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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter 7

hmmmm...Tom is definitely crossing that line. Its very hard to tell in this story if his feelings are deep twin bond feelings, or twindcesty feelings. I'm glad Bill got some comfort though. Even though I agree with Tom going through his room and the whole house, I can see how that would be traumatic for both of them. Thanks so much for the speedy updates. I don't know how you can possibly write this well and this fast, but am grateful for it. =)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow, Adam's memories of leaving Bill are heartbreaking! I say good for Tom though. The first thing they should have done was go through the house and get rid of everything. I'm glad he lost it. its good for him, if not for Bill.

Reviewer: Pbubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 09:39 am Title: Chapter 7

I loved how you wrote Tommy the way he interacts with Adam is just how I always pictured him to act hope he will be in another part of the story

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 6

This song reminds me of this story. Everytime.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9MjoKPZKq8

how appropriate is it that it's adam's buddy? heh. XD

Author's Response: Wow that was really beautiful O_O thank you so much for pointing this out. Just one listen and I almost felt like I could cry!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 6

So intense!!! I love how you write-I can feel every emotion...I don't blink, I sit on the edge of my chair, barely breathing. I have to say-OMG I so did not see that happening. I want to know when and from whom he got it, or was it just well hidden? Man, I hope Adam return's pretty quick! Thank's for updating, can't get enough of this story.

Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 6

ok I just finished catching up with sell your soul and finally this chapter. If fell like I'm on a roaller coaster! :0 LOL. My heart ached during bill's withdrawals. I can't wait to see what tom will do to him next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

ya reacciónó más enérgicamente Tom !!! ahora q Adam no está la responsabilidad le hará participar más para ayudar a Bill... pero q Adam regrese pronto xq pobechito mi Tomi solito con Bill así =(

Buen capi.. me gustó mucho! Saluditos! :D

Reviewer: loveshinundbill Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant! Update soon, please!

Reviewer: Janule Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

Damn! Bill needs professional help, he must go for treatment. But it is so hard, so cruel... you write it as if it was your own experience, I love this story, even if it is so cruel. J. :o)

Reviewer: MAD Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh my god... *O*

Reviewer: Pbubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

awww poor bill the bit where he was begging Adam not to leave was so sad to read and hes still on drugs can't wait to see if Tom will tell Adam!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

well, unsurprisingly this is just as well written as the first one. superb so far. I'm so sucked in and connected to these characters. you are amazing, thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

i hope they search the rest of the house now.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!!!!! I come back from vacation to find this posted! I am so excited!!! And i have 4 more chapters to read, and an assurance of no character deaths. i couldn't be happier.

i feel for poor tom though, his responsibility is so overwhelming right now. i hope he lets someone help him.

Reviewer: Pbubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 11:44 am Title: Chapter 5

I love this story I also loved sell you soul I so badly want a new chapter but I also dont want it to come too soon because waiting for it makes getting a chapter all the more exciting also will there be a trailer or some sort of video for this story becuase they are also very well done

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

oh no està pensando en irse... aunq sea sòlo x unos dìas.. q penita me da! èn realidad todo me da penita....

en espera del sgte capi muy buena historia! Saluditos! :D

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

I have constant tears in my eyes reading this. You're so good at portraying emotions and feelings that I could feel Bill's pain.

I feel so sorry for all the characters in this, but I'm enjoying the hell out of it xD

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ok-I did not see that coming! Just how long can Adam be away from Bill? Tom will be taking care of Bill alone beside's doing all the other thing's-is he strong enough to do it all? Thank you for the quick update's!

Reviewer: Janule Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

This is so depressing, I'm nearly experiencing pain with Bill. I feel sorry for him and I'm afraid that when Adam leaves, it will be harder for him. I hope his great pain will not last long. I'm glad that the real Bill never get through this, hopefully. J. :o)

Reviewer: MAD Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Adam is going to leave???? O_o
I want twin moments! =( it's like Tom isn't touching Bill :S lol

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