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Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/13 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

lol i want some more too!!

Author's Response: Nw chapter up now. SO sorry for the wait!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/13 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

"I want some more..." totally reminds me of that one moment in interview with a vampire.

Author's Response: That movie is one of my favorite movies and part of my inspiration for this.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/13 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

this is great!
i love the "save the cheerleader, save the world" I LOVED Heros


and this is kinda reminding me of The Matrix

Author's Response: I love movie quotes. I may have to use more of them. What do you think?

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/13 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

OMG.! This story is amazing..... Keep writing....

Author's Response: I'm back on track! More coming your way! Thanks for letting me entertain you!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/13 09:55 am Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

This is fantastic! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Working on it now! Got some good surprises in store! Hang in there with me!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/13 02:45 am Title: Chapter 7 - Destiny Calls

Hummm.....getting really good. Bill is keeping some of his human trates. That is a bit strange for a vampire but it may make him more compassionate leter. I can't wait to see what he is like once he is trained and stronger. Very cool.. I really want to read more.

Author's Response: And read more you shall! Working on the next chapter now, trying to get updates out faster but life has a habit of getting in the way! See you soon though with a new update!

Reviewer: Mango113095 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/13 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

omg its soooo good. *mindgasm* update soon plz >_

Author's Response: Update is up! Now we'll begin to meet more of Tom's family and co-horts.

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/13 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

So..... i like it. It's interesting so sar. Looking forward to the next bit. :)

Author's Response: Next bit is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/13 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

cant wait

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/13 06:40 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: New chapter up soon. Thanks for reading and stay tuned! Good stuff is coming!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/13 12:15 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

looking forward to more
i LOVE this story

I am on Second Life and I am a member of a Vampire clan and i told them about this

Author's Response: Oh that was so sweet of you to do! Thank you so much! Working on chapters as we speak! Hope you enjoy them! Stay tuned! New chapter out soon!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/13 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 _ Terror and Salvation

im so glad your back with this story
i love it

Author's Response: I'm glad you remembered it and are still interested in it! Thanks!

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/13 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

I love it :D cant wait for more~~

Author's Response: More coming up real soon! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: xHorizonx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

I love the bond you're creating between bill and tom

Author's Response: It will be a bit of a love story! Hang in there with us.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 04:16 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

Great job dolls

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 04:16 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

Great job dolls

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 02:17 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

Loved it! Thnx for.posting(:

Author's Response: Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost

I really really wanna finish this story, but the 'major character death' keeps me from it :(

Author's Response: The major character death was Bill dying and becoming a vampire, but maybe that's the wrong descriptor. Bill and Tom don't die in this totally. That's not in my plans. Feel free to read on!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/13 01:09 am Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

Warlocks.... Way to go George and Gusty :) Getting some of your own supernaturalness on.

I'm curious to know more about why Tom wanted Bill as well. What this prophecy is. Bill is the key to some great thing is TOm's eyes. I want to know more :)

Author's Response: All of this will be explained shortly and it will all make sense then. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Trouble Explained

I am in love with this story. And I am soooo happy that you have started updating it again because I love it so much. A vampire Bill and Tom is always nice, and I'm looking forward to reading more! More interactions between Bill and Tom, more investigations by the G's, more history of Tom and his princeliness, more raw adorableness that is Bill...okay, just more everything haha.

Author's Response: Well more is what you're going to get! Lol! We have some great storylines coming so stay tuned and thanks for reading!

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