Date: 12/09/10 09:40 am Title: When your mother finds out..
OMG IDA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! THIS WAS .. OH FUCK JEG HAR IKKE LYST Å SKRIVE DENNE REVIEWEN PÅ ENGELSK. JEG HAR SNAKKET NOK ENGELSK Å TYSK NÅ, AT JEG VL SNAKKE LITT NORSK. ops, sorry for caps lock. jesus christ! denne dærre smut scenen var hooot, også.. også kjente jeg også at jeg fikk litt panikk da simone lånte ipoden.. jeg tenkte bare "jaah, nå får mamma noe å se på heeeh!" XD jeg er sikker på at om hun hadde sett det, hadde hun fått BAKOVERSVEIS! :D Eller hjerteinfarkt eller noe verre :o Men slutten va faen så genial XD HAHAH!!! seriøst. jeg kvæles her jeg sitter, jeg. hohohoooo! jah.. oke. jeg er ferdig nå. peis ut!
Author's Response: Omg, sååå hæppi for at du likte den :D danke ! <3
Date: 08/07/10 12:25 am Title: When your mother finds out..
i like the idea for the story, but it doesn't make sense to me why simone would be so nervous to talk to the twins about how to use a phone. maybe if she had broken the phone or something...but, it was still a good story :D
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I know. I thought I was going to write that she had seen the video, but then I thought that Id never be able to finish it since Id never be happy enough with it. So I just wrote that she didn't know how to use it. And the reason I didn't change anything is because it'd be more nerve wracking if I could call it that, lol. But I get your point :)
Date: 08/02/10 07:54 am Title: When your mother finds out..
OMG, u scared the beejesus out of me!! I totally thought she was going to catch them! On one hand it was funny that she could miss such a thing when she had pure evidence of her own children fucking, and on the other hand it would have been even more awesome to see her catch them. Hehe. Maybe I'm just a little twisted.
Anyways, so yeah I enjoyed reading this, the plot is great. However, I think your sentence structure is a bit repetitive and it was kind of noticable. It's ok though, well done. :)
Author's Response: Hahha, I know right! I love stories when she catches them..I am a bit twisted so I don't mind x) Anyways, I'm glad you liked it ! And I know it's not an exuse to say; "I'm Norwegian and I'm only 14 blah blah blah," so I'll go with; "It's one of my first.. eheh." (a) x)
Date: 08/01/10 09:03 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
omg that was very ironis but i loved it lol
Author's Response: Hahha, thanks :)
Date: 08/01/10 08:48 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
It was lovely and funny, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 08/01/10 07:45 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
Ahah, amazing! :'D
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 08/01/10 07:27 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
uhg! I thought the note was gonna say somethin like how she found the video in Bill iPod and blah blah blah! I'm so happy its this instead! lol good story!
Author's Response: Aw, haha! Good then :D
Date: 08/01/10 06:27 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
OMG! XD SAVED BY IGNORANCE x'D
Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I wanted her to find out.. But I just .. yeah, lol x)
Date: 08/01/10 05:49 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
ROFL
I was actually hoping she would find out "shrugs"
Author's Response: Haha, me too! But I knew that if she found out, I'd have to write more chapters and stuff.. And I know for a fact that I'd never ever would've finished it then.. :/
Date: 08/01/10 02:53 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
When I first started reading I thought; How could Simone figure out such a big thing, and confront the twins about it when the story only contains of around 1000 words, now I see why ;)
Good story :)
Author's Response: Mmm, thanks! :) Yes, if she'd found out I'd probably write a few chapters about too.
Author's Response: Mmm, thanks! :) Yes, if she'd found out I'd probably write a few chapters about too.
Date: 08/01/10 02:33 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
Hahahaha :D it's great :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 08/01/10 01:30 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
Phewww! Close one! Lovely story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much ! :)
Date: 08/01/10 12:00 pm Title: When your mother finds out..
Oh, how awkward would that have been? Not only for the twins but for Simone as well. I thought they were caught for sure. Great story, it definately had me on edge.
-Sonne.
Author's Response: Aw, Thanks! I'm happy you liked it :)