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Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/11 09:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I knew thats what Tom was hiding! The sneaky little bastard! Of course, I thought he was going to present theplace to Bill on day 7, and then he didn't, I was a bt disappointed, but what you did was amazing too. I really love everythng you have so far. I can't waitto see what comes next. I am so proud Bill told everyone. Even if it wasn't detailed Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 12:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Hooray!

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 12:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

oh, this is so sad....even though you did an amazing job with writing about the fashion, Bill and Tom at the end there....just did it for me. i've got some tears in my eyes. very beautiful job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Aaaaw! I love it. :D

Jane

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Rennned Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Awww, the couple that runs the coffee shop is so cute. And I'm glad Tom and Bill are both making strides in their relationship.

Another Wicca based story sounds absolutely amazing! I have to admit, I don't know much about it, but I was fascinated with it in Merry Meet (that will always remain my favorite story of all time) and I would definitely be interested in reading this new story, if you do decide to write it. =)

Author's Response: I just posted chapter one, it's called "Passion Flower Tea" and is more based on fantasy witchcraft than real Wicca but holds a lot of the same feel. :3

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

oo Wicca story! I like the sound of that
I Like the fashion show, you havent done much keeping the main thing precise and short which fits perfectly, you havent strayed, if it'd been me i wouldve =.=
I used to watch fashion shows as a kid ALL the time, sadly by 9th grade I change d my career choice to Graphic which is what Ill be doing when I get out of the hell hole in 1 and 1/2 years lol :D

Author's Response: I've never had much interest in fashion shows at all. I prefer the creative process of design better. :-p

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Awww That was so sweet!!! I'm so proud of Bill too ;) I just wanna hug him and kiss him for finally being so brave!! I was so happy that Tom went back to Bill and how he handled the situation after talking with the couple in the coffee shop. I really hope that they get to grow old together.

Author's Response: I hope so, too. :-)

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 12:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Loved this one! Go Bill!!! I'd love another Wiccan based story from you, as would I adore to see more of Obscura! ~hugs~

Author's Response: I'll definitely consider it / have been considering and planning all day. :-p

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 11:36 pm Title: Twenty-Four

You are wonderful!

Yeah, I stopped writing almost two years ago for the same reasons.

You really have a big heart, sugar.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Halcyon_MOD Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So very happy to see your writing once again

Author's Response: Thank you, Halcyon.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So yeah, I totally flipped when I saw a new post. And said flip was worth it; it was an awesome chapter :D

P.S I reeeally hope you finish up Obscura. My friend doesn't really read fan fics, but she did happen to start Obscura and she always asks me if it's updated. lol :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will definitely try to figure out where to go with it. :-)

Reviewer: Rennned Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/11 05:27 pm Title: Twenty-Four

I'm so happy to see this updated!

Part of me is happy that Tom reached this point. As much as I love Bill's character, I feel like Tom was being treated a little unfairly.

One of the things I love so much about your writing is that the imagery is amazing. I can picture everything so well, and it is beautiful.

Author's Response: Oooh thank you so much!

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/11 02:35 am Title: Twenty-Four

I missed you! Glad that you're back. You're one of my fav writers.

Author's Response: :D :D :D !!

Reviewer: Jane Buz-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 12:29 pm Title: Twenty-Four

I hope everything works out between Tom and Bill! :(

Jane

Author's Response: Me too :-(

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 07:35 am Title: Twenty-Four

god! more lol this was sweet!

Author's Response: More soon. :-)

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 02:21 am Title: Twenty-Four

Hey there :) Glad to have you back! I was worried for a bit that maybe you wouldn't come back.

This chapter seems to fit. I feel bad for Tom that he is trying so hard to get Bill to live his life and not be so pulled down by fear and his health issues. I can't imagine dealing with this. I do really hope that Tom doesn't give up, I know he is frusterated and tired but Bill needs him. Not matter if he realizes it or not Bill needs Tom. Most importantly... they need eachother.

Author's Response: I agree. :-)

Reviewer: MiaMalene Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 12:36 am Title: Twenty-Four

Oh, yay!
You have no idea how happy I got when I saw that you updated this story!
Welcome back! *throws confetti* :D

Author's Response: :D :D YAY!!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 12:30 am Title: One

Great thanks :D But no worries if you get to them you get to them :)

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 11:19 pm Title: Twenty-Four

I'm so sorry to hear that people have been claiming your stories as their own. That scares me so much, the thought of someone taking something that I spend so much time writing and claiming it as their own.

I really hope that Bill and Tom can fix things between them. Bill is extremely pessimistic and Tom tries so hard to make him happy and feel loves and I feel like it falls on deaf ears. No matter what Tom does Bill is still upset.

I'm really fearful that Bill will die and I can't deal with that. Just letting you know in advance haha. So happy to see you back. I hope to see more updates of this soon.

Author's Response: It's so common and I can't see why anyone does it... same as stealing photos. :-/ Anyways, thank you very much and I am glad you're happy I've returned. xo

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 06:14 pm Title: Twenty-Four

First,thank you so much for the chapter :) and i understand how you feel when someone take your work .A guy from my art class stole my sculpture that took me weeks to finish,he erase my name and just wrote his on it,i was so angry.But yeah the teacher figure out it was mine and gave that jerk a zero :D

Author's Response: Wow, that's really horrible! People are so immature... blech. Anyway, thank you bunches!

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