Date: 11/21/10 05:08 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
i like it so much ^_________^
great story keep writting
Author's Response: I'm really happy you do! :$ More will be up very soon x
Date: 11/21/10 09:49 am Title: Some sort of dangerous game
OMG!!! Yaaaaaaay! Thanks fir the awesome update!
Author's Response: You're welcome :) More will be up soon, I'm almost done with the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/20/10 06:46 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
wow, this is so good. the drama! the suspense! the romance! i love it all. can't wait for the rest. *adding story to favorites*
Author's Response: Hahahahah! xD Thank you I'm really glad you like it :) Long live drama ^-^
Date: 11/20/10 04:33 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
i'm glad Bill yelled at Tom. =) can't wait for more, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hah :) JUst wait for the next chapter, There will definitely be some changes.. Thank you, I'm glad you like it! :D
Date: 11/19/10 05:13 pm Title: Faith has its turns
i wanna see Tom suffer,Bill lets him of waaay to easy!
Author's Response: Just be patient, we're almost there :)
Date: 11/19/10 08:34 am Title: Some sort of dangerous game
If Tom needs Bill so much, he will have to get over his "status" and show Bill he means it---can't wait to see how this goes!
Author's Response: Yes he should!:o But Bill will make sure Tom knows what he's destroying, don't worry x
Date: 11/18/10 09:14 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
Seriously, if Tom needs Bill so bad...why the F*CK is he still messing around with Lera?
Author's Response: Cause he's scared to completely change his life ;(
Date: 11/18/10 08:57 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
i feel bad for Bill...He wants him but he doesn't want to be the dirty little secret...this was a good chapter. I really liked the whole thing...a lot seemed to happen this chapter...the parents, the dance, Niko, Tom...great work.
Author's Response: Yeah. It isn't easy to be thát into someone ;o thant you, I'm glad you liked it! x
Date: 11/18/10 08:46 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
WOW...so much love and tension!
i love this story!!! cant wait for more!!! *sits and waits*
xoxo
Author's Response: More will be up soon :DD kisses x
Date: 11/18/10 08:06 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
Oh & I forgot to say....Fucks Like A Star. Nice choice. I love Porcelain and the Tramps =)
Author's Response: Shared feeling!:DDDDDD
Date: 11/18/10 07:57 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
AWESOME! I love the whole jealousy thing & how Tom just couldn't take it anymore & drug him to the bathroom. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 11/18/10 04:33 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
LOL NOW I UNDERSTAND...XD Ahahahahaha... I saw the email notification - your response to my review last time and when nothing came up after I clicked on the link, I knew something was different. YAY for the fix!! Long chapters are luuuuuuuurrvvee..XD
Bill doesn't need glitters! He already sparkles being his extravagant self. Hahahahaha I actually like the Niko/Bill thing, I think Niko's sincere and all that. He seems nice. And they could be happy together without hiding in the closet. Poor boy's only being used though. But then again, who has Bill's heeeaaaaarrt..??!?! Tom. Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom, Toooooooooom.
Why was this boy destroying his life? And what was it, goddamn what was it that made all his insides starve for Tom every time over, no matter what Tom did again? He hated it, and he loved it, and he hated to love it. - Ooooohh, I love this..XD Tom's just too hard to resist, mate. I bid Bill good luck with the whole resistance thing. But if things aren't going to change, he's just going to get hurt more and that's just awful.
WAAAAAAAAAAAHHH I can't wait for the next one...O___O
Author's Response: Hahaha! I'm glad you're happy that there was more :DDD seriously what esle can happen?! I'm ready to throw my laptop out the window!xD but I won't do that because otherwise there would be no story :$. I like Niko too. You know when I was writing the thing I didn't even realize how mean Bill was actually being. Because you're right, he's so using that pour guy and I seriously oly discovered that after writing it, I'm just too caught up in writing the entire tom-bill-storyline :p. In the next chapter something different will happen though, maybe Bill will gain some straighnt (?) to get himself together. He's been hurt enough, right? More will be up soon, I already have over 2000 words for the next :D with a little bit of nice smut at the start *.* xx
Date: 11/18/10 04:32 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
Well that's much better than the last one I read. I was sitting there thinking...why the hell is this so short. but I see...well if it makes you feel better the short had a nice ending. Although I HAD THOUGH HE OPENED HIS PHONE TO SEE A NEW MESSAGE FROM TOM not that he was creating a message for Tom.
Author's Response: Hahahah. Yes well I'm sorry for the confusion with the short chapter, I hope everyone finds the new one! I'm happy you liked it :) x
Date: 11/18/10 03:41 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
OMG fucking awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: thanks! :D
Date: 11/18/10 02:59 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
Wooow,thanks for this amazing chapter.
Is very long and hot and i love very,very much how you write!!!
I can't wait to read next chapter,I am very very excited about how Tom will make in public with Bill as his boyfriend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Post soon dear,and sweet writer:)))
Author's Response: Awhh thank you so much what a lovely compliment :D Thanks for reviewing and reading! more will be up soon xx
Date: 11/18/10 02:29 pm Title: Some sort of dangerous game
Bill let him off very easily, I wouldn't have minded to see Tomi suffer a bit. That was very asshole-ish when he didn't even text him the whole week...If he 'needs' him that bad as he says, he wouldn't be able to just ignore Bill like that. I'm happy with the story though. There were quite a lot of typo's in this chapter and you mixed up Niko with Mike a few times, but it was a great chapter nonetheless!
Author's Response: Yeah I had two accidents during the correction so the third time I got a bit îssed and didn't look it over so well anymore.. :') Sorry for that. And just hold on a bit more, we're almost there, Tomi will suffer xDDD. oh and never underestimate love that goes so far you'll just forgive the other person anything out of fear to completely loose him. Trust me, it happens. and yeah I did mention that people just had to ignore mixing up the names since I wrote big parts of it on my cell and I forgot the name I used in the last chapter for that character, so I invented something and tried to get it fixed later :p but then I had MORE trouble with posting the chapter and after re-posting it I forgot to mention it in the description. I'm gonna go do a quick check-up ;p Thank you that you liked it anyway! x
Date: 11/18/10 12:27 am Title: But there's something there
Awww...love the ending. Seems Tom is making progress-slowly but at least hes trying!
Author's Response: Yeah he is :) Maybe everything will be okay soon!
Date: 11/16/10 11:52 pm Title: Faith has its turns
You'll be surprised. But out of all the stories I am tracking. I'm waiting on yours. I seriously thought I wasn't going to like it and it was just something to read. But here I am making a review so ja. Update. Otherwise I may have to do something drastic.
Author's Response: Awhhh I feel really honoured now :$ i'm currently working on the final touch of my chapter, correcting the mistakes and everything.. If I hurry up I can still get it online tonight :) something drastic hu? Now what might that be?;p thank you for reviewing & reading, I appreciate it a lot x
Date: 11/10/10 10:48 pm Title: But there's something there
no no no! don't end it here! KEEP GOING!!! UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE SSSOOOOOONNN!!!
Author's Response: I will update soon haha!
Date: 11/06/10 11:03 am Title: But there's something there
omg i love this story its so cute and i cant wait for you to write more
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)