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Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn Andi and Georg for ruining the mood. Update soon! :)

Reviewer: Reden_Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

OoOoOo! Sexy hexy in the first chappie? :D I'm liking this... xD  But all joking aside, this seems like a really unique and interesting story.  Bill's already too adorable and Tom is... well Tom is sexy xD  And I can just imagine a challenge cry by Andi and Georg haha! I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Litago Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh,this is delightful and exciting. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
xoxoxoxo Litago

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1

hehe poor bill and tom getting interupted just as thr getting it on *snickers* brilliant loves keep it up :DD

Reviewer: jeanisfunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 01:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this so far. :) Two of my favorite authors working together. I fail to see how this could go wrong.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap-what a welcome for Tom-too bad Andi and Georg had to drop in and ruin it...or not, can't wait to find out!!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1

...!!!

I think you ladies already know how utterly perfect I think this story is. Everything has its place - Jumbie the kiya, Bill the most alluring, curious To'Kai ever, Tom and his incautious presumption, and that lovely moment between the two of them that umetnica captured so well. LOVE THAT LIP BITE.

I adore Bill's playfulness and Tom's wonder. I'm enthralled over the instant crackle of attraction between them. And I am waiting with shining-eyed anticipation over what comes next.

Reviewer: BKDreist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

:D yay! i'm super excited for this. i love the details and the way you even have me picturing everything as though i'm seeing it for the first time. lovelovelove.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is already so interesting! *waits eagerly for more*

Reviewer: arty343 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

so far i like it! (:

Reviewer: tearose99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh I love this already! Bill is such an inquisitive little creature, and Tom is adorably clumsy and naive :)

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so unique and I love it so far! Bill and Tom's instant connection is palpable and so sexy. *_* I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

--OMG NO WHUT ANDREAS/GEORG GTFO PLS THEY WERE IN THE MIDDLE OF SOMETHING IMPORTANT :O

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is adorable. I like the way they're getting to know each other so quickly. More, please - as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

uh oh

i love this

Question: Did you do the banner? It is great

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

MORE. HOLY SHYT MORE. O.O

Reviewer: foreversacred13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh!!! I love it!!! It's sorta like Avatar!! (: Can't wait for moreeee!!! Yay!!

Reviewer: Nuclear_Glitter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lena's artwork is so amazing huh.

Anyway, I do believe I am going to enjoy it quite a bit. I have nothing good about you two and I have been waiting for you guys to co-author.

I must say I really commend your creativity; I enjoy it.

With this it's very unique because you're showing past and present all at once. So, it's literally like you're telling a story. I don't know if it all be this way but it made for a very interesting first chapter.

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

AHH! DAJKDFA! AAHSDFHKASDLF! I don't even know what to say! I love both of you enough already, but you two cowriting??? Oh my god, I'm litereally flipping out over here. The moment I finished the chapter, I let out a series of the stranges squawks and squeals that you'd ever hear. haha! I'm loving this so much!

I wonder what it is that caused them to become so attracted to each other so suddenly! Ohh man-o-man! I'm so excited to read more of this. =D

*Tracking*

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

those fucking cockblocks!!! xD

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