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Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

Tom being that formal and well-mannered is so freaking awesome XD It makes me smile. And Bill really took that pretty well :)
And Bill asking for more reminded me of Oliver Twist lmao

Author's Response: It is hard to forget the manners one acquired in life. Can you imagine living through dfferent centuries?

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

Aww Bill. Tom seems sweet and I knew he would take care of Bill. I like this and I want to see what happens to Bill as he grows into his new life :)

Author's Response: Bill is going to have quite the adventure!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

this is great!
I just hope Bill will not have to kill people to get bloodc

Author's Response: I dunno about that yet...maybe just one...

Reviewer: Muffinholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

Amazing! More please?

Author's Response: More coming soon! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: thlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

EEEPP!!! i love it!!! this is a really interesting story! love to see the next chapter soon please!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad it has your interest.rnStay tuned for more!!

Reviewer: blackslayer14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

This story is just so good

Author's Response: Why thank you! I hope you hang on for the ride!

Reviewer: noraa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

oh poor poor bill! :'( i think this is a really good story, would love to read a lot more of this! hope you'll update this very soon :D

Author's Response: I'm writing it as we speak! More up soon!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

Poor Bill!!! I can't believe that happened to him. People just have no remorse do they. Tom is there now and with time Bill will be ok I hope. I don't know how long his sleep will be i'm not sure how long it takes to become what Bill will become in this world but Tom will take care of him he always does.

Author's Response: Tom has definite plans for Bill, that's for sure! But don't worry...Bill will be amazing in his rebirth!

Reviewer: thlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

yay!!! another chappie!!!! poor bill!!!!! nooooooooooo!!!! those people better have been killed!!! i will not stand for them to have just walked away free!!! please update again soon!!!! this is a great story!!! more soon please!

Author's Response: Oh Tom is not gonna let that happen, that's for sure! More updates coming soon!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

umm what?

Author's Response: I don't follow your question?

Reviewer: electricXjello Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

:O
Suh-weet.
Can't wait for more, even though I am confused to no end! (Hint: More updates will help my problem ;))
UPDATE!!!!

Author's Response: Updates will be out soon. My muse is addicted to this story right now.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

Really Like!

Author's Response: Glad that you like it! More chapters up soon!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

That was a brutal beating :( But he will be ok :D Vampires are always fun.

Author's Response: I am ADDICTED to vampires! I thought I'd try my hand at ampire Bill and see what happens.

Reviewer: blackslayer14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 10:39 am Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

this is a good story

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope I can continue to entertain you !

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

Oh god poor Bill. That was so brutal and scary, you wouldn't want to survive after that. Interesting to see his frame of mind when he wakes up.

Author's Response: Working on that for you! New chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

Yay new fic =) This is interesting, though Bill needs to learn to drive LOL. *runs to next chapter*

Author's Response: I agree! I can't stand bad drivers either but these guys had unnecessary extreme road rage! ext chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

YAY!! vampire bill! :D
I love this story, pliss write more :]

Author's Response: Yup...vampire Bill! I'm still trying to figure out what kind of vmpire I want him to be yet though.

Reviewer: electricXjello Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

The summary kinda lost me...the only reason I read this is cuz you wrote it :D I love your other stories, so I thought "What the hell? This one might be good!"
Can wait for more updates!

Author's Response: Another update is up. I look forward to your thoughts on it! I'll update the summary since it didn't get to what I needed. Thanks for lettig me know that!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

cant wait for more

Author's Response: More coming up shortly...stay tuned!

Reviewer: lizh12795 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

This is so ominous that I don't think I want to read what is going to happen to him. I hate mindless violence. Don't hurt Bill too much, please.

Author's Response: Unfortunately it gets bad, but I won't get too, too graphic. It bothered me kind of when I was writing it so I had to tame it down some. But once you get past it and Tom comes into the picture, it'll get positive again.

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