Date: 08/13/10 11:16 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
I really love where this story is going so far. Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to more :D
Date: 08/13/10 11:14 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
this is really good i hope you post soon :)
Date: 08/13/10 08:30 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
oh how I love it when they start out on hating each other's guts.. -dreamily wanders off in kaulitz-bliss-
it makes everything so much more intense.. haha, I love Bill's apprehension against the trumper empire (and I LOVE how you constructed that) Complete smart, free-spirit of a teen with a weirdo for a parent, it's such a wonderful combination.
Spicing up the plot, are we? Well, I'm looking foreward to it, I love this so much!
~Dawn
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing girl!
Date: 08/13/10 08:13 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
I like the mood and sassyness you've set for the story! It's really dynamic and interesting and I look forward to more! I like Bill's characterization in this story: he's rebellious and reluctant when it comes to his father and his empire.
Date: 08/13/10 06:50 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
*enter tom*
woot woot! thanks for the great update !
so much to love about this chapter!
take care & im looking forward to wednesday X
Date: 08/13/10 04:59 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
“Um excuse me,” I started out slowly, “Maybe you’re lost but this is Gordon Trumper’s mansion. 50 Cent’s place is down the road.”
I laughed so hard after reading this. It was hilarious!! I love Bill in here, he's so independent and seems to always forge his own way instead being a spoiled rich kid. So not like his dad. Now I need to wash my brain...the imagery the dining room...gaudy...eugh.
Author's Response: Oh I know right? I had envisioned it to be like one of those gaudy dining rooms you seen on Cribs that are way over the top and you sit there thinking "Like hell you use this room"
Date: 08/13/10 04:22 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Haha
The way Georg and Gustav talked to Bill was hilarious haha
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
*squeals*
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Gustav and Georg are Tom's main men in this fic... you'll see in future chapters that they're all tight. Poor Bill's the oddball out
Date: 08/13/10 04:18 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
this is a good fic i love it please update soon lolz :))
Date: 08/13/10 03:14 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Great story! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 08/13/10 03:04 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
I get the feeling that the next two weeks aren't going to be smooth for Bill with the meeting he and Tom have already had. It'll certainly make Gordon's show interesting to say the least.
Author's Response: Hahaha there's drama up ahead be warned
Date: 08/13/10 02:27 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
XD I can't believe Tom goes to a prep school! That was a big shock!
I love the attitude Bill got with Tom, too. That was really awesome.
I have a soft spot for Tom so I really want to know what his problem is!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
As you can see I am terrible with reviews so... yeah. :D Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter!! XD
Author's Response: Naw you're great at reviews! I mean after you all you reviewed!! lol Yes Tom goes to Prep, a very high level prestigious one at that. Working on final editing for the next chapter so it'll be up by Wednesday! :)
Date: 08/12/10 01:11 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
Sure no problem :)
Date: 08/11/10 10:58 pm Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
XD The only that jumped out to me was at the very end of the chapter. Er now I can't remember what it said XD
Author's Response: Oh that's okay! I make spelling/grammar errors all the time it can't be helped! But next time when you see Thames can you quote them for me in the review so I can fix it
Date: 08/11/10 07:25 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
This is really interesting, seems like it could be a lot of fun to read and find out what happens. The promise of Tom bottoming is what brought me to this story, other than the fact that you wrote it. You should know that I adore your work. -blushes- I'm your number one fanboy!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! You know this will be my first fic ever where Tom bottoms! I normally like him in the dominant position but he'll still be a cocky a boy in this it's just he likes it up the ass xD
Date: 08/11/10 06:31 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
Interesting start I can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 08/11/10 05:24 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
i really liked the chapter, i really got into it so i cant wait to read the next one :]
Date: 08/11/10 04:56 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
I'm curious to see what happens but careful you just mixed up some words near the end.
Author's Response: I did? Which ones? I never have a beta for any of my stories so all spelling errors are mine 0_o
Date: 08/11/10 04:22 am Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
yeey i like it! :D *tracking*
Date: 08/10/10 11:46 pm Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
I like it. :]
Date: 08/10/10 10:48 pm Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
I love it! I want more!!!