Date: 05/09/11 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ha I really want to know why Tom has left like that !
Date: 05/09/11 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's the first chap but I think it will be good.
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 02/24/11 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 15
True, revenge is sweet but Karma is a bitch that will chase after you. Love is not always to save a one sided relationship... 2 thumbs up...;D
Author's Response:
Exactly! ;D
Date: 01/04/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Ouch.. This isn't the way I imagined this ending. D: It's well written and it's really good. Just kinda makes me sad with the ending. :) But good fic.
Author's Response:
It's a different turn I guess. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 12/28/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hi.
It didn't ended as I firstly thought it would. And it is good. I found myself surprised to see the ending you had prepared for your story.
If Tom is based on a real person, then you are so lucky you got rid of him. Such a despicable person does not deserve any good person by his side for he wouldn't know how to appreciate her.
Great story, it kept me reading till the end.
See you soon.
Bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you agree with me :) Have a good day! :D
Date: 12/23/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok at first I had to collect my thoughts.
Am I the only one that is on Toms side? Because I understand why he did what he did?
I think the really bad guys are Bill, Georg and Gustav!
Bill do you think youre the only one that got hurt by a guy? The best way to forget is to move on. With revenge you are even under the level of that asshole.
The same for Gustav. Your Boss is an arse? Well nearly every Boss is! A mean Boss is no free ticket to fuck his finance! He could have loved her! It dosenīt matter if she is the biggest slut you have ever seen.
At Georgs character I thought about the Film Indecent Proposal. One million Doller for one night with your wife.
Georg used Bill to get the company, even if Bill wanted it. Like I said its on a low level.
What I traing to say is everyone makes mistakes!
And Tom would have lerned his lesson less cruel. To know Bill would never be his is hard for him for example.
And people never do anything without a meaning. Yes maybe Tom is that asshole who only loves himself or maybe he is just a little boy who canīt love of fear to get hurt if he lets anyone in? It dosenīt matter how good you think you know anyone, people change and they do thinks unexpectedly.
I know this is your story and you can do what you want, but what if this would be real life? I think the fifth world war would just be over. Revenge can never be a satisfaction! Its better to drop it and move on, belive me, I know what Iīm talking about!
bw sarah22
Author's Response:
I agree with you completely. First let me thank you for your critic. I think I mentioned something about this in one chapter, also if you remember the scene where Bill's at the beach with Tom, he somewhat thought on backing up about what he was about to do but he didn't want to think of morals, because he knew it was wrong.
I, as my personal point of view think revenge is so not the way to solve something, I think nobody should really make 'justice' upon another person by themselves even if the person really deserves it. I think that responsability doesn't belong to us, life will take care of it; Karma, it's simple Karma I believe in it 100% or God depending of your religion. In here Bill took revenge on his own wich is in real life wrong of course, but this is just fiction. Like I mentioned before I think I said in a chapter that this is not the way to confront our problems, but that's what Bill, the character, did. A person who was hurt and wanted to aleviate his pain. I'm sure life will get it back to him someday but we, as the weak human beings we are, are very very tempted to do things like this, because we have no patience in waiting for life to take care of that issue that is bothering us. That's why people kill other people, offend, rape, many many things.
This is not a story that you must follow as a life example, just a story that could happen in real life.
Thank you so much for your thoughts! I love hearing other people's opinions :)
Date: 12/22/10 03:07 am Title: Chapter 15
I absolutely loved the story line, GREAT job.
The ending was meaningful.. a bit sad but hey that's how life goes :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you thought it was meaningful, that's what I really wanted to transmit :D
Date: 12/21/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well, I always want happy endings, but this was very well done. Thank you for finishing it and staying true to your story. You did a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! yeah I admit I like happy endings too. And thanks to you for following the story from the begining! :D
Date: 12/21/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aww. Being a hardcore twincester, I never thought I'd like a story where Bill and Tom didn't get together, but I really liked this :D
I DO feel sorry for Tom, but that's slightly overridden by Bill's feelings. So yup, I'm satisfied with this ending. The bad/evil people need to be punished. But in a way where they learn their lesson, which I think happened here.
Author's Response:
That makes me really happy, the last chapter was making me really nervous haha. I love twincest and love stories too, but sometimes just it can't be done haha. Thank you so much :D
Date: 12/21/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
well well well...as you say-not everything has a happy ending-reality doesnt work that way! Loved the story and the way Bills revenge was set up...well done!!
Author's Response: Exactly, life's not easy haha. Thank you for sticking with the story until the end!
Date: 12/21/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
The only thing I know to say at the moment is that this is fantastically amazing & u've done an excellent job on this. I'm sry that u've actually had to go through something like this & sadly i've been there before too. I absolutely love this from beginning to end =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yeah, that's life, but we must always keep going :)
Date: 12/21/10 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh how I've waited for this big reveal! I can't even imagine this story with a happy ending, so I like the way it turned out. Though there is a small part of me that longs for it to have a happy end but yes, like you said, it's about what should happen. I kind of feel bad for Tom, but he got what he deserves. This story has kept me on my toes since the first chapter I've read and every update made my day. Thank you for this briliant story. It was really nice to read a FF that deviates from a typical Bill&Tom story. You're really good at creating such situation, and I hope we'll read more of this sort from you. Thank you!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for your words, I was a little afraid that people might not like it, so I'm really glad you did. It makes me so happy to receive reviews like this one, thank you so much. It means a lot ot me :D
Date: 12/12/10 03:22 am Title: Chapter 14
ouch, only one more chapter. no happy ending for Tom i guess. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
rnYes, I guess Tom is not gonna be very happy. :X
Date: 12/09/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
waaaaahhhh!! this story started with a broken heart..,and will end with another broken heart? sooo sad..,but if that's how the story should end..,i'll just prepare a bucket for my tears for the last chap..,love this story..,i hope there'll be a sequel..,
-i b29; twincest-
Author's Response:
Haha, oh you're right! Broken heart + broken heart. Mmm, not that is a good thing. But yes, we could say that Bill had a goal and he accomplished it. I think that's the way it should be, you don't expect for Bill to stay with a person like Tom do you? Haha. But anyhow thank you so much for your words.
rnA sequel? I swear that never crossed my mind! Now I seem to have a lot of ideas thanks to you! I'll definitely think about it. But if I do it, it'll be in a future, not right now. I'm very busy at the moment, but thank you!
Date: 12/07/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Damn. You really make me feel bad about Tom. I'll never forgive you ;P
Author's Response:
Haha, aw man,..
Date: 12/07/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, the ending is quite sad, but it's a difference from all the "happily ever after" stories around. I feel kinda sorry for Tom, and Bill were a real ass! But it was a good story none-the-less, though I think I'll stick with the "happily ever after"s ;P Don't misunderstand, it was INDEED a good story!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't normally write stories with no happy endings haha, but somehow this one turned out to be quite different. But I liked it this way and I'm glad people liked it too, though I understand people like fluff stories more, I do too, I admit haha. Thank you so much for your words! :D
Date: 12/07/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't want this to end, but God im ready for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It'll be up next week :)
Date: 12/07/10 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes it was too rough! But I loved it xD Although I wanted to cry for Tom, I was crying for Bill. That was just heartbreaking to read. It's good to know that Tom was reminded of what he had done. I hope everything works out for them tho. Even if they don't end up together, I hope at least they will part on decent terms. I love this & I can't believe there's only one chapter left. Anyways, can't wait to read it!
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you loved it then, it makes me feel less worried. Thank you for liking the story! It makes me so happy people appreaciate it. (:
Date: 12/01/10 03:15 am Title: Chapter 13
no happy ending then?
Author's Response:
Happy endings are relative. It depends on what you want to happen and what should happen. ;)