Date: 08/03/10 03:37 pm Title: Training Tom
Awww such a sweet and adorable ending to a wonderful and fun story. :) The entire idea of Tom acting so much like a dog and therefore Bill trying to treat him like one was hilarious and I was grinning while reading almost the entire thing. I admit I had to stop reading when I burst out laughing for about a full minute upon reading that Bill actually smacked Tom's nose. XD Amazing work on this one, I absolutely loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 08/03/10 02:27 pm Title: Training Tom
AWWWWW :) that was freaking adorible. I loved it and the picture on the banner of Tom looking like he smelled a rotten sock that was hilarious I loved this story to pieces. XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: I LOVE that picture of Tom. His face is ridiculous. I'm glad to hear you liked the story, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/03/10 02:13 pm Title: Training Tom
aww :)
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Date: 08/03/10 02:13 pm Title: Training Tom
aww :)
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Date: 08/03/10 02:03 pm Title: Training Tom
:) great story!
Aww bill got his doggy back :D
Thanks for the story
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Date: 08/03/10 12:34 pm Title: Training Tom
so cute story! i really like it, you have very good style of writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/03/10 12:31 pm Title: Training Tom
This was highly amusing. Just goes to show Bill, that a person is not a puppy. Quite a lovely fic, though.
Author's Response: Well, I don't know...it did kind of work in the end. Glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 08/03/10 12:23 pm Title: Training Tom
And what breed of dog do you imagine Tom to be? I see him as a mutt. My cousin has a this German Shepherd/Chow mix that is absolutely adorable. He has the coloring of a German Shepherd, but he's small, with really big paws and one ear that sticks up and the other that stays down. If I think of Tom as a dog, that's what I see.
Author's Response: Well, now I'm definitely picturing Tom as a dog with cockeyed ears. I'll never not see it (and it's a pretty cute mental image, so I don't mind). Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/03/10 12:16 pm Title: Training Tom
Cute! I love the idea of training Tom. I'm sure there are lots of side ideas that could stem from this! Are you planning on writing any more of this nature? If so, I would quite enjoy reading them. :)
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure this is going to be a oneshot, but I agree...there's definitely potential for more of Bill trying to train poor Tom. Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/03/10 12:06 pm Title: Training Tom
I really love how you took a premise that could have been silly and really made a story that was angsty, sweet, and funny. And what's sad is that I could so see Bill doing all of this...that was probably the most hilarious thing about the whole story! Really, really loved this!
Author's Response: Well, I definitely assumed this plot bunny would turn into crack, but it just didn't happen that way. It's amazing how unpredictable the tone of my stories can be, even to myself. I'm glad you like the way it ended up, though! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/03/10 11:11 am Title: Training Tom
Absolutely adorable. =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/03/10 10:59 am Title: Training Tom
Hahaha!
This was so funny!!!
Really good oneshot
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!