Date: 08/29/10 11:28 pm Title: Wardrobe!
I have one word to describe Lena : BITCH !
I don't like her AT ALL, and I'm sure it won't change.
Author's Response: WootWoot!! Thanks Soo Much For Thee Review! More Sooon! <3rnSN: Yeahh She Does Act Like A Real Bitch && A Half Doesn't She. ^_^!
Date: 08/23/10 11:48 pm Title: Extra Cheese
Yay! I'm so happy u posted! Bill is just so adorable & uber sensitive lol. I love the ending when Bill walked in on them. So funny. Renee's reaction to Bill fucking her friend was awesome =) More soon plz!
Author's Response: WootWoot! More Soooon!! MUAH! <3.
Date: 08/23/10 03:47 pm Title: Extra Cheese
Wow haha Bill has really great timing.
Man this is one fuckin great story and chapter plus it was funny x). Keep up the great writing your an amazing writer and hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Danke Schon, Mein Liebe!!rnMore Soooon
Date: 08/13/10 12:55 pm Title: Red Alert!
I'm so happy u've updated! I'm happy that Renee has ppl behind her on this. I hope the Dead Zone finds her dad & sends him to hell. Tom is so sweet & caring & OMG Billa got laid! I love it & can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: Yeahh The DZ Warriors have a special part in this story! Thank You So Much For The Review!! More soon!
Date: 08/13/10 12:49 pm Title: Red Alert!
omgsh i am loving this story and hopefully her father gets his dick cut off and the same scissors down his throat for what he did to her. update soon
Author's Response: Wow! Thank You So Much For The Review!
Date: 08/13/10 10:10 am Title: Red Alert!
Yay you updated!! I love this story its so good!! I can't get enough of this story ugh its FANTASTICALLY AH-MAZING =D and I hope you a good flight back home
Update soon :) 9 thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank You Sooo Much!! And I am home now but I have a lot of unpacking to do but I will be updating soon && I have a SPECiAl surprise for all my readers too!!!
Date: 08/12/10 12:45 am Title: The Nightmare Becomes a Reality
Omg there's not a next chapter! I'm flippin' out here O_O. Plz post more soon! Plz?
Date: 08/12/10 12:41 am Title: The Final Piece of the Puzzle
O hell no! He escaped! I'm shaking in my boots...okay so i'm not actually wearing any shoes but u know what I mean haha. Great chapter.
Date: 08/12/10 12:23 am Title: Peicing it Together
Omg! Great chapter.
Date: 08/12/10 12:16 am Title: Salt in the Wound
I just want to reach in & give Renee a hug, I feel sad for her. Tom is such a sweetheart. I love it!
Date: 08/12/10 12:10 am Title: Checking Out!
Sweet =) I absolutely love the ending. Great chapter.
Date: 08/12/10 12:03 am Title: Herbal Therapy
How awesome would it be to be lounging back next to Tom in his car passing a blunt. That would be the fucking awesome! xD
Date: 08/11/10 11:51 pm Title: Bathroom Break(s)
Renee cracks me up lol. She touched his weiner xD I laughed so hard. Wow she actually hear him jerking off & yeah I don't blame her for getting off on it hehe. Great chapter.
Date: 08/11/10 11:34 pm Title: The China Lounge
Ugh! Figures, damn Tom lol. I bet that was an awkward moment. The greeting that Bill gave Renee has me wondering if he likes her. Hmm. Great chapter.
Date: 08/11/10 11:20 pm Title: Happy Birthday
Omg poor Renee! I feels so bad for her to have to go thru what she did with her dad...The whole phone conversation was funny & leave it to Tom to refer to Renee as the chick with the "big tits" haha. Another great chapter.
Date: 08/11/10 11:03 pm Title: In The Shadows
Holy shit! Tom scared the crap out of me grabbing her in the dark like that lol. I'm happy it was Tom there tho & not some weird o. I love Tom's sudden need to be concerned & not even knowing why. Great chapter.
Date: 08/11/10 10:54 pm Title: Admit One
Sry I didn't comment on the first chapter, I was in a hurry to read on lol. This is so awesome & funny. Omg! I'd die if I had been in Renee's shoes when Bill approached her *sighs* Bill's reaction to signing Somalia heart was priceless but I thought that whole scene was sweet. Lol, I love how Renee called out to Tom making him come back to her. Great chapters.
Author's Response: Thank You So Much!! I Really Appreciate it!! People Like You Really Keep Me Motivated To write. There will Be More Soon. Promise!!
Date: 08/10/10 09:34 pm Title: The Nightmare Becomes a Reality
Eeeeeppppp!!!!! You updated woot woot!!! *fist pump* I love love this story its so AH-mazing I know Tom will whatever it take to keep her safe but I wonder if Renee has a crush on Officers Thompson?hhmm does she?
Update soon and keep the FANTASTIC writing 10 thumbs up
Author's Response: Yay!! You Made Me Smile!! (*fist pump* HILARIOUS!!) Thank You Sooo Much. . .&& About Officer Thompson. . .You'll Just Have To Wait && Seeee!!! MUAH!
Date: 08/08/10 11:57 pm Title: The Final Piece of the Puzzle
Oh no!!! The bad man is out!!! Lol uh oh now im scared! Good chapter!!! Keep up the juicy work ;-)
Author's Response: Thank You, Love!! More Soon!
Date: 08/08/10 10:24 pm Title: The Final Piece of the Puzzle
noo freakin way?!
her dad out :( :/
mannnnnnn this gona get interesting
Author's Response: More To Come, Love. Thanks For The Review!!!