Date: 11/24/10 12:25 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Way to go Bill! It seems Bill walking away seems to be the only way to make Tom realize. I'm excited to read more! Thanx for the quick update =) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I think that indeed was the only way to make him see! I'll try to get more quickly :) You're welcome, thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11/24/10 12:15 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
woho! i love angry, jealous devestated Tom, he deserves it
Author's Response: He sure does! ;o
Date: 11/24/10 12:13 pm Title: Game over
Very good chapter.
Thank you very much!!!
Author's Response: awh, thank YOU for reding and reviewing! I'm glad you like it:)
Date: 11/24/10 12:00 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Good Tom... because you can't get any lower than this now.
Brave Bill. He sacrificed their relationship acknowledging he can't get any further. Like he said, he's out of options now. So, like you hinted, Tom will make up now :) Good *g*
Author's Response: yup :p he's gonna have to try hard!
Date: 11/24/10 11:22 am Title: Game over
OMG awesome can't wait really cool :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/24/10 09:53 am Title: Game over
:O i am compleatly in love with this story!!
Moreeeeee pleaseee :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are :D thank you for reviewing!x
Date: 11/24/10 04:22 am Title: Game over
The photo shoot is fabulous :)
The smut was quite good, and your Bill had developed a lot in this story from a grey mouse to a very confident young man.. Tom is still hopelessly infatuated by Bill and that is not going to stop any time soon, so I'm so curious what happens now. It must be spectacular because Tom is so close to losing Bill right now and maybe he realises that. I hope that he truly understands now that it's more important to save their relationship than him losing face. :) *Maria
Author's Response: Well one thing is sure, if tom doesn't realize himself Bill will MAKE him realize ;p thank you so much, I really appreciate your review. I'm glad you like the story! xx
Author's Response: Well one thing is sure, if tom doesn't realize himself Bill will MAKE him realize ;p thank you so much, I really appreciate your review. I'm glad you like the story! xx
Date: 11/24/10 03:22 am Title: Game over
Oh my GOD! That smut was just so fucking good! And on top of that the freakinī sexy photoshoot for Peta *Iīm dead*
Iīm sorry but I laughed to Tom "Bill, Bill, Bill, Bill, Bill, Bill" ^_^
And thank god Tom went running after Bill, oooh thank you thank you thank you! I canīt wait to read about their conversation
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked iiit :D and yes, I'll post again in an hour or so, so then you'll know ^^ thanks for reviewing and reading! x
Date: 11/24/10 02:49 am Title: Game over
More please, Since I came back this story has been my life. I need more. Amazing writer and amazing story
Author's Response: awhhh, thank you :$ I really appreciate that, I'm flattered xD x
Date: 11/24/10 02:26 am Title: Game over
Looking forward to next chapter!! :D
Author's Response: You won't have to wait long :D
Date: 11/24/10 01:40 am Title: Game over
Shit this is brillant! I hate tho how Tom's not the only one affected by his peer pressure. It breaks my heart that that Bill has to go thru it too. But it happens :( I hope Bill will let Tom talk to him & maybe explain. I'm praying that u are able to post again tomorrow, that would make my day xD Oh & yeah, I did see the photoshoot of the Peta ad...Seriously, i'm suprised i'm still alive. I thought I would go into cardiac arrest or something =)
Author's Response: I'm certainly going to post again today, promise ;) and yes, it happens. Let's see what they make out of their 'talk'! thanks for reading and reviewing x
Date: 11/24/10 12:54 am Title: Game over
Well, that photoshoot is smokin' and so is the bathroon scene you wrote-good lord how hot!!!! I cant wait to see how Tom get's out of this, hes either going to lose Bill or grow a pair and admit to everyone how he feels about Bill!
Author's Response: thank youuu haha I'm glad you liked it :D Just a bit patience and you know which one of the two it'll be, haha ^^
Date: 11/23/10 11:14 pm Title: Game over
NOOOO!!!!!!! it cant be over they love each other make Bill understand!!! ha ha i love this story its my favorite right now!!
Author's Response: awhhh It won't be over, my own heart is too weak to make that happen hahahaha xD thank you, I really appreciate that :D x
Date: 11/23/10 10:57 pm Title: Game over
Stupid Tom! Bill should punch him right in the face! :D
Author's Response: yes he should! He might not do that though :p But he'll certainly do other stuff that might give Tom a wake up call anyway :D
Date: 11/23/10 10:45 pm Title: Game over
mmmmm smexy beginning. Followed by heartache. my kind of chapter. great work again. I can't wait for tomorrow!...and yes those were pretty awesome pics for peta
Author's Response: haha, I'm glad you liked it :D thanks for reading and reviewing x
Date: 11/23/10 10:39 pm Title: Game over
OH-HOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY GAAAAAAAAHHHD THAT CHAINED UP PHOTOS WERE A DREAM COME TRUE....*___* I'd be dreaming of BDSMS tonight gaaaaaaaaaaahhh *flails*
LOL back to the story..XD THAT WAS ONE HOT, SMUTTY scene *fans self* restroom turned sauna... STEAMY HOT!!
Fucking school reputation or whatever. *huggles Bill* I think... Well, if it's really something that happened to a friend in real life - or if a Bill exists like that in my real life as a friend, I'd go try to pull Bill away from the situation, because he deserves to be treated better. I'd probably scold him too... Tom might really like/love him or whatever but if he can't protect his loved one from hurting all the more because of his stupid pride or whatever, then he doesn't deserve Bill's everything. Aaaish...=__= Waiting can be exhausting too, right? That's just my opinion, though. Hahahahaha... Ehm..@__@
Should I sleep the whole day and night now so I can read the next chapter tomorrow??XD Hahahahaha..XD
Author's Response: Indeed!! Like, literally :D Bill and Tom chained up and in cages.. I tyhought it would be a fantasy forever. Oh god, I was going straight to comatose xD okay ahum. rnrnThank you, I'm glad you liked the scene :D and yes, you're totally right. But Tom will realize soon, I promise, because Bill's gonna show us some strength and Tom might have to fight for the one who used to run after him ;o rnrnhahahahah you could do that xD So right now I'm gonna start correcting, I'm guessing I'll post in like, one hour or so, hopefully it gets controlled soon so you guys can read it ;) x
Date: 11/23/10 09:27 pm Title: Game over
100/100 loved ittttttt
Author's Response: thank youuu :D
Date: 11/23/10 07:15 pm Title: Game over
Tom really needs to stop this. If he loves Bill, he needs to stop being such a prick and show it. He can't keep hurting someone else's feelings to save his own ass.
Author's Response: Jup, and he'll soon come to realize! thank you for reading and reviewing x
Date: 11/23/10 06:39 pm Title: Game over
plz moreeee
Author's Response: More will be up soon!:)
Date: 11/23/10 06:30 pm Title: Game over
O_O *died*
Damn all of Tom's girlfriends!!! >[
And... tom...a bit...
Author's Response: yes ;( Tom is gonna have to work to really gain Bill's trust!