Date: 08/23/10 05:59 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
I LOVED IT! great chapter & you deserve every single one of those 912 reads..
awww i liked all the friendly banter at the end of the chapter between Bill& Tom..
take care & please update soon X
Author's Response: YEAH! I am very proud of those 912 reads lol
Thanks for your review.. and for favoriting this story. Yes I AM that creepy to check who favorites my fics and yes I AM so very grateful that you've always been a consistent reader of mine *hugs*
Date: 08/23/10 05:03 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
I liked to see that at times, Tom isn't a complete jerk. So far it seems like nearly everything in Bill's life is out of his control, the only thing otherwise being his beat up truck. He doesn't have a say in much.
I went to Disneyland last month. Thanks for the memories! Although I would have enjoyed it way more had I been 10 instead of 20.
Author's Response: Nah Tom means Bill no harm in this. What I find most funny is that people who actually live in California don't go to DisneyLand that much... I mean if I lived in Cali I'd be like "Yeah DisneyLand" every single day haha
Date: 08/23/10 04:53 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
Tom is so annoying *rolls eyes*
I feel really bad for Bill =(
Author's Response: Aww Tomi is hurt by your comment *puppy dog eyes* you don't enjoy Tom in this fic?
Date: 08/23/10 04:27 pm Title: Episode Two: A Phantom Reunion
Too bad =P Two weeks with Mr. Arrogant !
Date: 08/23/10 03:32 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
I love Tom...he's great...poor Bill though, putting up with that...
Author's Response: Hahaha everyone's review consists of something along the lines of "poor Bill" :P
Date: 08/23/10 02:43 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
hello! new reader here!
damn. this story is so funny. i really enjoy reading it. it's very wellwritten which makes it easy to read, so thanks for that! (: i like the love/hate relationship between tom and bill. i really like tom's character in this story, and i especially like how he tease bill. there's definitely some attraction between the two of them and i can't wait to see what it will come down to. more soon i hope!
Author's Response: Hello New Reader,
Brilliant to have you here and for stopping by to leave a little review! I'm glad that you're liking the story so far and the Bill/Tom dynamic! Can't wait to hear from you more in further chapters (which *nudge nudge* means feel free to leave more reviews in the future lol)
A totally random side note here. I just love your user name! Haha names like that always make me laugh like "InsertFunnyNameHere" or "InsertWittyUserName"
Date: 08/23/10 02:41 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
Hahaha LOL I loved the G's reaction when they found out bout Bill :D
And when James thought Tom was Bill's boyfriend XD
Author's Response: Haha poor Bill, James thinks Tom's his boyfriend, and James gone off dating someone else
Date: 08/23/10 02:21 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
lmao who would take a shit in someone's pool? Bill is crazy to think that XD
Author's Response: Don't even joke.. I used to have this guy friend that was a total slob, like seriously really bad, and one day at my friends house he just offloaded right in her pool
Date: 08/23/10 01:41 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
I love how Bill and Tom's "relationship" takes one step forward and one step back!
Letting Bill hold his t-shirt, being more polite when Bills asks for it, getting him food (thus making him feel better), pretending to be his boyfriend... oh Tom... :D
Then he has to be an ass to Bill, but I think Bill secretly likes having his pigtails pulled.
I'm really liking your story and I get all happy when I see an update.
I'm not asking you to 'post moar sooon' because I see you posting as fast as you can; just know that I'm one more person eagerly awaiting more of you delightful story.
Author's Response: That was such a great mental image! "Bill secretly likes having his pigtails pulled"!!! I'm glad you like the story so far! I just love Bill and Tom's relationship in this!
Date: 08/23/10 01:14 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
Now, that was funny!!=D
I hope you update the next story as soon as possible, like tomorrow or the day after!! =P
Author's Response: Update is on Friday :)
Date: 08/23/10 12:15 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
so James' date was tall, thin, had long black hair, wore make-up and looked like a girl... why do i have a feeling that Bill will be dying his long blond hair black very very soon? =P
loved the chap! the Gs are so fucking dense =P haha xD
Author's Response: lol yeah I tossed the G's in for a little comedy! And maybe your prediction is correct, after all many people commented saying they were shocked that Bill was blonde, maybe there's a reason for that ;D
Date: 08/23/10 12:04 pm Title: Episode Four: Rollercoasters and Middle School Crushes
Oh my gosh. I frickin' love Bill and Tom's relationship xD Fuckin' hilarious.
Update I want!!!
Author's Response: Yayyyy you were the first to review for this chapter! And also the person that bumped my story up to 60 reviews!!! The next update will be on Friday have patience lol it'll come
Date: 08/22/10 01:10 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
ha ha like this story it has so much potental :) i cannot wait for your next update!
Date: 08/20/10 12:31 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Tom is rather disgusting. But yay Bill for keeping Finn's secret!
Date: 08/19/10 04:12 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
So Tom's flirting, eh? Who'd have thunk he'd find our little Bill attractive after all that fuss
Author's Response: Mmm you'll see Tom may seem pretty simple in this story far but there's a lot more to him. The tension is still there
Date: 08/19/10 04:08 pm Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
Oh... my goodness. I am blushing so much right now. "Tom is such a boy" does not even begin to describe this. :D
This was exceptionally sad at first, I felt so bad for Bill, but then you changed dynamic with Tom... that's really clever writing. c:
I can't wait for Monday. Thank you for timely updates, I can't wait to see what happens! Great job!!
Date: 08/19/10 09:02 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
i lalalalalalalalaalalalallooooooove this story ! please continue :)
Author's Response: Update's on Monday! :)
Date: 08/19/10 07:45 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
-laughs hard- That was awesome! Tom was so gross, but Bill caught on to the flirting. I hope Tom keeps that up, not the gross shit but the flirting-with-Bill stuff.
Author's Response: lol aww u don't like Gross!Tom? Hehehe but he's such a Bro in this :3
Date: 08/19/10 02:47 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
I don't understand Tom. Not in the least. I was laughing so hard for this one, though.
Author's Response: lol don't worry the tension is still there more drama in the future to come
Date: 08/19/10 12:43 am Title: Episode Three: Pool Shenanigans and Temper Tantrums
:D gah! i think i really like your Bill character in this one :D