Date: 08/18/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
I def like bill better at this point... I love his whole being a bitch but not being obvious about it thing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 08/18/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't choose! I can't believe Tom is so grabby with Bill! Lol! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! And wait! Tom has way more to give, like they say, 'this is just the begining' :D
Date: 08/18/10 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
ooh this is a VERY interesting. A bit weird on Tom's part and somewhat confusing, but I like it a lot nonetheless. I wonder what Bill got up his sleeve, I imagined he'd react differently on their encounter but I like where it's going, definitely not predictable. I'm really really really looking forward to the next chapter, you really impressed me!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, I'm excited too, haha.
Next chapter will be up really soon! :D
Date: 08/18/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love them both even if tom is a bit of an idiot. did tom ever acually feel love for bill or just a bed buddie? i like the second banner much better. please update soon.
Author's Response:
Ohh, you will know everything, just wait.
Date: 08/15/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Ugh now I'm going insane trying to figure out what the hell happened to Tom ;-;
Date: 08/11/10 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1
It's interesting so far. What's that song called?
Author's Response:
Thank you!. Oh, never thought someone would be interested. It's a translated version of Laura Pausini's "Se Fue" (:
Date: 08/10/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wait, i don't understand something. Does Bill know that this guy that broke his heart lives in NY and is that the reason why he is going?And what about Georg? Does he know about this and is he okay with it? And why is he hung up and is he trying to accomplish. I don't get it at all. Does Bill want to hurt this guy or to confront him and have him explain why he left.
I know I have a lot of questions but this is only a few, I love the story so far and I think that its a very good start, it just that I don't really understand some things and I hope that you can answer my questions without really giving away what really going to happen in the story!! I would very much appreciate it and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
It's ok, I love questions! though the first question will be answered in the next chapter, because of course there's a reason Bill is going to NY. Georg, I guess we don't show many of Georg, but you can see he's totally ok with it, since he personally got the plane tickets for Bill. Who's hung up? Bill? let's say because after so much time, he had the oportunity to do something about it, and as the story goes you would find out what is Bill's plan about. I hope I have answered properly, (: If you have any more questions please ask!
Date: 08/10/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this looks very promising. The idea is interesting and your writing style is very good. You're lacking a few punctuation marks, but it's nothing that can't be improved by finding a beta. I'll be looking forward to more for sure.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'll be more careful next time. (:
Date: 08/10/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
For this being your very first story on here, it's very good so far and I like your writing style c:
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you! Next update will be up shortly. (:
Date: 08/10/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
can this story have a happy ending. recently i read a story that hinted towards a tom and bill together ending but instead tom married a girl and left bill heart broken. please happy ending. i don't think my poor heart can take it. please update soon. i'm sure this is going to by a magnificent story.
Author's Response:
It might have a happy ending, depends if it satisfy you or not.
I would be upset too about the plot you described, was it a het story? In that case it make sense haha, jk.