Date: 02/07/11 07:07 am Title: Chapter 4
You're Spanglish is simply adorable :3 and writing style is endearing. Keep writing! I expect great things out of you :D
Date: 02/07/11 07:04 am Title: Chapter 4
I like how Bill wants to run away from his problems, but Bushido won't let him because he's worried about him. It's sweet
Date: 02/07/11 06:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Please try and see this story through the end, it's going somewhere, somewhere good. So don't give up on it
Date: 02/07/11 06:20 am Title: Chapter 2
This story is getting off to a magnificent start. The progression and detail are wonderful. I love it already.
Date: 02/06/11 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh god, so much angst. and im so into it. more please! and where are you from? im not english either. but you write amazingly good, even though youre not english. if you hadnt mentioned it, id still think you were english. :D
Author's Response: I'm from Spain lol and that's because Raiju has a lot to do with the final result of the chapters. Thanks for the compliments, though. More coming soon.
Date: 02/05/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh God, I just can't believe that Bushido just left, letting Bill all alone...
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02/05/11 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
:( i hope it will get better...
...but great drama man!!
Date: 02/05/11 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
well damn. okay right now I'm hoping that things get straightened out between the two of them. Seeing Bill in so much pain like this is heartbreaking. I'm surprised that Bushido hit Bill, wasn't expecting that. can't wait for another update.
Date: 02/04/11 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
one word "FINALLY" ;)
Date: 02/04/11 11:39 am Title: Chapter 12
Right now I'm torn between loving and hating this. I kinda really wanna smack Bill, but that would be horribly mean of me. *sigh* Guess I'ma have to wait and see if Bushido can talk some sense into him. Really really steamy by the way *fans self*
Date: 01/29/11 05:09 am Title: Chapter 11
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Bu's dream is about to become reality...at least i'm hoping it iS!
Date: 01/28/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 11
omg omg omg amazing! so hot! wow, i cant wait for more!
Date: 01/28/11 10:06 am Title: Chapter 11
wow. your updates never cease to amaze me. I want to say that this chapter is not only so sweet, but soooo sexy. I'm glad Bu was able to pull Bill away from the edge. I'm just disappointed that the other guys don't care anymore and aren't there to help him *kicks them all in the pants*.... at least Bushido is there *nod nod* i would hug Bill buuuuut it looks like he's in the middle of sexy times.
Date: 01/28/11 09:47 am Title: Chapter 11
cant wait for the next update,and i LOVE that your uptade come so soon:D!!
Date: 01/28/11 09:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Awwww. its so sad about the band.
Date: 01/27/11 11:35 am Title: Chapter 10
Amazing...again! your so talented!!
Date: 01/27/11 07:14 am Title: Chapter 10
thx for the chapter,it was sad but also great:D
Date: 01/27/11 01:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Biting nails and sitting on edge of chair...
Date: 01/26/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
..... ok. so this was really not a good chapter to read when you've had a horrible day. i do admit that it was a wonderful update, and i'm sitting on the edge of my seat wanting to know what the hell is gonna happen next. GUH! can't wait for more!
Date: 01/26/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
I missed this chapter. ;_; terribly sorry. I think you're amazing when it comes to decribing emotions! :D It makes this story so wonderful! now, onto the next chapter. :D