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Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/13 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

The only thing I must say is that "Guys please finish this story and update soon"...^_^ I'll be waiting.

Author's Response: Working on it as we speak. Can't wait to share with you!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/13 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

YAY!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you're here!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/13 10:47 am Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

OHHH wow me encanta!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so interesting and fascinating.... so good!!! please update soon... me encanta cada uno de los personajes :)

Author's Response: We're working on it for you! Stay tuned! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

hummm!!!! very interesting.

Author's Response: Much more coming to keep you interested!

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

Okay, this is awesome. I LOVE the additions, the new aspects of the story. So, if you disappear again for 2 or 3 years, I'm going to be VERY disappointed!!

Author's Response: Aww so sorry. I promise you we won't! So much more in store! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

I wonder why it took me so long before reading this story. That'"s inventive and great an mix of two worlds

Author's Response: It has been updated and made so much better now. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: dee25u Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

Where have ya been? I've had this story on track for a long time waiting for a new chapter! LOL glad to have ya back on this story.

Author's Response: Lost the mojo on this and decided to bring it back with a new story line. Thank TSOA for helping breathe new life into this! Much more to come!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 06:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
i hope bill an to will be ok

Author's Response: Oh there will be some good stuff coming! Hang in there with us!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 06:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
i hope bill an to will be ok

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 02:10 am Title: Chapter 5 - Empath x2

Oh Tom....Your love for Bill is causing quite a stirr. I'm suprized and happy to see this story picked up again after so long. I had read it again not too long ago trying to put the rest together in my own mind. Please don't leave it again. I want to know what happens.

Author's Response: I intend to take this one full out, so hang in there with us! Thanks for coming back!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/12 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

i want some more too, will you be finishing this?

Author's Response: I'm baaaaack!!

Reviewer: innocent as far as you know Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/11 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

please please please please please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm revamping the whole story and hopefully making it better. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: innocent as far as you know Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/11 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

please please please please please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: deathgirl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

i love it more plz

Reviewer: deathgirl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

i love it more plz

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/10 09:38 am Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

EWWW I would NOT like to be investigating that scene!! On saying that though, awesome chapter honey, I can't wait to see what the CSI's make of it. Now I need more Bill and Tom *wink*

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

More please:)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

cant wait for more
this is good

Reviewer: Muffinholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4 - CSI

Like Bill is craving blood, I'm craving this story! More please??

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Beautiful Stranger

Bill took that amazingly well, I was expecting him to freak out. I know I would. I really want to hear what the prophecy is about.

Author's Response: I'm trying to figure out where i want that to go to. How deep into it do you want them to delve?

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