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Reviewer: xVeroGore Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 11:32 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

im totally in love with this chapter, its SO FUCKING CUTE!!! ^^
im looking 4ward 2 the next chappie ;D

Author's Response:

Aah I'm glad you liked it! :D i'll hurry up for the next <3

Reviewer: Livianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 06:55 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

So funny,I like it what Tom do for Bill.
Awesome,I love it,post soon,sweetie!!!

Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it :D i'll post again as soon as possible!

Thanks you for reading & reviewing dear x

Reviewer: Gintare Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:50 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

Oh god, I love this !! Tom is becoming so adorable ! Really, Tom, glitter? hehe. And kissing Bill and saying 'love you too' in public is so perfect of him! I hope Bill loves it all but doesn't give in so easily so we can read of more Tom's attempts. Thank you and I can't wait for more !

Author's Response:

I'm happy you like it :D Bill sure won't give in this soon.. So you'll get more of Tom's attempts to win him over again ;) I'll try to post again as soon as possible! x

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:00 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

lol intersting and i loved it!!! so Tom kissed Bill in person huh? did someone see?

Author's Response:

Nope. As I wrote the part I was imagining it like, two or three streets away from school already so they were alone, but I think I forgot to mention that in the story :p No one saw. I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 03:27 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

This is cute!!!!

Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 03:27 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

i love his attempts.
but i think there should be more "i love yous" ohhh! and kissies!

yes, i am 3 years old!
;]

Author's Response:

hahahah :D Well we'll hold the tension for a bit longer.. But the i love you's and kisses will come don't worry <3

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 02:34 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

:squee: omg lovin this update to itty bits. Srsly cant wait for more :D

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it :D I'll hurry up for more!

Reviewer: jamillkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 01:16 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

that was so sweet of tom.. :D..
ahahahaha... the "explosion of glitters" are the best! LOL!!! :))

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!! :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 12:53 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

OMG-this is too cute, i'm ready to read more!!!

Author's Response:

haha :D I'll do my best to have more soon!

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 12:48 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

OMG THRIVING IVORY...O__O I just discovered the band a few days Ago with their song Angels on the Moon...@__@ And I actually like this in this chapter, especially with the "I'm only Human" part... Gaaaaaaaahhh...

Hmmm... I actually like Tom's attempts in this chapter, although I think he'd have to take it up to the next level on the next ones... Hahahahaha and for such a bitch like me I want him to feel a bit insecure in his position or something - that he won't get Bill THAT easily. LOL...XD Or maybe he needs a bit of a competition or something. He needs to make more sacrifices!! I'm so mean hahahaha..XD Aish...

Author's Response:

awhh haha yes I also discovered the group not long ago.. that song, flowers for a ghost, it's so beautiful it really touches me! I think I'll go and check out that song you're mentioning ;) And yes, he does needs to take it to the next level but trust me, he will :D I've got it all in my head xD

Thank you for reading & reviewing!x

Reviewer: fujicat2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 12:30 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

i love the glitter!!! :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did! :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 12:00 am Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!! That first one was adorable, and the second one was...well I can see where he would think it was an awesome idea, but...well....lets be honest Bill is probably going to be washing glitter from himself and his clothes for days if not weeks. And I can see where that might tick one off a bit. But omg he kissed him! Sure it was on the cheek, but it was in PUBLIC *squee* I love this. I can't wait to see some more of these sorta not so little ways of Tom making up. Keep up the sweet work!

Author's Response:

hahahah yes, I thought of that one myself as I was writing it.. 'oh god, that glitter will stay haunting him for days..' but then again it's worth it, it just seemed too cute in my head and I think in the end Bill thinks it's cute too, anyway :p I'll try to post again as soon as possible! thank you for reading and reviewing xx

Reviewer: THbillgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 11:22 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

AWWWWW yeah!!! im sooo glad u posted early!!! this was sooooo cute!!! geez i love this story!!! *sighs*

xoxo

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it :D Thank you for reading&reviewing ! x

Reviewer: LiesWithinEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 09:05 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

That was freaking awesome. I was totally not expecting the shiny explosion. The mental picture practically sent me into hysterics.

Author's Response:

hahahaha I'm glad you liked it :D I certainly hoped that one was a surprise. Thanks for reviewing x

Reviewer: Kaylee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 08:54 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

I love it!! =D can't wait for the next chapter xP

this story is really awesome! =)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did :D I'll make sure I can post again soon! thank you dear xx

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 08:53 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

OMG hahaha embarrassing *hides for Bill and Tom* But still Sweet

Author's Response:

Thank you!:D

Reviewer: saliorellie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 08:19 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

lol glitter! i loive it

Author's Response:

i'm glad you did :D thanks for reviewing x

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 07:57 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

lmao a glitter bomb XD Can you just imagine Bill fuss about getting glitter out of his hair rofl
That's some cute tactics Tom uses.

Author's Response:

Yes, i can imagine hahhaha! xD Like you said, it's still cute though how Tom does it:) thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 07:35 pm Title: The revelation when you make up your mind

Tom is super sweet & he's trying so hard xD At the end I was like ----> O_O
haha. He's getting brave there =) kissing Bill in public and saying "love you too" without checking his surroundings first hehe. I love it & can't wait til u post again.

Author's Response:

yep, good Tom :D I'm really glad you like it, I was kind of nervous for the reactions to this one! I'll try my best to post again soon xx

Reviewer: Livianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 10:51 am Title: Save yourself before you hit the ground

You posted so soon;
OMG...Bill,what are you doing to poor Tom???
Noooo,I'm so sorry for Tom,please forgive him Bill,please!!!
He is not a bad guy,i know him,trust me...>3
Post soon hun :)))

Author's Response:

Awhhh but he'll sure forgive him, lovely :) Let's just fiorst let Tom discover how much he actually wants Bill with him! I'll post soon <3

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