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Reviewer: chaoticminds Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

oh my god thank you Decimus!!!! u saved her life....xD i want to no more about him too and why he doesnt count and why he sat in the corner... anyway...cant wait for more...so post asap ...cause ya loves me...and if ya didnt already no this is kaitii-beth scene kid from Ning xD hahah anyway..more soon hun xD
xxx

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 8

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!
Wow, all that hassle over miscommunication!?!?! .... WOW! lol.
This is amazing!! I really like a plot ... well I like everything about it!! I'm really hating the 'people' who wanted her dead! All I want to do now is going up to them and say "HA! In your face bitch!" lol ...yh....=P
More soon please!
xoxox

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

“Well let’s just say I’m liking your Hello Kitty panties.” - That was hilarious. This was another great chapter sweetie and I will patiently wait for the next one.

Reviewer: AliceBravissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: By Your Side

Awww, so sweet! ^^ How sweet of Bill being by her side! Please more soon! :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 7: By Your Side

Another fantabulous chapter my sweet. I love this story. I'm so glad Bill was there for her to cry on when she needed someone. I feel so bad for her. What an awful predicament to be in. More very soon please.

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter 7: By Your Side

Wow ....... I would have ran for my life if I knew they were going to kill me!
Bill is such a sweetheart to her, especially since everyone wants her dead!
Though I hope Bill is there 'cause he cares for her and not 'cause he's there to trap her!!!
O'mazing chappie!! ..... It's Stupid that it's mainly me reviewing! >=/ hmm
More soon please!!!
P.s LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 6

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
"Letting her get to know everybody before you poke and prod her eh, Cain?" Maeve said smirking.
"P-Poke and prod...?" I didn't think I heard her right. Wasn't that a weird expression for experimenting on?
"Didn't they tell you?" Tigris growled at me. "They're going to take you apart. It's all in their plan to destroy the machine."
Haha best part!!
They don't really like her, do they? "/
Ahhh can't wait for more!!
xoxox

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE Aww play nice Bill!
Haha her mouth is always getting her into trouble!! Tut, tut! Now see what you've gotten yourself into Maggie, someone's trying to strangle you! -.-'
More soon please!
xoxox

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the .... =/ hmm what would you call it .. a shout out I guess xD
I just LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this chappie ... I guess 'cause she meets everyone! (Tom is hilarious! lil' grump-a-rump!)
Have I mentioned that I love this! .. Of course I have, how could I not?!?!
More soon!!!
xoxox

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!
I think I'm going to start it like that all the time 'cause I really do love this!
I just love the ending to this one, it's so funny .. haha worried about a maths test instead of the 'creatures' and being a machine AND being adopted! ohh, silly xD
More soon!!
xoxox

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!
As you know I just LOVE things all supernatual 'nd stuff it gets me all hyper and happy! ...it's the world I think I would like to live in .... in a way!!!
Did I mention that I LOVE!! xD
xoxox

Reviewer: Ashleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha how sad am I keeping my name the same on here aswell! .... but I'm not 'cause I'm not the only one! ^__^ (sugar rush)
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
MORE MORE MORE!!!
xoxox
p.s can't wait to see what the 'dirty' stuff is, 'cause it has to be 'dirty' 'cause then theres no point of putting it on here if there isn't.... I'll shut up now! ^_^

Author's Response: Lmfao I'll post the next chapter today maybe ;)rnAnd it isn't dirty as in SEXUALLY dirty... Well maybe a LITTLE bit ;) but it's more like violence and murder and death and horrible things :D

Reviewer: Horseluvr14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

I didn't think I'd like this story. But, I LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: kcrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

woah very dramatic i like it keep it up.

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