Date: 05/14/18 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost
please please update soon!!
Date: 05/22/17 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Relatives
please update this soon
Date: 10/30/14 07:42 am Title: Chapter 11 - Relatives
this is a really good story!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 09/20/13 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Relatives
YES I LIKE! MORE!
Date: 08/18/13 01:32 am Title: Chapter 11 - Relatives
So more of Tom's crazy family lol I'm interested in seeing Bill's Japanese fighting skills. I'm also still curious why Bill retains human traits but I like it. It gives him more depth as a vampire. I think there is a bigger reason though.
Date: 08/14/13 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Relatives
looking forward to more
Date: 07/17/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 10 - White Witches
I honestly can't wait for the next chaper ^^D I'm really starting to love this story :D hope it won't be to long before an update comes ^^
Date: 07/05/13 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 10 - White Witches
I really love this fic so far. Your timeline in the boys love story is ideal for what I am looking forward too. Thank you for not rushing that. Anything worth waiting for as they say. I know we will be getting some twin loves, but will there be any g-love? I like that too! I also like tom's sister, she seams fun...
Date: 07/02/13 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 10 - White Witches
the chapter end notes....same goes for me
i havent written in a year and a half cause of problems in my life and also writers block
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Writers block sux! Try outlining your story so you'll know where your story is going. Helps break writers block. Ibdont write a story unless I outline it from beginning to end. It's not set in stone but helps guide my story.
Date: 07/02/13 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 10 - White Witches
Fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/02/13 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost
*sends glitter* just started reading it xD
Author's Response: Welcome! Feel free to comment. I love reviews!
Date: 07/02/13 02:16 am Title: Chapter 10 - White Witches
So Bill and TOm are to save the world...Hummm... I think they can do it. I'm worried about them though. The future is not set in stone and this could turn out harder than it seems. THe Gs are still out there... looking for them or at least I thought they were.
The movie references are fun but becareful not to use too many lol, It starts to become cleche after a while. Tom and Bill are super cute in this and I do hope they get their happy future together. I can't wait for more. Please be quick ;-)
Author's Response: Yes the Gs are out there and will show up more in later chapters. Bill has to build his confidence, but when he does, watch out!rnI didn't realize I had done a Bill and Ted reference until my friend pointed it out. It was just a phrase in my head. Funny that that popped out!
Date: 06/09/13 12:24 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Rules
Hummm interesting... So, what is our Bill's true destiny? He is right.. there is so much to know! Please don't take so long to update!!! I can't wait :-)
Author's Response: Working as fast as we can. Hang in there's!
Date: 06/08/13 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Rules
great chapter
really interesting
reminds me of a cartoon i saw a long time ago about dragons and these four or 5 guys, each from a diffrent country) that were some kind of important people, and they own these dragons
Author's Response: Sounds cool! If you remember what that is, let me know!
Date: 06/08/13 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Rules
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: New chappie up now.
Date: 06/03/13 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Work Begins
looking forward to more
Author's Response: New chapter up! Enjoy!
Date: 05/21/13 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Work Begins
Jax, I'm a little confused by YOUR use of the word 'sire' at the beginning of the chapter. A person's sire is their FATHER, but I got the impression Tom was calling Bill that, instead of the other way around. Did I read something incorrectly?
Author's Response: To sire also means to create something. Just like a stud horse can sire a foal, as in vampire lore, a more experienced vampire sires/turns/creates a newborn vampire. He is in effect his "father figure" or "parent' as he created him, but it's not in a creepy pedophile way. It goes much further beyond that, as Tom created Bill to be his mate, to complete the prophesy and fill his empty life.
Date: 05/15/13 02:55 am Title: Chapter 8 - Work Begins
Love it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: New chappie up! Enjoy!
Date: 05/15/13 01:15 am Title: Chapter 8 - Work Begins
poor Simone ;( I can't blame Bill for not wanting to go home to his father though. I don't think I would want to go home to that either. I'm getting more curious about George and Gustav though.
Tom is always so cute when he falls in love. Bill's innocense is sweet and I can't wait to see him at his best as a vampire :)
Author's Response: I'm considering how much I want the Gs explained in this story. Do look forward to more action from the Gs though.
Date: 04/30/13 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - So Lost
You're not going to leave us right?
Author's Response: Nope...new chapter up now. Enjoy!