Date: 08/10/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww, so touching. I hope that never happends. :(
>>Yet all that love isn't comparable to the love I still feel for Tomi.
That was my fav sentence. It really sounds like Bill.
This fic was short and loveable. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks. I was trying to sound as much like Bill as possible.
Date: 08/09/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats really good
can you write a sequel?
Author's Response: I can try, may take a whilebut I can try. . .
Date: 08/09/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
that is super sad, super cute and really good!
Author's Response: Thankss.
Date: 08/09/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
short, to the point, not too flouncy with emotion (if you get what i mean:/)
i liked it! i liked it a lot!! :D good job!!
Fern xx
Author's Response: Lol, yes, and thankss!
Date: 08/09/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very short, yet incredibly sweet. I say you did wonderful for you first story. *_* Very nice really. Major character death is hard to grasp that emotion and feeling of emptiness... I think you did fine on that, especially for a first story.
When the G's told Bill to get over Tom I was like DX and wanted to cry!
Lovely job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. =) It was pretty hard to figure out what to do with the end but since it was mostly inspired by the song Phantomrider, I decided to take it in that direction.rnrnThanks!