Date: 08/24/10 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
So, since I'm reviewing I reread this chapter twice. :p I usually don't do that. O_O
But it was great, I love how to described the sleeping Bill and Tom making breakfast how aw and adorable! ^_^ Then when they got sexy teimz it was hot. :3 I loved it, but when Bill discovered the tattoo & most especially - the scar? Yah my heart died a little, Bill seemed so worried D: Poor Billie, Tom is breaking his heart more [I THINK. o.o] but hiding it.... :
Lovely/
I really adore this fic :)
Author's Response: and i think its funny that no one has pointed out, asking how toms shirt magicaly dissapeared XD
Date: 08/24/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved it when they cried... [random note- it's 11:11am here xD /shot] it was really heartbreaking but happy. I aww'd . I just reread it for the second time because homecomings are so much LOVE.
Though this line confused me: " bare spot on the side of Bill’s head." Bare spot...? Now I have a funny mental picture. :l
Once they stopped hugging and started speaking, at first I was annoyed and found it rushed and inwardly complained at that a bit. Then that night I realized.. I don't know what other way this person could've put it, but maybe make it a bit more dramatic. Either way, I don't think that way as of now. And i love the chapter. This plot is brilliant. :)
Sweet how they already want to get to music. :D
Lovely. < 3
Author's Response: yea sorry about that......he was rubbing the spot where bill doesnt have hair......his mohawk for example XDrnannddd.....hmmm i guess it is nice to read it at night, prolly only cause i wrote it at night. lolrnand yea i know the first coupla chapters suck. but they will get better ^_^
Date: 08/24/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
first found this and was like "yay! Twincest jail fic! W00t" and clicked it. :) Great first chapter and I adore the concept.
I love you described Bill at home.. made my heart die.
This as your first fic? Wow, it's pretty great. :)
I already read ch. 1-4 but I don't think I reviewed so Imma review them all now. :p
Author's Response: it's not my first fic......it is thoug my first slash and twincest fic XDrnand i'm glade you liked it ^_^
Date: 08/24/10 11:05 am Title: Chapter 4
WHAT?! How could he... I have some idea of what happenede to him but seriously when are you gonna tell us all of it lol update soon :)
Author's Response: That my dear is a suprise lol. As mistress fang puts it "my fingers do all the thinking" XD
Date: 08/24/10 09:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Just found this fic today! Soo good
Date: 08/24/10 08:22 am Title: Chapter 4
Bills going to find out! I want to know what happened to Tom! Update soon!
Date: 08/24/10 07:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Is it crazy that I find this Tom absolutely hot. He needs help readjusting back into society and I'm dying to know what happened to him.
Date: 08/23/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
YES FINALLY!!!!!
Though your update is a bit late -_- freaking story hogger! lol, nice chapter adrian
Date: 08/23/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh the shock of a humping Bill and Tom! I can't wait!!
Date: 08/23/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
I hope Georg was loud enough to give them time to be decent XD I look forward to more.
I wonder if the G's will recognize Tom if his own twin needed a second guess lol.
Date: 08/16/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story seems really interesting. I'm a sucker for Bottom Tom, so I'm definitely going to start tracking it
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^. the first time though he will be top...then from there it will take of as him on bottom. just wanted to let you know, so the first time they have sex wont be such a let down XD
Date: 08/10/10 02:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story! More! I need more!
Date: 08/09/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
YES!! But I feel for Tom, jail isn't fun.... or so my bro tells me. Hahah, don't ever pick up the bar of soap! Anyway, I like it, and I can't wait for more!!
Date: 08/09/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this story so far and i want to find out more about Tom and Bill's lives while Tom was locked up in jail=D
I want to know more about "Tank"!!
I hope you update soon again=D
*huggles you*
Author's Response: Don't worry you will ^_^rn
Date: 08/09/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, Tom and Bill are getting on well together :)
And poor Tom must have had an awful time in prison :(
Author's Response: oh he did. and it will eventually show.
Date: 08/09/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow, the plot sounds so interesting. i cant wait to read more.
Date: 08/09/10 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh oh secrets are never good:( please update soon :)
Date: 08/09/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking this! I wonder where you'll take this story. Both Bill and Tom seem to be hiding things from the other... which won't end well.
Date: 08/08/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
YES!! Continue!!!
Ooooh I hope Bill will be happy to see Tom!! And I wanna know more about Tank O.O
Author's Response: I'm working on it ^_^rnAnd you will find out about Tank later ^_~