really is
o.O Hot!! Hahahaha :D Love the story
Author's Response: ....and I love that you love the story :)
Date: 08/31/10 10:57 am Title: I can't tell you what it really is
This chapter is kind of sweet ^^ I'm still waiting for abusive Bill... :O
Author's Response: Thanks. And you know, patience :) But you should look after chapter 8 very sooon!
Date: 08/30/10 10:24 pm Title: I can't tell you what it really is
Wow. :D I need that next chapter right now. XD
Date: 08/30/10 10:11 pm Title: I can't tell you what it really is
omg omg i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me happy :)
Date: 08/30/10 08:07 pm Title: I can't tell you what it really is
YAY!! Bill's back! And they loooove each other :D I'm still hanging on the edge for when he goes all super dark though! More soon please!!
Author's Response: It's coming, it's coming! :) It breaks my heart writing it though...