Date: 03/09/25 10:42 pm Title: Shiver
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/14/12 01:57 pm Title: Shiver
Just reread this.. ;_; It hurts so good.
Date: 03/29/12 09:28 pm Title: Shiver
Pardon me whilst I go and faint from sheer awesomeness.
Author's Response: *__* you're very kind!
Date: 05/31/11 04:37 am Title: Shiver
Wow. I just... wow. There's not a whole lot I can say about this. I wasn't quite expecting it to be so heartbreaking and bittersweet and beautiful beyond words. You are magic. Pure magic. ♥
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it really means a lot @___@
Date: 04/18/11 11:56 pm Title: Shiver
Wow. I think I held my breath the entire time I read that. My chest hurt just thinking about the pain they must be feeling as they try to avoid each other when they love each other so much. I loved it. The phrasing and word use was beautiful. I really enjoyed it and I love the manip you did. It's amazing! I would love to see some of your others.
Author's Response: Awh, thank you! That means a lot. I don't do too many TH manips outside of THF (for my banners).
Date: 01/08/11 04:30 am Title: Shiver
This is simply beautiful! *hearts*
Author's Response: Oh, thank you thank you!
Date: 12/14/10 06:56 pm Title: Shiver
Oh wow that really was something different, that was stunning, absolutely stunning *_* It made me tear up a little, I'm all emotional now! This was so fantastically written, all that symbolism and imagery, it was woven together so perfectly. Man you have such a wonderful way with words, it made my jaw drop at some parts. I'm so so glad I discovered your writing, it's sublime :)
And as always, I have to say your manip and banner skills are out of this world good, amazing *heart*
Author's Response: Aaah, thank you so much! It means a lot *__*
Date: 10/19/10 06:10 am Title: Shiver
So beautiful and powerful.
The imagery, the intensity, the language, the big pauses in text....just right.
Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/20/10 05:15 pm Title: Shiver
One word: Incredible.
Author's Response: Endless thank yous <3
Date: 08/07/10 06:08 pm Title: Shiver
Hi.
I just stumbled over this story and I have to say I really, really liked it. Your writing is delightful -in spite, or maybe because, of the angst-!
Thanks for sharing this.
Hope to read more of your work in the future.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks!
Date: 08/06/10 09:39 pm Title: Shiver
This was powerful. Very raw, and full of emotion. I liked it very much.
The way you wrote it is unique I think. It's like there were gaps everywhere, and yet it was easy to understand the big picture. Plus, the melancholy in all their interactions adds depth to the story. It was sad, but I'm glad Bill finally accepted... it's heartbreaking to see them suffering apart. Very well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Date: 08/05/10 08:20 pm Title: Shiver
Absolutely beautiful and heart breaking. Something I never get tired of reading. Amazing angsat and the way you used words here was so popetic. Amazing job, thank you.
Author's Response: Awh, thank you.
Date: 08/05/10 05:26 am Title: Shiver
Wow, I'm impressed by the beauty and emotions of this little story. A fascinating glimpse into the conflicting nature of their relationship. And I liked Tom's tears as he's usually described of not letting his emotions out in that way.
And let me just say that the manip is absolutely gorgeous!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! You're a sweetheart.
Date: 08/05/10 02:39 am Title: Shiver
one word....BEAUTIFUL!!
Author's Response: <3
Date: 08/04/10 07:24 pm Title: Shiver
I don't normally like photo manipulations, but your banner is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 08/04/10 06:54 pm Title: Shiver
I really liked this. I always like a story that can describe the twin's relationship with struggle and still portray a sense of love. This was well written. I liked how the title came into play near the end, too. Kind of surprised me a little. I'd love to see it turned into more, or read more of your work. It's amazing.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much. It means a lot.
Date: 08/04/10 04:33 pm Title: Shiver
Wow, beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/04/10 02:54 pm Title: Shiver
Wow. That was so sad, painful, heartbreaking and in the end, absolutely beautiful :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: 08/04/10 02:15 pm Title: Shiver
Uh! That was so angsty and so emotional. And banner looks great! *_*
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you!
Date: 08/04/10 02:02 pm Title: Shiver
So sad and intense. Lovely description of Bill's emotions.
And the banner is breathtaking! :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much.