Date: 08/28/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy. I don't like the way that sounds. Heartache is never a good thing.
Date: 08/28/10 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I wish I could submit you better feedback but pretty much every time I read this I just go *____* and I'm just complete putty in your hands. I love this, so much.
Date: 08/28/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww... this is sad :( plz moreee i want to see bill with tom in the present too :(
Date: 08/20/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
I just love this so much! I love that the first days and weeks (weeks *_*) of being bonded are a heady rush, and I love Bill's enthusiasm and how he keeps learning new words in Tom's language.
Gustav's suggestion that Tom shouldn't worry because the To'Kai will be able to tell but won't know why is excellent!
I love that Bill thinks the purpose of Tom's lip ring is to "command his attention at every turn." :D (That sort of is its purpose, too, isn't it?)
The sex scene is so hot. *fans self* I love how their attention spans are about three seconds long, at least if they're trying to think about something else than having each other. I can't really understand how Tom doesn't, I don't know, combust with Bill squirming under him and mewling and crying out and so obviously loving whatever Tom does to him!
"...where things were about to start going wrong." Oh no! D:
Date: 08/20/10 04:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww, that's just perfect. Bill's a fast learner, huh?
I love to see this in Bill's POV, everything is so new and curous to him.
Date: 08/19/10 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Interesting... The automatic attraction they have is quite interesting and makes for a wonderful story. I wonder if they have bonded chemically and everything. I'm very excited to see what Gustav has to say after running all the tests!
Date: 08/19/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4
This is so good! I love the intensity between Tom and Bill!
Date: 08/18/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
aaah so good. wow, thats so much for having just met, tho it totally is the concept...wow, lol. aah i feel reallly uncreative right now and id rather just see where you guys take this than make up my own ideas at present...
Date: 08/18/10 09:09 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, I'm so facinated by how strongly Bill and Tom are connected already! I'm seriously addicted to this story by now, i go all 'YEY! *does happy dance*' every time you update:')
Date: 08/18/10 08:43 am Title: Chapter 4
LOL a chapter of smut *giggles* its about time they got some alone time they've needed it for a while. Very nice!
Date: 08/18/10 08:19 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh gosh, Bill finally gets a blowjob. No one ever writes that and I'm glad you did. :D And I usually don't like reading sex, but this is pretty damn good. I like how...descriptive?...it is, like how Bill is an alien so he's observing everything from the view of a person who doesn't really have sex much. XD Like I said, it's sweet that they're so close so fast and it doesn't seem unnatural at all. I really like that. :)
I hope Andi and Georg don't freak out when they end up having blood taken and so on. :/ I have a feeling something bad is going to happen when they go into the lab, poor things.
Date: 08/18/10 05:53 am Title: Chapter 4
going wrong??? nooooo whyyyy? xD
Date: 08/18/10 05:06 am Title: Chapter 4
SO HOT! I LOVE THAT THEY ARE PROGRESSING SO FAST, YEEESSSS! IT LEAVES MORE FOR THEM TO DO IN THE FUTURE, WAHHAHA ;)
Im anxious for whats coming up, I just really hope that its not going put a strain on their beautiful relationship!
But seriously, this chapter was one of the best yet. Tom/Bill interactions are my absolute favorite in this fic!
Date: 08/18/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 4
As always, I was thrilled to see an update for this! And a sexy update, too! I just really adore the bond between Tom and Bill, and they way they manage to communicate despite the language barrier. I'll be interested to see what Gustav can come up with when they get them into a lab, though.
Date: 08/18/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my. I still can't get over how utterly drawn they are to each other, being bonded. I have to grin at how they can't keep their hands off each other for a minute. I think I said that last chapter, too, but it's one of the things I love about the story. :)
Date: 08/18/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow-these two are like dog's in heat, but I love it!! Love all the little look's and touche's. Guessing this was Bill's first time to be blown-judging by his reaction ^_^
I cannot not wait to see what happen's at the base.
Date: 08/18/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4
aww nothing wrong. :( plz moree :))
Date: 08/17/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha, Tom was a bit too reminiscent towards the end :)
I just hope they're still together ._.
Date: 08/17/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
cant wait for more
You stopped the sex scene? "whines"
Date: 08/17/10 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was such a hot chapter, and very sweet at the same time! They are so adorable together, only thing I care about their future is that they are still together ! Can't wait for the next chapter!