Date: 04/30/23 11:20 pm Title: The Talk
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/26/17 08:34 pm Title: The Agreement That Changed... Sorry... SAVED Lives
nice story!
Date: 08/09/10 10:08 pm Title: Are You Kidding Me? Let's Reverse It!!!
Hmmm.... I'll be honest, there were many times when I wondered why exactly I was reading this. The pace of the story is very fast, and the ideas seem only half-formed and unbelieveable. I think just about everything in this story was unbelieveable; from the way they spoke to their parents, to the way they started their relationship so fast, to the witchcraft, to the tree house which was so huge it had a couch, bed, and shower!! lol. And Bill must be rich to afford the James Bond style TV and the utilities. lol.
I'm sorry, this story was somewhat enjoyable, but not in the way you intended it. I guess I wanted to see what would happen next because you had set up funny situations. For example, running away cuz u dont want to have "the talk" is funny. hehe. That's what originally attracted me to this story, cuz at first it seemed like they were just kids being kids. It wasn't what I expected tho.. the witchcraft came out of no-where. I think in order to take this story seriously, there needs to be a lot of improvement in the actual writing. Slow down and describe your setting and actions in the fic. I dunno, I didn't connect with this fic, maybe the paranormal just isnt my thing.
I'm really sorry for my bad review, by the way. :(
Keep writing twincest tho!! :)
Author's Response: I don't call it a "bad review," I call it "constructive criticism," and I thank you for giving me some :D I am always open to hear what my readers have to say as to how to make my stories better because I know I'm not the best writer in the world, and my stories aren't all that great. Thank you for reading, anyway :D
Date: 08/09/10 09:28 am Title: The Agreement That Changed... Sorry... SAVED Lives
Cute story-interesting twist, loved it.
The irony was awsome!
Author's Response: Thank you :D It wasn't supposed to turn out like that, but my fingers have a mind of their own :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 08/09/10 09:19 am Title: They Burned It to the Ground!
Revenge is sweet-wonder what the twin's have planned?
Author's Response: Oh, yes. Revenge is sweet }:D
Date: 08/09/10 09:11 am Title: The Casting
Just what kind of "spell" did those crazy kid's do?! Hope to find out soon..now to catch up...
Author's Response: Hope you like the rest of the story :D
Date: 08/09/10 08:31 am Title: Back At the Tree House
Sweet it's a fortress in the forest XD I want on of those, nevermind that I'm scared of heights I still want it >.> I r jealous now :/
Author's Response: Hahahaha!!! I want one, too :D
Date: 08/08/10 10:44 pm Title: Back At the Tree House
That's an epic tree house... just sayin. Cable and a hidden bed and all :/ That tree must be huge XD
Author's Response: lol... i was aiming for epicness :D who said it was in just one tree?
Date: 08/08/10 03:54 am Title: The Casting
humm what if it's a picture or somethingg?? but idk im just guessingg
awesome story :]
Author's Response: hmmmm.... what if it is? lol
Date: 08/07/10 02:15 pm Title: The Casting
Hm.. It's different and I like it. :]
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 08/07/10 12:47 pm Title: The Casting
cnnnnnnt waiiiiit
Author's Response: don't have to. i'm updating uber soon :D thanks for reading
Date: 08/07/10 09:21 am Title: The Casting
NO!! Cliffhanger. Boo.
:P
Update soon!
Author's Response: muahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! i will. lol. thanks for reading
Date: 08/07/10 09:14 am Title: The Casting
Haha, I ahve a guess on what that peice of paper is...
Author's Response: lol. you should... i tried to make it obvious...
Date: 08/07/10 04:53 am Title: A Spell? You Can't Be Serious.
wait....what?? lol i need the next chapter
awesome story btw :]
Author's Response: thank you!!! I'm updating soon
Date: 08/06/10 11:38 pm Title: A Spell? You Can't Be Serious.
WTF?!?! Oh now you have to update soon-you can't expect us to wait long for an answer to that cliffhanger... ^_^
PLEASE
Author's Response: muahaahaahahahahha!!!!! i will. don't worry :D
Date: 08/06/10 10:15 pm Title: A Spell? You Can't Be Serious.
too short, but good
Author's Response: it was longer originally, but my... consultant said i should cut it to there to make it "suspenseful." i wasn't going to, but a bunch of my friends said that i should leave it there, and i wasn't in the mood to argue. i'm updating uber soon anyway. thanks for reading :D
Date: 08/06/10 10:03 am Title: Back At the Tree House
Oh my god awsome, more 8D
Author's Response: thank you :D i updated
Date: 08/05/10 10:09 pm Title: Back At the Tree House
Mmmm...smexy time ;)
Hehe, update soon!!
Author's Response: updated x2 :D
Date: 08/05/10 06:52 pm Title: Back At the Tree House
more please?
Author's Response: updated :D
Date: 08/05/10 11:24 am Title: The Talk
Need more...
Author's Response: i'll try to update today or tomorrow