Date: 10/17/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm happy Tom and Erika patched things up but I'm so sad for Bill.My heart aches because he is so sad and broken. I sure hope Robert calls him or goes to him in a few days. I hate to see Bill like this. =/
Author's Response: I hate to see Bill like this too but things will continue soon :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 10/17/10 11:47 am Title: Chapter 6
glad tom and erika made up, but crying bill breaks my heart!
Author's Response: :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 10/17/10 11:47 am Title: Chapter 6
glad tom and erika made up, but crying bill breaks my heart!
Date: 10/16/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
Thanks god! I thought that everything are crashing down. I have admit that i forgot Erika too.
Date: 10/13/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think Tom got his man...ehm...woman.
Date: 10/12/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Woah, I didn't even know there was a sequel before now! YEY! This is great, I can't wait for more(:
Date: 10/11/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwww georg had the baby! or his lady had the baby but i cant remember her name right now xD aww that was sweet! and poor bill, really, freaking out like that. happily he's got a brother like tom. i dont like it when erika and tom fights but i guess that will work out in the end though, everybody makes mistakes! I love this! its so wonderful! *favorites* can't wait for more!
Date: 10/11/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh sweet merciful lord. This chapter had me in tears. Your writing is beautiful and I love your style. This story is beyond brilliant. It's glorious. One of the most well-written, engaging, beautiful stories I've ever read. On this site or off.
Date: 10/10/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
just found this today. i loved the first story so i was excited to start this one, and you have not disappointed one bit. i don't think i can handle a heartbroken bill though. please get him and robert back together?
Date: 10/07/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love that you write such long, satisfying chapters. :) But aghhh, Bill's angst is killing me, poor baby! I want him and Robert to make up already!
Date: 10/07/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG, I just got a chance to read the updates on this and I LOVE IT!!! First, the twins' discussion about Bill's feelings for Robert was so cute and so them and it was good to see Tom being supportive even with his worries. Then Tom and Robert's verbal sparring over coffee with both of them feeling protective of Bill was so needed and so well done. And now I'm at the end, feeling heart-broken for Bill too! For once I'm glad I didn't read the update until there was a chapter to follow it! *rushes off to read the next one*
Author's Response: Hehe, balancing Tom's neurotic protectiveness with just the right amount of support is actually tough in this one! But I like how the dialogue between him and Robert turned out. Glad you enjoyed it too! Thank you :)
Date: 10/05/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hi!
I read this story since The Best Laid Plans, and I just have to say that I love it.
You really write inspiring and beautiful. I love Erika, she is the sweetest girl ever, and my heart goes warm when I think about how wonderwul Tom will do it in a relationship (in real life). Because I really think you have captured the real Tom into the fic-Tom!
I love it!
Date: 10/05/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
I suppose it's really hard for Tom and Bill when it comes to dealing with other people.
I really hope that Robert comes back, Bill LOVES him for Christ's sake!
Tom and Erika will be ok, they love each other and like Bill said, they've been through worse.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 10/04/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow this chapter was really good! i loved it.
Date: 10/04/10 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow...such a wonderful chapter. So much heartache and sadness =[
I hope everything works out between Bill and Robert and I hope Tom works things out with Erika.
The twins' relationship is a rare and beautiful thing. I absolutely love how you write everything! It's so wonderful! I can't wait for more =D
Date: 10/04/10 01:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill! That promiscuous boy. But aw. I'm still a bit suspish about Robert, but maybe that's just me. I'm hoping he'll come back for his hat, and that'll get them moving along nicely. Great chapter. Lol whipped!Tom
Date: 10/04/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 5
I was wondering if Tom would completely forget about poor Erika. What a mess! I hope everyone's able to work things out sooner than later but I guess I'll just have to wait and see how soon that is.
Date: 10/03/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
“Are you serious?” Tom asked wryly. “That poor kid.”
-This part cracked me up. I died laughing.
And that was the only part of this chapter that made me feel warm whatsoever. Very sad, but very good! I really hope things get better for the twins soon...
Date: 10/03/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, poor Bill. I hope everything works out for him! Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/03/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh heavens, so much happens in this chapter! First, Tom's a fucking idiot. lol Well, okay, he's not. Hell, even I forgot where Erika was with everything that happened. Still, I think they both were at fault for the argument. I do think Erika was about ready to blow, anyway. It seems like things have been building up. But when Tom didn't even try to help her up or seem to care when she fell on the ice, I wanted to punch him for being a jerk.
I was pretty shocked the Bill slept with Robert already, but it's not so shocking when you consider that he's not been with anyone in ages. And I can see him flipping out over having let himself get that close. But wow, to tell him to leave like that. Poor Robert. Bill was so good about making Tom go make up with Erika, I hope he takes his own advice!