Date: 10/21/10 06:48 pm Title: In times of need..
I wanna be someone’s proud.” Proud is an adjective. Try using 'pride' instead. I love this story, and the way it's turning out
Author's Response: Ohh okay thank you for the tip, I'll edit it xD Glad you like it!
Date: 10/21/10 05:57 pm Title: In times of need..
:D :D :D :D OH MY GOODNESS!! Two days in a row of updates!!!!!! I'm in heaven! The email told of updates and there was much REJOICE! ^-^ I love how you said in the beginning that this was going to be a short chapter but it was about the same length as "long" chapters in other stories! I'm not really one for commenting but I seem to need to every time I read this story, so that means it's super special!!! xD
Well I'm going to go do the homework I'm supposed to be finished with already. "Andrea why isn't your homework done?" "Ummm mom i was distracted...organizing my....shoes???" xD
Author's Response: haha I'm glad that you feel good when I update :D I feel really honoured that you review then, thank you so much :) and haha yes I know what you mean with the distracted thingxDD
Date: 10/21/10 05:41 pm Title: In times of need..
awww IM GONNA KICK DYLAN S ASS
Author's Response: Yeah we all should :o
Date: 10/21/10 05:36 pm Title: In times of need..
Onnhh *wipes tears from my eyes*
Author's Response: awhh <3
Date: 10/21/10 05:20 pm Title: Faith has its turns
phew! thank god he's not gonna stomp out like that! =0 wouldn't want bill sick on top of everything else... yay for u already haven written the piece that comes next *hopes that means quick update*
Author's Response: I have very good news for you: I have just updated :DD So it's getting though the check-up right now and will probably be up.. I dunno, in a couple hours or so? It's kind of short but it's a part on its own and I didn't want anything else with it, I think people will like it :)
Date: 10/21/10 03:00 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
yay for tom's mom! and yay for tom finally getting it together! but wtf is he thinking dragging bill through the rain for atleast 15 min (it'll take longer for tom while carrying sm1) dressed in nothing but a blanket?! get the boy dressed first! he's gonna need clothes and shit for school anw... (if he's up to going tomorrow)
but it was a really great chapter ^____^
Author's Response: wait wait, they haven't left the house yet HAHAH I already wrote the piece that comes next so don't worry he won't do that xDDD thank you! x
Date: 10/21/10 02:39 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
TOM!!! If I were Simone I would have disowned him already!! Gaaaaaaaaahhh He's such an idiooooot!! He better make things better!! Ugh... But at least he saved Bill from Dylan. Eww.. The sick son of a bitch!! *huggles Bill* But I stil believe Tom doesn't deserve to be forgiven. Yet. After all the things he did... Goodness. And he should make up his mind already and stop this caring for Bill at one moment and in the next letting his friends / or him make fun of him and hurt him!! What a coward.. *chases Tom w/Butcher knife*
I hope Bill's going to be alright... Being the overdramatic me, I thought Bill's gonna have a breakdown or something, shutting everyone else out. I could just see Bill so broken, so lost, so numb, lifeless... Even Tom in tears and pleading couldn't wake him up - that's me wanting to punish and torture Tom for what he did LOL...
I hope the next chapter's a better one! And TOM better straighten himself up!! Bill doesn't deserve to be in that miserable state that he's in right now. Gaaaaaahhh
Author's Response: But maybe Tom will get some punishment anyway, cause even though Bill might seem weak sometimes, I don't think I'll let him forget what Tom did that easily, Tom will have to work for it ;) But in any case, next chapter will be all about comforting Bill and nomatter what happens next, Tom will take his time for it so that may be a step in the right direction! more is coming soonx
Date: 10/21/10 02:22 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
Good, Tom. I'm proud of you even if Simone had to nudge you. I feel positive that somewhere along the line you would have wanted to go by yourself to make sure Bill was okay after the bullying he got. But the actions you took at Bill's place were purely your own. It was a whoot of epic proportions when you grabbed Bill and took him away. I just hope you dare to stand by your convictions this time and really protect Bill because he sure makes you more happy than your so-called friends.
Terrific chapter!
*Maria
Author's Response: You're very right haha! thank you for the review, let's see what Tom decides to do next ;)
Date: 10/21/10 01:48 pm Title: Expectation always leads to disappointment
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH... TOM YOU IDIOT!! *stabs* Now look at what you did, you ass!!!!
Aww Bill *huggles* He's just too miserable he needs glitter and sparkle and happiness in his life like.. NOW!! Geeeeeeeeeezz...
*moves on to next chapter*
Author's Response: haha! yes he needs glitter and sparkle, that is a fact. Tom is.. confused xD but he'll notice than besides Bill, he also messes up himself with that ;o
Date: 10/21/10 01:39 pm Title: You can't deny yourself
Dun dun dun duuuuuuuuun!!XDD Ahahahahaha...
Tom. You're still an asshole. I kinda understand why he was acting like that, but he's still an ass..XD
Poor Bill. You and your martyrdom. Or something!! Gaaaaahhh... But how can you resist A TOM??XD
Author's Response: hahah xD They both have kind of fucked up heads right? Bill so over-obsessed and Tom so overly-scared and probably ashamed of his feelings with which he drives himself insane.:') thanks for reviewing again,!x
Date: 10/21/10 01:32 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
WOOOWW.. They moved fast...O__O Hope there's really something in there between them other than the sexual attraction lol. Like LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. Good luck with Bill. He's going to hurt the most if things get too messed up..@__@
Author's Response: Yeah I know that went fast, but sex isn't everything right ;) A lot has to be solved! thank you for reviewing x
Date: 10/21/10 01:28 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
Just started reading this aaaaaaaanndd..XD I think it's interesting.
Tom is a douchebag. And some kind of bi-Polar. But I believe he's just torn and confused and frustrated as well with this secret frustration within him, of secretly wanting Bill - although he's not kind of aware of it yet. But it's not a secret anymore cause they kissed in the end...XD I kinda liked that kind of transition when at first they were fighting and then all of a sudden their touch turn different and they just go passionate, kissing and/or groping and stuff...XD Frustrated attraction. Or whatever else it's called. Hahahaha..XD
Author's Response: I totally agree, I love scenes where they fight and suddenly the passion comes up, I love love love it so I just HAD to write a piece like that! xD thank you, I'm glad you like it! x
Date: 10/21/10 01:21 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
*gasp* it was really interesting can't wait :D
Author's Response: You won't have to wait long, I already have a piece of the next chapter^^
Date: 10/21/10 01:19 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
tom truly acted like a knight in shining armor. :">
Author's Response: Adorable isn't it! :D
Date: 10/21/10 12:32 pm Title: Abandon yourself for something better
Wow I am so glad Tom is becoming Knight of Shining Armor to Bill.
Author's Response: haha <3
Date: 10/21/10 11:07 am Title: Abandon yourself for something better
Omg!!!!! So so soso adorable!!!
Author's Response: haha! glad you like it :D
Date: 10/21/10 10:18 am Title: Abandon yourself for something better
yay tomi the hero :) more soon :)
Author's Response: There sure will! ;)
Date: 10/21/10 10:11 am Title: Abandon yourself for something better
I almost cried :( poor, poor Bill. Good thing that Tom saved him!
Author's Response: yes indeed! I thought the same way you did, poor Bill! something good should happen. So then this came^^
Date: 10/21/10 09:56 am Title: Abandon yourself for something better
Tom to the rescue-thank god!!! I was so scared Dylan would not be stopped. Will Bills parents still believe in Dylan, or will they finally see what kind of dirtbag douche he really is?!
Author's Response: Let's hope for that second option! ;o
Date: 10/21/10 09:45 am Title: Abandon yourself for something better
i love it!!! Very good!
Author's Response: thank you! :D