Date: 11/24/10 05:40 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
:O that was quick :D
I like the Cab driver *nodss head*
Tom should listen to him
Author's Response: Yes, I finished two parts at once :p Tom should indeed!
Date: 11/24/10 05:40 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Yes Tom, it's about time you pull your head out off your ass and do something about this horrible situation! *makes growling noises*
Now, I'm just dropping by to tell you just how much I'm enjoying this story! ;)
I feel so bad for Bill, and even a little bit for Tom. But most of all I want to smack Tom...hard! Dammit, he needs to step up and be the man Bill hopes he can be. No trotting after his friends all the time going "Yes sir, whatever you say sir. You want me to wipe your ass, sir?" Fuck, he needs to grow a pair of balls, 'cause he's certainly lacking them! *growls some more*
Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to see exactly how Tom is planning on making it up to Bill. I hope it involves a lot of begging, tons of humiliation (on Tom's behalf), laughing (on Bill's behalf) and a bitter-sweet make-up scene...
Aaah, never mind, I'll take anything! You just make things right, you hear me?! ;)
Author's Response: ahhh thank you so much, I really appreciate your review! :D I've got it all in my head what Tom will do to make it up.. and I think you'll all like it :DDD he's gonna try very hard to bring up the romantic side inside himself :p Thanks again for reading and reviewing!xx
Date: 11/24/10 04:53 pm Title: That's what you get when you let your heart win
*facedeskrepeat*..... im wondering how hard it would be to strangle Tom with his own hair at this point.
Author's Response: I bet you'd pull it off ;)
Date: 11/24/10 04:41 pm Title: Expectation always leads to disappointment
oh that's it, Tobias is goin down! *does a war-cry and lunges for Tobias' throat* i swear Tom had better make this right of he's next *stomps off to next chapter*
Author's Response: hahahahah :p I'm really glad you get into it so much that's what I write it for :D
Date: 11/24/10 04:21 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Cliffhanger!
Author's Response: don't you just love'em ;p rnrnhaha, no. I hate them myself xD
Date: 11/24/10 04:20 pm Title: Breaking down the walls II
oh now that's just so perfect, i love it! Bill and Tom are just so adorable together *goes into sappy fangirl mode*
Author's Response: yessss they're too cute <3 thank you!
Date: 11/24/10 03:41 pm Title: You can't deny yourself
dawww! i really think Tom's friends need to get a life, or a boyfriend
Author's Response: yeah, a boyfriend. I think that's exactly what they need! ;D
Date: 11/24/10 03:17 pm Title: The better the memory, the worse the aftermath
=_= damn you Tom *has strong urge to strangle him*.....
Author's Response: Who wouldn't ;o don't worry, he'll learn his lesson <3
Date: 11/24/10 02:54 pm Title: In three days, the world can be turned
whoa *fans self* that was very nice.
Author's Response: thanks! :D
Date: 11/24/10 02:52 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Oh my gosh I love this story! I'm glad Bill was so strong in this chapter and stood his ground! I can't wait for future chapters and see how Tom plans to fix this mess he's made. :)
Author's Response: I've got quite some ideas in my head and I think you guys will like it ;) Let's say it this way; Tom's gonna do his very best ! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I realy appreciate it and I'm happy you like it x
Date: 11/24/10 02:45 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
*is on the edge of seat waiting for the next chapter*
Author's Response: I'll do my best to get it up soon :D
Date: 11/24/10 02:24 pm Title: 'Too good' might also cause trouble
right now my mind is screaming "DAMN YOU TOBIAS!!!!!"... erm.. anyway, maybe that was for the best? but now im getting a really bad feeling about whats gonna happen.
Author's Response: Tobias is an ass ;(
Date: 11/24/10 02:00 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
@_@ holy sheep!..... what the world?! *drops jaw and rushes to next chapter*
Author's Response: HAHAHAH. Yeah I seemed to have shocked quite some people with this..:p
Date: 11/24/10 01:40 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Great update!!
Author's Response: Thank yu, I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 11/24/10 01:38 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
i hope things get better between them
i hope bill give tom another chance but i know he doesn't deserve it !
Author's Response: No he doesn't but people can change right? :) maybe if he tries heart enough, another chance can be given to him :)
Date: 11/24/10 01:38 pm Title: There's more than one side to everyone
well now... okay, this has redeemed Tom for the moment almost. i have a feeling that's all about to change though.
Author's Response: haha, I think so :p
Date: 11/24/10 01:20 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
Aaaaahw, poor Tommy *hugs* But it's his own fault tough. Curious to see what Tom is going to do, and if it's enough for Bill's liking! Love it!
Author's Response: Let's hope so :D thank you for reading & reviewing x
Date: 11/24/10 12:55 pm Title: Faith has its turns
i reaaaaaaally wanna smack the crud outta Tom right now, but Im really liking this *huggles Bill*
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you like it! :D
Date: 11/24/10 12:54 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
This was a good chapter. I´m glad that Bill got to talk to Tom, and that Tom finally realized what his actions have caused. And also thanks to the cabdriver. I´m so happy now because Tom really has to listen only himself and not think about the others. What HE really wants and hopefully we´ll find it out soon ; )
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think it's good :D I don't think people are made to withstand their deepest desires, neither is Tom.. so he had to come around. eventually ;p Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/24/10 12:36 pm Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground
ok quick lil grammer and spelling correction,
1) you accidentally put a y in quickly when Tom was sending the text to Bill, 2) you forgot to put the word had in the last sentance of this chapter
3)you missed capitalizing everyones names periodically.
ok sorry, I had to point them out. Other than that, this was a great chapter. Can I expect some sort of epically grand gesture from Tom in the next one? Or is he going to make an epic fail?...I'm geatly anticipating the next chapter. update soon please!!
Author's Response: I'm not sure yet what he'll do, but it won't be an epic fail though not everything will be alright with one gesture, Bill will need more than one thing to have his faith in Tom back :) I'm thinking sweet little things at random places and random times. And thank you, I always appreciate grammar/spelling help! I'll edit the mistakes and check the names :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! x