Date: 08/18/10 11:59 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
i luv'ed this chap, god kitty is soo annoying lolz but finn is cool but hopes he drops kitty :) he can do better, and tom/bill convo funny :)) kepp up the good work
Author's Response: Finn?!?? Dump?!??! Kitty?!?!
Wow that's he first time anyone's commented on the outside relationship of Finn and Kitty. Haha Team Finn!
Date: 08/18/10 09:47 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Ew Tom xD
Date: 08/18/10 07:25 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Lmfao loved the pool scene, hillarious.
Date: 08/18/10 05:58 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
I love this! This is such a great plot :) I'm looking forward to more!! XD
Date: 08/18/10 03:42 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Bill has a very shitty life, poor boy u_U
Author's Response: lol I love your comment and Yes Bill does have a "very shitty life"
Date: 08/18/10 02:50 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
I. Love. This. Fic. I was having the shittiest day ever, and this whole story just brightened up my day. I mean, it's wonderful! It's definitely in my top five of fave fics so far - and it's only a few chapters in! I can't wait to see what happens next. *Favorites*
Author's Response: Glad I could cheer you up!
Date: 08/18/10 01:24 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Haha the end was really funny
XD
Author's Response: lol Tom's such a boy in this I love it!
Date: 08/18/10 12:49 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
The ending was hilarious!!!!!! I love it!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens!! And i hope whatever happens is good. And Tom and Bill seems to get along perfectly.
:D
Date: 08/18/10 12:39 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
-giggles like mad-
classic Tom. i love the absolute shamelessness here. Poor Bill, but I'm sensing some attraction coming from Tom, so it'll be fine in the long run (Hopefully)
and ah, do I love your writing style. Bill's thoughts are hilarious and I do feel sorry that he has to live like this.
TOM TO THE RESCUE, please?!
And the love in the greenhouse was awesome too.
Can't wait for monday :)
~Dawn
Date: 08/18/10 11:58 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
hahahahahahaha!!
omg, tom wooow!
amazing!
Date: 08/18/10 11:01 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
That was great. Hahahah xD
Update soon!
Author's Response: Updates are on Monday
Date: 08/18/10 10:25 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Love this story you are doing such a good job!
Author's Response: Ahhhh *music from the heavens* you are my first reviewer for this chapter. lol don't mind me I'm always like this with first reviewers.
Thanks so much sweetie! I'm glad that so many people have liked it
Date: 08/17/10 08:07 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
OHHH It's Wednesday now XD Did I catch the story at the right time??? lol I'm already so caught up in it
Author's Response: I'll post it at around 17:30 how about that? I'm at work now *shh* don't tell anyone I'm using the computer for this site xD
Date: 08/17/10 07:56 pm Title: Episode One: A Day in the Life of Bill
I'm deeply intrigued by this. I've never read anything of yours before, but I really enjoy your writing style. I'm going to start tracking this story so I can go along for the ride :]
Author's Response: Yay new reader! So glad you decided to come along for the ride and leave a review! Feel free to leave more in the future on later chapters :P
Date: 08/17/10 11:25 am Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Hahaha poor Bill!
I wasn't expecting the other boys to come into the story this way, but I really like it!
Can't wait till Wednesday!
XD
Date: 08/16/10 09:26 am Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
kso, this review is like, for the first and 2nd chapter!
oh god ide hate bills life!
dundundunnn toms staying for 2 weeks ;)
Author's Response: Aww it'll get better as the story goes on...but lots and lots of drama! God I love writing this story
Date: 08/15/10 03:04 am Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
-hugs you- I loved this! The only thing that is missing is any kind of click between Bill and Tom, but that might take awhile unless Tom starts flirting out of nowhere. I look forward to Wednesday, I'm sure it'll rock!
Author's Response: Tom has his ways to weasel into someone's heart ;)
Date: 08/15/10 01:00 am Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Stupid ass hole Tom XD
Date: 08/14/10 11:54 am Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Oh, I love this. What surprised me the most? Bill's blonde hair. I hope Gustav and Georg might end up being a little nicer to Bill now they know who he is, although they're still arrogant.
Author's Response: Yeah Bill would look smokin' with dirty blonde hair. Not platinum but dirty blonde like what Tom's dreadlocks used to be colored
Date: 08/13/10 11:53 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
UPDATE!
Author's Response: Hahaha you have to wait until Wednesday silly!!!