Date: 08/18/10 02:50 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
WOOHOO! THEY KISSED!!
i loved this chapter!
and i'm glad you're back...please update soon X
Author's Response: Yes :D haha. Thank you! I will sure update soon, Got loaaaads of free time :) x
Date: 08/18/10 02:31 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
YEs it really did come unexpected O_O
Author's Response: Cheer! xD
Date: 08/01/10 12:04 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
I WANT MORE!!!
Author's Response: You'll get more :D
Date: 07/30/10 02:20 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
So good!!! :D :D
Author's Response: Thankssss ^^
Date: 07/30/10 01:45 am Title: There's more than one side to everyone
wow!! i didnt expect that lol but the chapter was awesome, cant wait to read the next chapter
i really like your story btw :]
Author's Response: hehe yes I thought, Highschool, that has got to include a drunken scene xD rnThank you very much!x
Date: 07/29/10 09:29 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
WOW, HOW DID THE OTHER BRUISE GET THERE? DID HE SOME ONE IN HIS FAMILY BEAT HIM? I REALLY NEED TO KNOW!! BUT NOW, I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
:(
Author's Response: You'll find out what's happening, this is definitely going te return in the story! rn& I'll make sure I update fast :)
Date: 07/29/10 06:10 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
im so happy. billa must be getting it at home too. tom needs to 2 and 2 together and figure it out and help him
Author's Response: He should indeed try to figure it out! let's see what happens :)
Date: 07/29/10 06:08 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
ooh, i like it! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 07/29/10 05:12 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
i love it its so good lol
Author's Response: hehe, thanks!
Date: 07/29/10 04:30 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
HAHA it reminds me last years school trip I got drunk and way out of hand :D
can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: haha yes I know what it's like ;p rnmore will be up soon! x
Date: 07/29/10 03:07 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
thanks for the quick update, you are on a roll!I loved this chapter, drunk bill is the best!
is bill getting abused at home?
"The cornrowed boy shook his head in disbelieve "
^^ one more thing its disbelief not disbelieve =)
im looking forward to more
please update soon X
Author's Response: Yes I am haha! I don't know what caused it but I feel like writing just about all the time now so.. yeah ;p rnrnWhat's happening with Bill will return quickly ;o and oh thank you haha! didn't notice that mistake. rnrnI'll make sure to have more soon. rnrnxx
Date: 07/29/10 03:05 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
I really like this plot. Tom has begun being drawn to Bill and is becoming aware of the effects he and his friends' treatment of Bill is doing to the other boy. Looking forward to next ch. *Maria
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! more will be up soon :)
Date: 07/29/10 02:54 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
Oh lord-Bill's gonna feel like sh*t in the morn...and die of embarrassment!
Wonder if Tom will figure out about the other bruise's or just let it go...thanks for the fast update
Author's Response: haha yes, he probably will xD. rn& you're welcome. Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/29/10 02:53 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
So...the teachers threw a party that had alcoholic beverages...for a bunch of high school students?
Author's Response: I dunno if you know Passoa but it's not a strong drink ;p at all. the vodka of course, the teachers didn't know about.
Date: 07/29/10 01:58 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
totally loved this chapter!!! really awesome! =D and i love the way u dealt with the tattoo thing!! so great =D =D *can't stop smiling*
i really liked it ^^ can't wait for more =D =D =D =D
Author's Response: Thanks you, I'm glad you liked it :D rnI'll be writing more soon ^^
Date: 07/29/10 01:56 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
Getting interesting. :)
Do you have a beta or anyone who would be willing to look this over? There aren't too many mistakes but there are just enough that with a little editing, the story could be even better.
Author's Response: No, All I do really is just checking it myself but yeah, I'm not english so I guess there are pretty much mistakes I don't notice xD I'll try to look for someone to beta it. rnrnthanks x
Date: 07/28/10 08:23 pm Title: Faith has its turns
ok just let the guilt consume him. like please don't kill him, just make him think about the wrongs his done. but if you could punish his stupid friends that would be great. when will you be updating?
Author's Response: Haha, I'll try to think of something for them to be punished ;p rnI'm updating right now! rnrnx
Date: 07/28/10 03:27 pm Title: Faith has its turns
Oh i love these kind of stories!Just as it's suppose to be, please be quick with updating, i'm already ready for more!
Author's Response: thank you! I'm working on it ;) rnx
Date: 07/28/10 01:32 pm Title: Faith has its turns
Like it, update? :D
Author's Response: I soon will!^^ thanks for your review :)
Date: 07/28/10 12:47 pm Title: Faith has its turns
ghaaah! i absolutely love it so far! =D didn't want the first chapter to end so soon though... i wonder which of the tattoos is new in this fic! =D that way i can strart imagining how surprized tom's going to be =P is he gonna be like "wow, u've got one tat" or "oh my fucking shizzle u've got 4! =0" =P *needs to know*
i can't wait to read more!!! eeeeeeeeek ^^
Author's Response: Iiih thank you so much your review really made me good mooded haha ^^rnI'll certainly update this soon :) and I got it all figured out how it's gonna go with the tattoo-stuff ;p