Date: 09/04/10 01:11 pm Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
This was an excellent update. Tom is really not in touch with his diplomatic side... Bill is in love - he's excused to make foolish decisions. But Tom will hopefully soon find out what it is he gets from Bill that he can't get anywhere else and it the reason why he's filled up with confusion desire for the boy.
Author's Response: thank you! more will come soon i'm already working on the next chapter, let's hope Tom comes to his senses :p x
Date: 09/04/10 09:37 am Title: There's more than one side to everyone
Obviously Tom and his friends are not the only ones beating Bill... =(
Author's Response: Indeed ;( more revealings will come soon! thanks for reviewing x
Author's Response: Indeed ;( more revealings will come soon! thanks for reviewing x
Date: 09/04/10 07:09 am Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
D: Poor Bill. Tom is such a bitch >
Author's Response: he is! but he'll get his wake up call :) thanks for reviewing!x
Date: 09/04/10 05:57 am Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
i wonder what song he wrote... i hope its not in die nacht that song is in every story
Author's Response: It's not :) It's not gonna be a tokio hotel song at all, it's just this song I love so much and because of it, I got to the idea of this whole story xD so wait and see :D thanks for reviewing x
Date: 09/04/10 03:51 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
good? you're fuckin' awesome at it!! I went crazy trying to find this fic to see if there was an update and then after the long search in two more sites and thfinders I remembered I had tracked it, thanks god! It's the best I'm reading right now, please finish it, it's just too good to be left unfinished. The plot is original 'cause bill is shy and virginal but he isn't an idiot like in most fics when he doesn't even know what a dick is, also tom being a jerk always makes the stories more real, like I can totally picture him and his friends punchin' bill, makin' fun, being popular and fuckin' girls. And I love how he is a man of few words here, and that you're keepin' it real and tom hasn't go all crazy about bill in the blink of an eye, that's usually a problem with most writers here, they make tom abusive and mean to bill and then after just a small kiss he changes and comes out of the closet...I mean eventually he might have to come to terms with whatever the fuck he's feeling but for now it's just about lust, is real and bill knows it, even MORE realistic if you ask me.
Can't say much more but if you keep workin' on this one I'll review more often to keep you motivated! lol
Author's Response: waaw oh my god your review made my day xD You're right, I don't like it when it's just like this typical fairytale that Tom falls head over heels for the one he used to bully, it's not realistic indeed so I wanted to do it differently. It's gonna take some more for Tom to go for this ^-^ And on the other hand I wanted to write something I could relate to so I got Bill pretty much obsessed and stuck on Tom like in real life I pretty much am with Bill :') That way I can make the words better. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing and making me happy :DDD more will be up soon. xx
Date: 09/04/10 12:46 am Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
Tom's a douche and Bill should live in the real world...they both had someone else. I know Bill is "overly obsessed" with Tom and know's how Tom is, but come on...can't Tom have a little compassion instead of just treating Bill like another fu*k, just as he is his "girlfriend"? I'm hoping thing's turn around soon.
Author's Response: Conclusion: they're both being overly stupid and need a wake up call :p Trust me, they'll get it, both. Thanks for reviewing! x
Date: 09/04/10 12:36 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
I'd say you're pretty good a writing sex! I enjoyed it. Wonder what Bill's thought's will be now, and really want to know when/if Tom will find out Bill was really a virgin. Off to the next chapter...
Author's Response: The next one will be up soon I promise :D I'm glad you liked it! x
Date: 09/03/10 11:30 pm Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
more more and more i love this story made me cry
Author's Response: awh ;( there will be more soon I promise! thanks for your review x
Date: 09/03/10 09:42 pm Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
Thanks for the update! I love reading this story.
Author's Response: you're welcome, thank YOU for reading & reviewing :D x
Date: 09/03/10 08:01 pm Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
D:
what about Bill's boyfriend? O_O
Author's Response: More of that is gonna be revealed soon! x
Date: 08/30/10 09:45 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Amazing story!
Author's Response: thank you! <3
Date: 08/26/10 06:52 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Okay so I just read this again xD I just love this fic so friggin' much! Lol. Anywho....I don't know why it didn't dawn on me before but...Holy crap! Tom took Bill's virginity! I wonder tho if Tom will ever find out? I'm just curious about what Tom's reaction to such a thing would be hehe. Again, I love this & can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: haha yes I have a plan for that one though I don't know yet how I'm gonna let Tom react to it xD I'm glad you like the story :D thanks for your review xx
Author's Response: haha yes I have a plan for that one though I don't know yet how I'm gonna let Tom react to it xD I'm glad you like the story :D thanks for your review xx
Date: 08/25/10 12:41 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Holy shit, that was pretty intense
Author's Response: yeah :p
Date: 08/24/10 07:39 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
Omg! This is just amazing. I absolutely love it! I'm so sad that there isn't a next chapter :( I seriously need to read more of this. O plz post again sooooon. Plz?
Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D i'm currently writing the next one so if I get some time today, It won't be long before the new one is up :) x
Date: 08/24/10 07:14 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
That was steamy hehe. I hope Bill stays smart & i'm sure that Tom hurting him will possibly be inevitable but hopefully he won't be hurt too badly. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Let's hope Bill doesn't get carried away to much! ;o But Tom may have a bit to much influence on him.. Thank you for your review! & again thank you for reviewing on every single chapter, waaw, I feel honoured you took the time to do that :D I hope I can keep amuzing you with the story. x
Date: 08/24/10 06:54 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
I feel so bad for Bill & the way Tom & his friends treat him. I'm happy that Bill finally stood up to him even though he pretty much got his ass kicked again. Omgosh! They kissed!
Author's Response: Yeah let's not underestamate Billi here :D He's quite the tough one himself! and yessss hahah :') I had no idea how I was going to write that and than it just came and I thought omfg <3_<3 that's it! thank you x
Date: 08/24/10 06:29 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
O wow Bill is trashed lol. I love how Tom, although he didn't seem to really want to, took care of Bill & how he was intrigued with the tats & wondered about the bruises. It was almost as if he cared? Great chapter.
Author's Response: yeah I really wanted to write that trashed part hahahah I enjoyed that alot xD rnMaybe Tom isn't as cold as he thinks he is ;o he could surprise us, maybe.. Thank you !x
Date: 08/24/10 06:03 pm Title: Faith has its turns
This is really good =) I'm lovin' it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 08/23/10 04:27 am Title: In three days, the world can be turned
so, i like this story, and kind of want to track it, but you really need a beta. its gotten better than the first few chapters, but the grammar, spelling and typing mistakes really take away from the story. i'm not trying to be mean, just honest, because you could lose readers because of it. I want to see where this goes though, because the rest of it is good.
Author's Response: yeah I know I'll try to search someone for that :) I'm glad you like it anyway!
Date: 08/22/10 04:54 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
OMG it was really awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: thanks! i'll try to have more as soon as possible :) x