Date: 03/07/13 08:22 am Title: Chapter 6
Eh, o dont Think that is going to be any good
Date: 08/30/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'd be pissed too! Omg, Alex is lacking. Lol.
Bill needs to get a new man/future husband so he can have great passionate sex!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for commenting =)
Date: 08/30/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like it! I'm starting to feel bad for Alex cause I starting to thinking that he has a problem. A problem where he can't get it up. I don't know. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to get that emotion. Alex isn't completely to blame, but he isn't completely not to blame. Yet, Bill isn't completely not to blame either. Ha ha, anyway, thank you for commenting.
Date: 08/29/10 07:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Naww this is so sad :( Poor Bill
Date: 08/28/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
I feel so bad for Bill! I just want to hug him or something haha. And Alex need to get a grip! Show some emotion for god sake!
Author's Response: I want to hug him too. But, then, when don't I? xDrnThank you for commenting
Date: 08/26/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill. He's perfect the way he is, he shouldn't change himself for someone else.
Can't wait for a certain someone to show up.
Author's Response: Thank you =)rnTom should be appearing in chapter 6 or 7, just so you know
Date: 08/26/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
My favourite chapter so far, though kind of short xD
Finally, Bill addressed the issue a little bit, but got the lamest reaction ever :( I expected some breakthrough on Alex' part,but still he remains a douche absorbed in his work :-/
I'm really looking forward to read more of the story, I really love it! Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you! =D I can't say much more than that without giving the plot away, haha
Date: 08/26/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow so much tension in this chapter, though I liked it nonetheless of course. Still no Tom eh? :p
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting, haha. I'm glad you like my story =) Tom will be coming soon. Maybe chapter 6 or chapter 7. So, keep reading xD
Date: 08/26/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Alex is a douche, how can he ignore Bill like that :-/
Great chapter, I liked the flashback very much ;)
Date: 08/26/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello, new reader here :)
Read the first chapter, I really love the story and like where it's going eventhough it's makes me
sad :-( Poor Bill, though at the end things seemed ...hopefull, off to chapter 2.
Date: 08/24/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooh! I was thinking the worst! Lol!
Date: 08/23/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Alex needs to acknowledge that he has a beautiful husband like Bill and stop being annoying. ><
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I know. It's hard to write a character like Alex, because I'm used to gushing over Bill, haha
Author's Response: I know. It's hard to write a character like Alex, because I'm used to gushing over Bill, haha
Date: 08/23/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think Alex was holding the lock. I really dont like him too much. Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Sorry if it wasn't clear, but when Bill tried to unlock the door, he actually locked it, because Alex had unlocked it earlier. Alex was just in his office...as usual
Date: 08/14/10 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so hooked! More!
Author's Response: I'm writing chapter 3 now. I wanted to stay ahead of publishing just so I didn't get overwhelmed, but I'm not so sure I'm going to do that now. We'll see.rnThank you so much =)
Date: 08/13/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
ok tell you what when tom comes in i'll leave u a mega huge comment!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, okay. I have to warn you though, I'm going to focus on Alex and Bill for now and show everyone what their marriage has come to. Then, I will introduce Tom =)
Date: 08/13/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
poor Bill :( This story is cute so far though, I like it a bunch :)
Author's Response: Thank you =D
Date: 08/12/10 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Very good! When will you post the next chapter? =)
Author's Response: Thank you for my first reveiw. I'm working on chapter 4 now. Actually, I'm probably going to post chapter 2 later today =)