Date: 05/15/12 06:35 am Title: Atreyu
I'm glad you liked it, dear.
Date: 03/17/12 02:07 am Title: Atreyu
that.... was.... AWESOME!!!!!
Date: 08/10/10 04:49 pm Title: Atreyu
I think this is a wonderfully heart wrenching story. I think it would be a bit better if it were drawn out, with more detail in places. As well as better indication towards scene change. As for the sentence structure, I think the matter of fact sentences really work for this story. It tells the tale in a way that works for it's dark aspects. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D I agree that I needed more detail in some parts, but by the time I got halfway through, I was hit with a Writers' Block and just wanted to get it finished and published :) I'm glad you liked reading it XD
Date: 08/07/10 07:51 am Title: Atreyu
short, powerful and incredibly well written. I love vampire fics and this is one of the best one shots I've stumbled upon until now. I love it and I didn't even notice mistakes.
The violence fitted perfectly with how you discribed Bill and I'm happy he didn't exactly kill Tom entirely.
My imagination is already forming images of how they now have each other.
Awesome story! really well done
~Dawn
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I'm currently trying to get over a nasty case of Writers' Block and, believe it or not, I've had that one, half finished, on my laptop for about three months... I am SO glad that someone enjoyed this enough to review. You made my morning honey.rnxx Lyssa