YES, ADAM, IT'S WORTH IT *shakes him*

*cough* Anyway. Amazing as usual *_*

I love it! Tom and Adam are so worried for Bill. I hope they will be good "parents" for him. They both love him so much. I look forward to the next chapter. J. :o)

O.o

Okay, all of a sudden there are three chapters in the sequel to Sell Your Soul. When did that happen? I don't think I need to reiterate that I think you update freakishly fast... but I will. My god woman, you write fast.

First thing first, Tom. That he admitted that he was being selfish in regards to Bill and Adam was a huge step forwards for him - I personally think that even though he's acknowledged it he still will have the same tendencies, which is definitely exemplified by his hatred for Adam. Whenever I see Bill and Tom interact I can't help but be amazed by their relationship. Live, in interviews, and just when you see them in pictures. Their relationship is amazing, and I think that you've done a really good job of making Tom's reaction to his brother being in love with someone, and sharing something so intense with someone besides his twin. I get jealous when friends go off with a guy for too long, so I can only imagine what it would be like to have a twin fall head over heels in love. I like that he's trying to include Adam: inviting him to stay, etc... It makes his and Bill's relationship seem deeper and more meaningful somehow. Maybe because Tom's willing to live with someone he admittedly hates for six weeks just so that his twin is happy. Bill and Tom really need to have some twin time - cuddle and have a heart to heart or something. And that's all beside Tom having to deal with Bill's withdrawal. Like, on top of the issues he has with Adam. I have a relatively close friend who's trying to stop heroin, so I have some sort of understanding of how hard it is to watch someone go through withdrawal. Poor Tom. :( But good for Tom for taking over Bill's work for him. Hopefully some of that will stick WHEN Bill gets better. The kid deserves a break.

Adam seems a little bit to... something. I'm really not sure. He almost seems perfect, if that's the right word. There's no way that someone could go through this whirlwind romance, find out that the person they're completely in love with is an addict, has an eating disorder, and then lands in the hospital, and not have some emotional effects (other than worry). He'd just breakdown eventually. Who knows... he might next chapter for all I know. All I'm saying is that it would be unrealistic for his to continue so emotionally drained for to long. Even a break down in the shower with Bill would make him seem more human to me. Might make Bill realize how sick he actually is too. That was really my one issue with this - that Adam seemed to much like superman. I still love how you portray him though, it makes me want to like the real Adam Lambert ... until I see/hear him, lol. You've really made him work with Bill, and their relationship is beautiful to see played out. I'm definitely rooting for them.

I still, like I did with Sell Your Soul, feel as though this story isn't so much about Bill than about the people around him, and how they interact with him and with each other. An addict, I hate to say it, is predictable. They'll have insane mood swings, cravings, and will feel horrendous during withdrawal. Therefore, Bill's a bit predictable in this. That's not a bad thing - it's just how it is. If he didn't act like an addict going through withdrawal the story wouldn't seem realistic at all. No matter, you've portrayed him wonderfully, and I really felt for him. Literally - I was fighting off a migraine when I read this. I can definitely sympathise with Bill there, considering I failed.

Tom and Adam's conference with their managers was great. Even if they hate each other, they work well together. And good for Bill for agreeing to let the media (and therefore the entire world) know about his relationship with Adam. I swear, enough of Tokio Hotel's fans fantasise about Bill and Tom (or other guys - Bushido, etc...) that they'd be accepting... and probably fantasise ;)

Apsenniel

I adored the dogs! So sweet.

Author's Response: I'm also juggling King Of Kingz along with this, so I agree I'm doing DAMN good XD I don't tell the characters what to do, they just kind of do what they want and I write it from afar- so even I am a little concerned as to why Tom and Adam are so 'okay' at this point in time. But I think the last two weeks for them have been so overwhelming that to some extent they've just shut down. I feel like Adam is just going on auto-pilot or playing completely ignorant of the reprocussions of everything he's done (because if you think about it, since meeting Bill his life HAS been ruined and Bill is dragging him into a place that he won't have an easy time digging himself out of) he's not caring about anything at all- like nothing but Bill exists and that tunnel vision just won't go away, because in that tunnel vision he finds peace- it's the focus on ONE thing that makes him feel like everything in his life is okay when it obviously isn't. He just wants to pretend Bill is still the perfect person he always imagined him to be- like self-denial. Bill is somewhat predictable in his tendencies, but he also has a willpower in him that I love writing about. Sometimes he IS strong enough to control things he normally shouldn't be able to, if only for the sake of someone or something. Unfortunately in this fic, that willpower alone won't be enough keep his fists at his sides and keep him from getting violent with the one he loves most. It might just take hitting Adam's breaking point to make Bill realize how much he's messed up. I don't want to add too many spoilers. But I'm really glad you decided to join us for the sequel! This one will be a little longer than SYS, so give it time if it doesn't 'sit' right just yet.

This is beautiful. The relationships between everyone is amazing. It was nice to have Tommy in this for a bit. Please update soon.

*dreamy sigh* ooooooh.

Look up 'genius' in the dictionary and there's a picture of you.

Gah, I'm so glad they're admitting it to the public. I love this story so far. I was never a huge Adam fan, but the way you write this pairing makes them seem like they're meant for each other. I really, really love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Man, that was intense. Nicely done!

Whoa...so intense. They have a long road to recovery and hopefully everyone will get along to help the process-especially hope Tom call's a truce and help's Adam with Bill's recovery, he's going to need both of them very badly, just in different way's! Off to read chapter 2...

Again. Lots of love for you, and this story. Once I get all the Glamnation, Glittery Adam Lambert Vids up on youtube, I will link you. I'm glad you liked the other one.

Author's Response: YES! My day is made, now.

I just read SYS a few days ago. I liked it a lot so I was happy to start reading this one.

I don't know how to write this in english, sometimes it's hard to explain what I really mean. Only thing bothering in SYS was Tom. Sometimes he sounded/seemed like jealouse ex-boyfriend or something. Maybe it was just me, you know twincester all the way... Tom/Bill is THE couple for me, I just found B/A a few days ago too. It's hard for me to read Bill with anybody else but when I found about Adam... What can I say, he is perfect for Bill too ;) Maybe that was the reason why it was difficult for me to read sometimes. Tom is just his brother, Tom is just his brother... xD

I don't mean anything bad, I know it just in my head ;) You write very well and I like your stories.

I'm just happy that in this fic things are better between Adam, Bill and Tom, even though they are not best friends. Maybe it will be easier for me to learn to read Tom as Bill's brother xD

I really can't wait to read what will happen!

xx

Author's Response: Tom is a very complex and tricky character in these stories. The more I write with him the more he seems jealous- but of Bill, Adam or both of them I'm still not sure. There are moments when he seemed to switch between those three options or decides to hate everyone. It's hard for me to write him as a 'brother' too. I've never written a story besides SYS in which the twins weren't together, so this is kind of new to me too! I hope you keep reading and enjoy this just as much~