Date: 01/06/12 05:06 pm Title: Sweet secrets
Okay, at this point it's probably pointless, but you need to improve your grammar. "...hands in de cavity..."? You mean "the cavity"? Sorry, I know I sound like a bitch, and I really do love this story, but the grammar is a serious issue for me. If the grammar was better, I know I would be enjoying the story more, and - as I'm BORED when I'm not reading it already - I know that it'd be almost magical if there were no grammatical errors. The reason I'm so hard on grammar and spelling stuff is because every time I have to figure out what you meant, it takes me out of the story. Still, I'll keep reading because I'm already addicted to it XD
Author's Response: Don't worry, you're not being a bitch, i completely understand. I realize my grammar is not perfect but i don't really know what to change about that. I'm not a native english speaker so i'm never going tonhave perfect feeling for it i guess :p also the storie in currently 7 chapters ahead of this one and actually nearly finished.. I do intend to have one or more beta's looking at it when i'm finished, or well, maybe i could start letting them have a look at it right now already, i just had someone today who offered it. So.. In the end i'll edit everything so it's perfect but i'm afraid it'll take some time xD i'm really sorry it's distracting, i'm glad you like it anyway :) thanks for reviewing, a bit of criticism won't do any harm. X
Date: 01/05/12 07:56 pm Title: Breaking down the walls
Lols XD They don't know why they kissed there? I do. It's because hatred and love aren't opposites, they're two sides of the same coin. Those you love have serious power to hurt you, and so do people you hate. Often, hatred comes because of something you admire in someone that you don't have, or because you see something in them that's similar to yourself. Sometimes, hatred arises BECAUSE of attraction, if someone doesn't want to admit it. Therefore, "Fight, fight, fight fight...kiss???" XD
Author's Response: THE most perfect explanation i ever got for it, haha! You're absolutely rugby. Thanks for reviewing!x
Date: 01/03/12 05:23 pm Title: No song can play forever
Omg please update soon. This story has been my life for.the last two days.
Author's Response: Haha you've read it all in two days?;p Nice! Im glad you like it. I promise more Will be up soon
Author's Response: Haha you've read it all in two days?;p Nice! Im glad you like it. I promise more Will be up soon
Date: 01/03/12 04:10 pm Title: No song can play forever
wow. i am in total shock and i'm loving this story "so much". omg, i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it sweetie! I promise more Will be up soon :)
Date: 01/02/12 01:04 pm Title: No song can play forever
Love this story! I cried in the end of this chapter! Really lookin' forward to the next :D!
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I promise more Will be up soon :)
Date: 01/01/12 06:35 pm Title: Game over
This smut has saved my life. I was watching Silent Hill while reading this (girls ability=win xD) and this calm me down pretty good. xD Well, it was good smut. Hehe.
Author's Response:
Hahah! I'm very glad I could help you with that ;) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/01/12 04:00 pm Title: No song can play forever
Heya,
I realy like reading your story. You have everything so well written that I can feel every emotion and moment you are describing (I hope you understand what I mean, I strungled a bit with the right words).
I was a little tense while reading the last chapter because of what could happen to Bill and Tom. Hope that everything will be alright.
I'm looking forward to the rest. Can't wait!
Loves
Author's Response:
Thank you much for your review, it means a lot to me! It's my goal to make the emotion come over the way it should so telling me that that's what it does makes me incredibly happy ;) More will be up soon because I'm already working on it, so you'll figure out soon! much love xx
Date: 12/30/11 03:47 pm Title: No song can play forever
Holy shit, thanx for the water works! I can barely see to type this out lol.
Author's Response:
aww haha :$ glad to see you're moved by it though! thank you for reviewing!
Date: 12/30/11 03:05 pm Title: It took some time but it was worth it
I'm still here! I'm just a bit behind is all lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
hehe, okay, glad to see you're here! thank you!! :D
Date: 12/28/11 11:02 pm Title: No song can play forever
I think I'll cry if Bill dies :'( Please don't take too long to update!
Author's Response:
aww ;( I'll hurry, promise!
Date: 12/28/11 07:34 pm Title: No song can play forever
I'm still here! I've been with this story since the beginning and am so happy you never gave up on it. And as for the cliffhanger .... Why!!!!! XD
Author's Response:
Great to know that people who have been here since the beginning are still here, I love you guys!! I will never give up on this story until I finish it :) and yes.. the cliffhanger, haha. Because I hate them myself x]
Date: 12/28/11 05:24 pm Title: No song can play forever
You'd better post an update soon or I shall hunt you down >.
Author's Response:
Oh no, I shall live in fear until I nicely end this story.
hehe, thanks for reviewing sweetie!
Date: 12/28/11 04:47 pm Title: Expectation always leads to disappointment
Right now I want a lightning to kill this fucker Tom! Like, what? He canīt even keep a secret? Well, this wasnīt secret in fact, it was personal, really intimate thing. Does he confess to his "friends", that he canīt even tell "it is none of your business"?
Iīm really upset about this xD
Date: 12/28/11 02:36 pm Title: No song can play forever
You have no idea how badly I want to kill all of them right now. This chapter pretty much just imitated the same thing that happened to me and my brother, only no one called an ambulence and I nearly got choked to death. If it hadn't been for my brother I'd probably be dead.
I think you did a really good job on this chapter, well done :)
And I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this story xD Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I'm so sorry something like that happened to you! I never actually had to deal with something like this so I couldn't possibly know how it really feels. All I can say is that I have no faith in humanity if it can behave in such a way. People who do such things can just drop dead for all I care, and that's a pretty hard accusation coming from me because I don't easily wish that kind of thing upon anyone. I'm glad you like the story!! I'll try to get more up as soon as possible :)
Date: 12/28/11 03:52 am Title: No song can play forever
holy shit.
i am in tears right now. you've got me crying again.
just, that whole scene broke my heart. the whole time i was thinking, "please no, god no." and even now i'm praying things will be okay. because if Bill dies.....i'm just gonna lose it. i wont be able to read fanfic ever again.
you are SO GOOD at this, it's got my brain jumbled. *bows to your superior awesomeness*
Author's Response:
Oh my god, thank you so much, your comment makes my day! I'm always very pleased when I seem to succeed at expressing emotion, it's something I try really hard to accomplish. thanks for reading & reviewing sweetie!
Date: 12/28/11 01:58 am Title: No song can play forever
waiting impatiently for more this is really good
Author's Response:
I'll hurry! thank you!
Date: 12/28/11 12:05 am Title: No song can play forever
i am still an avid fan.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear it, thanks!!
Date: 12/27/11 09:07 pm Title: No song can play forever
Nein Nein Nein! If Billa dies i'll kill you Shattereddreamss... JK I NEED THIS STORY BUT DON'T KILL BILL :)
Author's Response:
Oeeeh but that would mean no story! ;p I'm not sure yet what I'll do with Bill!
Date: 12/27/11 08:21 pm Title: No song can play forever
WHAT ARE YOU DOOOIIIING~ Don't kill Bill D:
Author's Response:
Now I feel like a criminal haha!:p not sure yet what I'm gonna make happen though!
Date: 12/27/11 07:48 pm Title: No song can play forever
wow, i'm already craving for more!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll hurry :D