Date: 04/11/11 04:44 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
billy a blondie? aww cute
ugh, hating gordon. and tom's a douche, but jeez georg and gustav, oh cool, don't mess it up, it's ostrich! wtffff
Date: 04/11/11 04:27 pm Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
hah hope Tom finds out... Bill shouldn't be playing with anybodys feelings like that. He'll dump James, Tom'll forgive him and everything will be good :) Oh and he'll dump Gordon too.
Date: 04/11/11 03:35 pm Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
hahah this seeems really funny. LOL oh poor little bill...
Date: 04/11/11 10:38 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
Yes you are, Bill. Now you're gonna lose everyone if you don't watch out o: (I've never been good at pep talks, I just get people depressed, obviously :'D) Anyway I've started reading this this morning, got interrupted by school and then started reading again immediately and I really like it :D Shit poor Bill having such a dad D:
Author's Response: Hahah no no your pep talk made me laugh! I'm sure dramatic/angsty/MarySue-ish/teenage/Bill would agree. I love writing him like some frustrated teenage girl but then having the narrator constantly reminding himself that he is not a girl and saying things like "Oh my god! Now I sound like some lovestruck teenage girl!" xD too funny
Date: 04/11/11 10:19 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
OH SHIT! Why did he go? Tom was trying so hard!
Author's Response: Ahh Bill is very confused and stupid as most teens are in their youth *sounds wise* plus it adds for some major drama. The drama does not stop here, this hurdle will be overcome, only to encounter yet another one
Date: 04/11/11 10:00 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
D: Oh shit Bill~
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)rnYeah Bill is in some serious trouble now
Date: 04/11/11 05:28 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
OH HELL YES!!! DRAMA!!! oh i hope he gets caught!!! Give him hell Tom! Give him hell!!! lol cant wait for your next update!
Author's Response: So very glad that you're liking the drama! Well there is more to come! This is just a small hurdle in Bill's hectic life that will be followed by a major blow up 0_o
Date: 04/11/11 05:10 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
oops Bill. He has a problem now. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: No problem! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/11/11 01:34 am Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
I'm very upset with Bill right now. He deserves to be caught. I mean, things with Tom were going great, and he didn't even tell Tom about his doubts or anything, he just went behind his back and went out on a date with another guy simply because he was so sure things with Tom were to good to be true...silly silly Bill. I can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: More hopefully will be coming quickly!... and yes Bill is a fool in this
Date: 04/10/11 11:54 pm Title: Episode Ten: Total Drama Island
omg omg omg well he could just say he was hanging with a old friend....sort of a white lie
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I know this update was like wayyy late but hey I tried. The next one hopefully will be much quicker (like next Monday 4/18) but no guarantees
Date: 04/03/11 04:49 pm Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
This is really great so far! A very original idea! I don't want Bill to go out tomorrow though. Cheating alays makes me so uncomfortable, and it seems really out of character for him. He should tell Tom about it, or tell James he's gotten back with Tom or something.
Date: 04/03/11 01:06 pm Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
*bangs head* he really needs to choose!! of course it has to be Tommi though, lol That James kid looks a little fishy....
Date: 03/08/11 10:59 pm Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
tee-hee this was a good chapter and the ending was >_<
i loved it and cant wait for the next one! :D
Date: 02/25/11 12:30 am Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
...I think now would be a good time to cancel dinner plans with James.
Date: 02/24/11 03:03 pm Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
I want Bill and Tom to stay together. I hope james fucks off.
Date: 02/24/11 02:47 pm Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
Hehehe. I am quite enjoying this..story..*shifty eyes*. The leap to a romantic relationship was a bit too early, but hey! I don't give a cow. c:
Date: 02/24/11 02:25 am Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
Thanks for the update! Tom is very cute when asking Bill not to break up with him. I love that the shop got super busy too, that's too funny.
Date: 02/23/11 05:28 am Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
ooohhh tom is going to get hurt!!! great chapter btw hope you dont keep us waiting too long!
Date: 02/23/11 05:09 am Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
This is very good!! I love it....
Date: 02/23/11 01:45 am Title: Episode Nine: A Twist in My Tale
Awwwww...tom is a manwhore! lmao