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Reviewer: SingingShooter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

I like where this is going keep it up!

Reviewer: GustavsGirl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

oh my god.. that was briliant... cant wait for the rest xD

Reviewer: agilitypup88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/08 01:59 am Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

oooh continue, but try to stay away from perverted twincest stuff, and focuse on the case.

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/08 11:43 am Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

“Peanut?”
haha i love the end!!

please update soon!!

Reviewer: Tonje_The_Sheep Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/08 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

OoOoOo can't wait for next part! =D

this is a really great story!! :D

Reviewer: sakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/08 10:01 am Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

omg omg omg omg this is relli good carry on

Reviewer: die_unendlichkeit Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/08 05:14 pm Title: Prologue

LOLOL

Georg, you never cease to amuse me. x3

I rock in this story!!!!!!!!!!

ICH LIEBE GUSTAV! x3

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

“Th-thank...” Bill mustered until he was suddenly caught in a fit of sobbing and hiccuping. Gabby embraced her husband tightly, almost unable to hold back tears of her own. Gustav stared at the couple, sympathetically, until he was distracted by a sound that was a mix between chewing and crunching. Everyone looked over to see the cause of the noise only to find Georg, his mouth full of peanuts. He stared back for a while then silently held up his bag of food, offering its contents to anyone that wanted it.

“Peanut?”



LMAO,
BRILLIANT!!
You deserve that packet of peanuts, seriously, this is so great xD

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/08 03:52 am Title: Chapter Two: Turnabout Accusations

:O
it's certainly intriguing...
more, please! :D

Reviewer: Tonje_The_Sheep Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter One: Turnabout Twins

Really good! =D

I like =)

I did have a question, but now I have forgotten it XD

well,well anyway.. thanks for continuing! =D

I'm waiting for more!

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 07:12 pm Title: Chapter One: Turnabout Twins

omg. davids such an ass... but bill's family is really cute! :D

chapter 2, chapter 2! ^^

Reviewer: THpolar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 03:56 pm Title: Chapter One: Turnabout Twins

who screamed???
oh my god!!!!
go toxic schrei!!!!
and bill's man purse?
i still luv it!!!

Reviewer: die_unendlichkeit Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter One: Turnabout Twins

=DDDDDDDDD

AMAZING CHAPTER, DAZE!! X3

Reviewer: blackeyes91 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter One: Turnabout Twins

aww^^,so adorable,i cant say i like that manager...XD

Reviewer: Tonje_The_Sheep Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/08 09:15 am Title: Prologue

Ooh good start!

I'm gonna follow this one! =D

mehr bald bitte! ^^

Reviewer: sweets903 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/08 12:02 am Title: Prologue

nice start :) more soon?...pweez? :D

Reviewer: hcimetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/08 07:15 pm Title: Prologue

ooh... sounds good! :D

can't wait for chapter one! ^^

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