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Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 05:06 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

I could totally see Tom acting like that, the whole time.
You scared me when Bill fell, but the ending was really sweet and made it all better.
"Had it of been any other time, Tom would've congratulated the man. For twenty years he had tried to shut his twin up and this was the first time someone succeeded." I loved that, even though I was worried about Bill.

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/10 08:51 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Oh my godddddd. ;______;

I seriously had an actual hurting thing in my heart as I was reading this. I was surprised no one had written about Bill tripping, either. :o You did it really nicely, hon. It actually scared me when the metal spikes were in his face and he was bleeding all over and...and...and Tom was...and...

;___;

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/10 03:27 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Awww, poor twins! Poor Bill for getting hurt, but even more feeling bad for Tom.

I found it interesting of how you described Tom's fears and needs and I think they are pretty much there. Bill is his everything and he takes his role as a big brother very seriously. I'm not expecting him deal with Bill getting hurt in a good way at all. Even the possibility of it... Didn't Bill just said after his car crash that it freaked Tom out?

Anyways, sad, but good fic. I love worrier Tom. He seems so... real :)

Author's Response: There's no doubt to me that Tom freaked out after that crash. And to be honest, I wonder if Bill's sat in the driver's seat since lol. Even if the car's off XD

Reviewer: jemovampiress Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 09:20 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

i totally had fears of this when i first saw that costume of his. now it frightens me anymore and i will be happy to see it go.

Reviewer: jemovampiress Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 09:19 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

i totally had fears of this when i first saw that costume of his. now it frightens me anymore and i will be happy to see it go.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 05:55 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

what a great story!!! I love protective Tom.

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 04:43 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

I cried my eyes out when Tom broke down at the end ;_;

Reviewer: Chii-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 04:19 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Tom as a worrier is cute. Bill with holes in his face isn't o.o

I, too, don't understand what's with that spiky outfit xD Thank God they finished the tour without Bill falling on his ass and getting those spikes in his eyes or something

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 11:49 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Aww Tom is so cute when he's worried about Bill =)

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 10:14 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Hey synnie, heard you're going M.I.A for a bit. Without leaving me my new Baby Bill story to boot. lol. No worries it's all good. Hope you work out everything, looking forward to seeing you when you get back.

And I agree with you, WorryTom is adorable. I always wondered if Bill could kill someone with those spikes, like some kind of ubersexy Terminater.

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 09:31 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

*faves story*
I loved this so much!!!
it's brilliantly written and i felt poor tom's pain..and yeah i agree tom as a worrier is cute..did i mention how much i loved this..
this is just amazing! great idea, thanks for sharing..

take care X

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 12:26 am Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

awwwwww bean kun -huggles-   -whails- beeeean-kuuuuuuun -clings-    any... teensy weensy, small tiny whiney chance you'd want to come live with me? i could pay for you to come... i'd have money by the end of september... just an option, i need to find my own place, we coudl really move anywhere ja so ja.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 11:59 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

oh god, i'm so sick. when i read about there being a spike in bill's head, i clapped and thought, "YAY! SHE TOOK MY ADVICE, EVEN IF HE DIDN'T BREAK HIS TEETH!" and i think i even wiggled.

I LOVE YOU, SYNNIE-BUN! take whatever time you need to do whatever you need to do. if anyone has a problem with that, i'll beat them up. just call me Mandor Allen, knight protector.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 11:29 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Thank you for a sweet story, love the brotherly over protecion Tom had going on!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 10:51 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

That was scary but very sweet!

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 10:41 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Funny thing is, I wondered the same thing myself. What happens if Bill were to trip in that outfit? WoW. you portrayed it very well..
What was it that Tom said to Bill before he punched the paramedic?

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 09:33 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

That was so sweet! The love between them is just... ah! I adored this. =)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 09:23 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Aww. That was sad.

And god, that flappin' could've happened. Damn you, Bill, and your crazy outfits.

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 08:19 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

Aww! This was so sweet! I loved it!
When Tom had his 'I'm-not-gonna-cry-okay-I-am' moment, aww damn! My heart soared, that was so sweet!

I can't believe you're going awaaay! I love your stories and... And I'm having a touchy moment right now... Meeeheheeee! You can't go away! Well, you can... but I don't want you tooooo!

Thank you so much for this amazing, sweet, lovely etc etc story! Aww!

Reviewer: makemesmile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 08:15 pm Title: come and kill the dream gone bad

gah! uberly cute yet so tragic even though he didn't die. Tom as a worrier is deffos cute as hell.

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