Date: 11/30/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
so its gonna have an ugly ending.
Author's Response:
Ohh, define 'ugly' haha. It won't be that bad... I hope.
Date: 11/30/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh gosh, I kind of feel bad for Tom, but on the other hand he deserves what's coming at him...I can't wait to find out how Bill will finalize his 'revenge', hopefully he won't be the one that will get hurt again, but we'll see. I'm so excited to find out, you can't even imagine. You've built the story up perfectly, it's become more and more intense with each chapter. Briliant job!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you! I was hoping nobody would like this. I'm so happy and glad someone appreciate it like this! :D Thank you so much.
Date: 11/30/10 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm actually proud of Bill, staying strong through this whole charade & not falling for Tom's charms (when he actually uses them). I know Tom deserves what he is about to get but I have a feeling that i'm going to feel really really bad for him. I can't believe i've caught up & now I have to wait for the next chapter :( I can't believe Tom's about to get fucked...literally! & for no reason on top of that, since he's only doing it because he thinks Bill will stay with him. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Haha exactly! You don't have to wait too much, chapter 14 was already posted and the last chapter will be soon! Thank you :D
Date: 11/30/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cant wait to read the rest!
Date: 11/15/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Geil I can't wait to read it annnd I will beta as soon as I can! sorry I haven't had time to respond.
Author's Response:
It's alright! I know that you still read my messages, haha. :)
Date: 10/26/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
:O Really Bill.. *shakes head*
:D
Author's Response:
Hahaha oh Bill.
Date: 10/26/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
:O That's uber pretty! Well like always I loved the chapter. I was thinking a chapter about their past relationship would be awesome :O
Author's Response:
Thank you! Actually there is one. I think is chapter 14 or something. (:
Date: 10/26/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
the beach seen was so sweet, it almost makes me sad that tom is going to get screwed. maybe after he learns his lesson he can still be with Bill. Bill makes him want to a better person. We'll see how it all goes. thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I'll update soon don't go anywhere, lol. (:
Date: 10/24/10 07:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Bill is playing both teams and is gonna run Toms and his fathers buisness to the ground and then he is going to break Toms heart!!! on purpose!!! then he's going to go back with Georg
Author's Response:
My my, where did you get that idea from? Haha.
rnI see someone did pay really attention.
rnWe'll see ;)
Date: 10/08/10 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi
Tom is Bill's. I can say Bill has Tom in his hands... if he does not, he's really close to.
I can see a disster coming their way. Not only ofr Tom, but also for Bill. They both will end up pretty bad hurt.
Great chapter!!!
Velia
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, this is going to be really hard for both of them, you'll see. ;)
Date: 10/07/10 02:57 am Title: Chapter 11
yay! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
:D Thanks! Soon!
Date: 10/07/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 11
Hm...what did Tom prepare for Bill? Something to seduce him with no doubt! Anxious to read more.
Author's Response:
Haha ohh you're close! Yeah, well actually that's exactly it! :D
Date: 10/06/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
lol
I really can't imagine Bill doing golf
XD
Author's Response:
Hahaha me neither!
Date: 10/06/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Toms in love again with Bill but I'm scared he's going to hurt Bill again.
Author's Response:
Yeah, with Tom we never know :S
Date: 09/29/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Haha I'm here love :D Just off still sickish x.o I love this chapter for whatever reason and I shall try to get the new one done soon :D
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! :D Hope you feel better soon. =)
Date: 09/29/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
ya, Tom is stupid. I kind of think he deserves what is coming to him.
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad you're on Bill's side! :D
Date: 09/29/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm thinking that Tom is really stupid :O
Author's Response:
Haha, he so is.
Date: 09/29/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom needs to filter his mouth. I was wondering if we could have a few flashback of when there were together and a heartbroken Bill. I'm interested in see that. Anyways this is one of my favorite stories and I'm happy you updated!
Author's Response:
Actually that's a really good idea. The flashback about being together it won't be necessary in my opinion, since we'll get to see how nice is Tom when he likes sombebody ;) About the heartbroken Bill, I think I can make some of that, though, we'll get to see it a few chapters ahead. :D Thank you for following the story!
Date: 09/29/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom needs to filter his mouth. I was wondering if we could have a few flashback of when there were together and a heartbroken Bill. I'm interested in see that. Anyways this is one of my favorite stories and I'm happy you updated!
Date: 09/29/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
OHHHHHHHH
Author's Response:
Exactly :D