Date: 08/22/10 04:48 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
HOT! Woah, can't wait for them to wake up togeter;)
Author's Response: thanks for your review! x
Date: 08/22/10 06:48 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
i love this story and Tom is such an ass in it i bet he is going to go back to being a dick to Bill ... please update soon :)
Author's Response: thanks you i'm glad you like it :) Let's see what happens next..!:p I'll update as quick as possible xx
Date: 08/21/10 01:35 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
thanks for the quick update...yea there were quite a few errors in the text but the content allowed me to get over it XP
what is Tom actualli doing here, heacts like he doesn't know bill then fucks him later??? i realli wanna know his intentions. Will this story ever be from his POV, or are we sticking to Bill's?
Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry for that xDrnrnYes, I will write in Tom's POV too so you guys get some insight in his head ;) rnThanks for the review! xx
Date: 08/21/10 11:04 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Oh geloof me, je bent heel goed in het schrijven van seks ;) We want more!
xXx Steffi
Author's Response: dankjewel :D x
Date: 08/21/10 10:43 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
I love it. Enough said.
Author's Response: thank you!!! :D
Date: 08/21/10 09:28 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Thanks for the update!
my favourite chapter yet!
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! dw you're writing the smut well...
please update soon X
Author's Response: You're welcome! rnand thank you I'm happy you liked it :) rnrnI'll try to update as soon as possible x
Date: 08/21/10 06:17 am Title: Faith has its turns
make tom jealous!
Author's Response: hahah xD maybe I will!
Date: 08/21/10 04:55 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
your good at writing sex :)
Author's Response: hahahaha thank you! :D
Date: 08/20/10 11:42 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
:P OMG whens ur next update gonna be? this is so good. WOO!
Author's Response: I think I'll have some new ready by wednsday (I don't know how to write that xD) thank you dear :D x
Date: 08/20/10 11:29 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
this fic is so thrilling!! Is the only one I'm reading right now and I fuckin' love it!!! It's sooo good and that update was priceless, what was mean to happen actually happened!! too bad you're leavin' and won't update tonight 'cause I really need to read MORE
Author's Response: haha :p thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you like it. I'm gonna try to get some pieces done on my cell phone while I'm not home, so I can update as soon as I come back ;D x
Date: 08/20/10 11:20 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Hey!! I just came across this fic and I really like it so far! I'm really excited for the next chapter. :)
The only thing is that some of your vowels have accents over them, and there are several small mistakes. Other than that, everything's awesome!
Author's Response: thank you i'm glad you like it! rnI know, mostly I re-check everything and get out most of the mistakes (although it's never gonna be perfect, i'm not english) but with that last chapter I had absolutely no time to correct anything but I wanted to post it anyway xD I'll try the correct everything as soon as possible :) x
Date: 08/20/10 09:42 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
SHIT. Screw Tobias.
That was hot. INDEED.
Author's Response: I agree :D thank you!n x
Date: 08/20/10 07:57 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
meh happy :)
lol
I wonder if someone heard them ???
they where pretty loud haha
Author's Response: wait and find out! ;D I'm glad you're happy! thanks for your reviewx
Date: 08/20/10 07:31 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Sooo good! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you! I think I'll get you some new stuff by wednsday (I don't know how you write wednsday haha) x
Date: 08/20/10 02:41 am Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
AWESOME CHAPTER! :D
i can't waitt to read what happens next undd know about tom's reaction after suchh a heated make-out session lol xD
Author's Response: thank you! You'll find out soon what happens next ;)
Date: 08/20/10 01:14 am Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
i have to review again. when are u gonna update again?? :P i rly like this
Author's Response: haha xp I'm starting the new chapter today, so maybe if it goes smoothly I'll have some tonight! otherwise it'll be after the weekend because tomorrow and tomorrow-over I'm not home. but I will try to have it tonight :) thank you!
Date: 08/20/10 12:24 am Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
Holy crap-didnt see that coming either!!
I'm thinking Tom really does like Bill, or he's playing Bill for a sucker, or maybe he made a bet with someone---you have my mind going like a pinball with this! LOL
Thank's for the update and you know I will be waiting for another
Author's Response: Good that you're trying to figure it out ;D His intentions will become clear soon. You're welcome, thank YOU for the review! more will come soon x
Date: 08/19/10 08:18 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
Gah, I love this story so much. :D Tom's such an asshole. D: I hope he figures himself out soon and stops taking his sexual frustrations out on Bill by being an asshole. I'm glad that you said it won't be another cheesy love story - the tension you've created in your characters is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: thank you so much for your review :D Im glad you like it. That's what I always wonder, if I'm building up the tension in the right way.. I'm happy I seem to succeed ^-^ you wont have to wait long, I'll make sure I'll have new chapter quickly!:D x
Date: 08/19/10 07:48 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
Someone just had to interrupt it....*shakes head*
*heart* :)
Author's Response: of course, had to happen right?:p I wanted you make you all wait a bit, who knows what happens next ;o x
Date: 08/19/10 07:33 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
OMGGGGGGGG i love this. OMG they kisseddd. OMGGG OMMGGG stupid tobias
Author's Response: hahaha Im glad you like it! :D thanks for your review x