Date: 08/03/10 10:03 am Title: Begging
I'm really glad that your wrote this story. A couple of my friends are partially deaf, and their experience were similar to Tom's. I took a class on American Sign Language in high school, and I'm excited that you're introducing THF to something new like this. I can't wait for the continuation!
Author's Response:
Well, the continuation isn't really a continuation of this. It's just the last one in the series. >.>
I've never met anyone who's any form of hearing impaired, but I'm glad I kept it accurate. ^-^ Tysm.
Date: 08/03/10 08:34 am Title: Begging
Oh my god.
I didn't think I was going to cry. I don't know why I thought that, since the fact that I did cry at For the Looking Glass got me into twincest, but I didn't think I would for some reason. And I did. God, this was so sad. I don't know, it was just devastating and sweet and heartbreaking and lovey all at the same time.
I absolutely adore how you made him terrified to tell Bill that he's gay. I don't really pay attention to the gay thing because I get sick of thinking up new ways to make people react to the news. XD But yeah, anyway, it was really awesome of you to do that. Pretty much every story I've read with him admitting that has Bill going, "Oh, it's okay, Tomi!~" and not caring a bit. And it's like, dude, that's not how things work out. But I'm guilty, so eh. It was really sweet how he was pretty much shaking and he didn't get any consequence from Bill even though it did affect him. :)
And then the irony at the end...fuck. That was so sad. ;____;
*heaps praise and gold and cookies*
:'(
Author's Response:
Aw, Saaav. <3 Tysm. You know your long comments on things make my writing worthwhile. XD
Date: 08/03/10 07:05 am Title: Begging
Oh my god, this was such an amazing story to read. You could really feel everything they went through, and, there really wasn't any need to speak, it was so beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :D
Date: 08/03/10 06:04 am Title: Begging
o_o That was one of the most heart-wrenching stories I've read on this site. The ending was a huge shock, but...oddly...it felt...right? It was incredible and intense. You wrote this extremely well.
Author's Response:
^-^ Thank you~
Date: 08/03/10 04:18 am Title: Begging
Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed reading this piece. It was absolutely wonderful. The ending made me tear up but I felt it only made the characters and the story stronger. Brilliant, brilliant work.
Author's Response:
Thank youuu.
Date: 08/03/10 03:03 am Title: Begging
That was absolutely heartwrenching and stunning and amazing. I really wasn't expecting the ending, and it shattered my heart, but it was unbelievably gorgeous. What an incredible and original fic. Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response:
You're welcome, and thank you.