Date: 09/22/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh I very much enjoyed that chapter ^__^ This is one of the most amazing fics, really. Beautiful! Aw man, I really don't know what's gonna happen, but it sure sounds ominous. I really don't want anyone to abuse the trust of the To'Kai, it's not right! But sadly, I can see something like that happening. I hope this has a happy ending though. Having said that, there isn't much doubt I'll love the ending whichever turn this takes.
Back to this chapter, I adore Bill and Tom's devotion to each other, it's sweet and special, and I hope nothing jeopardises it too much. Aw, only one more chapter to go for me until I've caught up! Looking forward to it though ^__^
Date: 09/21/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw Bill is the most endearing character! I ADORE this, it's such a charming fic, aw wow I'm so taken by Bill xD Well, by everything I think. This whole world you've created is magnificent. I love it, I feel as though I'm transported right there with them. I can't get over how beautiful this is, the quality of the writing is incredible, the descriptions and Bill and Tom's budding relationship. And Gustav makes me smile xD
I wanna find it all out! Know where their relationship went after this, and what stage it's at when Tom is giving his talk. Aw man, this has totally captured me xD
Date: 09/21/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh goodness I love this! It's such an exciting read :D I am feeling a little ominous about what kind of tests they are going to perform. I don't want the To'Kai to get hurt and I really don't want Bill to loose trust in Tom.
Ah wow, this is so amazing! Beautifully written, I can envision everything as a whole new world, I love really becoming part of the world in a fanfiction :) Stunning, this is really stunning!
Date: 09/21/10 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow this is SUCH an incredible start to a fic! Wow, so much going on all in one chapter. I'm defnitely intrigued as to wher this is going. And wow, your writing is just fabulous.
That first encounter sure was sexy! I wasn't expecting to get along so well but woooow it was magic! I really felt it. Oh i'm so excited to see where this is headed. You've got me hooked and i don't think i'm about to let go!
Date: 09/02/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is a simply wonderful story so far. It's quite enchanting, and I'm enjoying the approach very, very much. I was a bit shocked at the immediate, for lack of better word, no pun intended, bonding Bill and Tom shared at first, but it's all described rather beautifully and it makes me curious for what's ahead. The dead trees are foreshadowing, I feel heartbroken already. D: Anyhoo~ Loved this! ^--^
Date: 09/02/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yep. My hunch of death still sticks... I'm excited to read more.
Date: 09/01/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 5
If I'd known that from the start, we'd have saved a lot of heart ache in the days that followed.
Oh no, that just sounds so ominous! Bill is so sweet and trusting of Tom and I'm afraid it's going to break my heart to see him...well, or Tom, hurt. ;_;
Date: 08/31/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
cant wait for more
this is a really great fic
and the part where tom and bill had trouble communicating was funny
Date: 08/30/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this story is absolutely great, i love it. keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 08/29/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol, oh, what a fabulous first chapter, i love it!!
Date: 08/29/10 05:50 am Title: Chapter 5
This is so great, I love everything about this story. I really can't wait for more(:
Date: 08/29/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 5
oh noo! foolish attempts at separation? ugh why mess with a good thing, fixing what was never broken...yet
Date: 08/29/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter 5
I’m always so excited to see a new chapter of this fic! This chapter was amazing as usual, you are fantastic authors!
They are so cute and adorable together, the way they try to communicate but are always distracted, hilarious!
I felt so sad when they arrived at the place where the trees were all cut, you’re awesome at describing their emotion, I really was able to feel their pain!
I like the bond thing, how they can feel what the other is feeling! It makes everything even more intense!
Can’t wait to read more!
Date: 08/29/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow that bond is very powerful. The line that leads me to the dun-dun-dunnn is you can't break it if I'd know that it would have save a lot of heart ache. On my what kind of awful experiments do they go through to try and break the bond? Oh my Its going to get messy! Emo here we come! *giggles*
Date: 08/29/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5
;~; Yes, it's the "days that followed" bit that really worries me. My poor dear boys, I just want to spirit them away and shut them up in a tree bunk together away from all other things for a week minimum!
So much love for these boys and how thoroughly besotted they are. Thank you, thank you for writing this! I love it so. ♥ Each new update makes me squee, and I don't squee lightly.
Date: 08/29/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 4
I love their closeness, but I'm so worried for what's going to happen. ;~; I worry that Jost and Gustav are going to try to tear them apart, not understanding how closely they've already bonded.
Date: 08/28/10 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is sounding like some very sad time's are coming...especially since Bill and Tom are bonded so tightly already!
Date: 08/28/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
That's so sad. *pets the To'kais*
The last line, it seems like there's tragic to happen.
Date: 08/28/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awh, those poor trees. It's so amazing how a fic like this can make someone think about what's happening on Earth and see it from a different side. We don't have the To'Kai but we do have animals who feel pretty much the same way and would be astounded to see what humans have done. It's so sad how on Parthenia, a planet so full of plants and life, the humans cut out a clearing and they're taking the To'Kai there. I can almost feel Bill and the other To'Kai's sadness because it's just so powerful. ;_;
I love how you two described it. It's astounding. It's so descriptive that I was sitting here absolutely captivated by it. I'm so eager to see this go all the way to the end. ♥