Date: 02/16/26 12:48 pm Title: And then the walls thunder down
This smut part is so WILD and DIRTY xD wow! And the details.. it’s simply amazing how you wrote this so one can literally paint it all up like a video for real, people say that often when it’s lots of details but this was SO detailed and unique the one TRULY can see it all clearly ;) magical. Only complaint is with how wild and unrestrained they were and the want to merge to one so badly I expected some rimming here from Tom to Bill and that would have made it perfect but otherwise it’s SO good ;>
Date: 02/03/26 10:15 pm Title: And then the walls thunder down
This smut part is so WILD and DIRTY xD wow! And the details.. it’s simply amazing how you wrote this so one can literally paint it all up like a video for real, people say that often when it’s lots of details but this was SO detailed and unique the one TRULY can see it all clearly ;) magical. Only complaint is with how wild and unrestrained they were and the want to merge to one so badly I expected some rimming here from Tom to Bill and that would have made it perfect but otherwise it’s SO good ;>
Date: 02/03/26 08:33 pm Title: Sort yourself out
I get the scared and insecure thing but at the same time Tom can also be very dominant and strong and I mean he decked Bills ex. I forgot his name just now lol.. so he should also have SOME strength and belief in being able to be in a dispute with some people or calling it quits with some of the guy “friends” .. well I’m sure that fire and strength will arrive soon enough ;)
Date: 02/03/26 11:57 am Title: Game over
I forgot how irritating they both are x) like one second Bill is all like “oh I’m masochistic and I love Tom and how he treats me so I will have patience and he’s already made progress and this will take a bit of time” then he gets all depressed and wants to quit everything and doubts Tom just because of one kiss that he should clearly know by now is just an image thing that Tom feels forced to do. And Tom HAS made lots of changes and there hasn’t even been a long time since the trip either :v plus even if it was to make Tom react Bill has been flirting / intimate with someone else too :b If Bill couldn’t at all turn away or deny Dylan then he shouldn’t be able to do it to super handsome, older, dominant, popular and cool Tom either, + that he loves Tom, if he’s brave enough for that and savage enough then he should be brave enough to stand up against Tobias.. kick him in the balls ;) or turn the bullying around against him perhaps.. it’s just a bit or very much bipolar of Bibi huh hahah
Date: 02/03/26 09:45 am Title: But there's something there
Its kind of hot that Bill is only 15 and Tom is 18, and also in Europe in many countries such as Germany it’s actually not so uncommon either, the legal age of consent is 14+, and teenagers around their age are often quite promiscuous and / or used to such age differences, and many are very mature already as teens, and one is basically considered an full adult at 18. :) I’ve already read this story so I know how it goes but it would have been nice if they switched schools so they could start over and be together already at this point but I guess there need to be more drama and character development for Tom to find himself / his strength and for them to stay in that school and things to evolve there which is what happens I know ^^ and group pressure, bullying and popularity can be really hard to go against or break free from so it is believable that it takes time and strength for someone like Tom to break free and become stronger and all that but at the same time love is an incredible force and like he could deck Dylan and go against him with such strength to save Bill he surely could against that Tobias guy also especially since Tom is so popular with other people and they “follow the leader” but ofc it’s still scary and something that can take time so it’s understandable that it takes time and that he’s scared and fails more times but yeah ^^
Date: 02/03/26 03:49 am Title: Breaking down the walls II
There are some spelling / word mistakes in this chapter just wanted to point it out, but it’s a very beautiful and magical chapter with the love making by the pool… it’s much better then many other sex / smut scenes in many fics so I don’t want to give any criticism but I can’t help myself hehe, I just wanted to point out that water isn’t enough lubrication rather it can make the friction worse and drier if not at first at least very quickly, it would have been better if they did it in the warm pool instead in that case or if they did it with lots of saliva atleast, that would also have been very sexy if they did it for a while in the pool too or if Tom prepared him with his tongue a bit - running, but I guess homosexual acts are too new still for Tom or the relationship is too new (and Bill is also new to having sex even if he’s gay) so it would maybe have been a bit unrealistic or out of character if Tom already was comfortable with eating Bill out yeah.. it would have been very hot though ;) I have read this before but I can’t remember very much so I don’t know if there will be rimming later on but I hope so cause that’s one of the hottest acts in many’s opinion especially when it’s Tom doing that to his Bill (a) also the hoodie part is very adorable, I love when Tom does that, there’s another oneshot when it’s winter and the twins are out walking in the cold and Bill gets too tired or cold to continue and they find a tree house that they climb up and rest in and they end up like that zipped up together in Toms hoodie with Bill straddling Tom close and it’s the first time they’re being that close and they end up grinding a bit and also kissing I think… it’s very hot and sweet but I can’t remember the name of it neither can I find it but I think it’s on this website :( if anyone know which one I’m talking about and can tell me the name or author or link it I would be very thankful :)
Date: 02/03/26 03:02 am Title: You can't deny yourself
Toms sexuality as always and IRL : Billsexual ;) and ofc that’s confusing at first haha! Poor tomato, it’s not easy having the charm of a “ladykiller” but always only having one true soulmate - soulflame - owner of his heart and dick - his pretty Bill!
Date: 09/09/25 08:42 pm Title: Who's got the upper hand now?
Every single time you write ache instead of arch just so you know ^^
Date: 09/24/23 11:49 am Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
Oh.. my.. god…… !!!!!!!! It took me a few days to read this because I had to stop myself in order to not stay up all night and finish it in one go! This was such a beautifully written story! Everything flowed so naturally and your descriptions really allowed me to paint a picture in my head like it was right in front of me! The romance was beautiful! The sex was hot!! The drama was perfecttt! I wanted to cry for Bill so many times :,) ahhhhh anyway! I loved loved loved this! Will def be on my list of rereads
Date: 03/05/23 07:33 pm Title: Faith has its turns
I'm a total sucker for 'enemies to friends to lovers' type stories and this sucked me in immediately. I love how Tom thought Bill was hot while dancing and took care of him while drunk afterwards. I like how Tom wasn't TOO mean while they were figuring things out, and how he tried to make it up to Bill after he messed up. So many cute moments and I've read it a couple times. Not sure if you'll ever see this as I'm late to the THF party, but either way, thanks for the read!
Date: 10/14/18 01:19 pm Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
this was such a good story!!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 04/07/18 01:41 am Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
this was a really good story!!
i hope u did a sequel to this!
Date: 09/02/16 04:00 pm Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
Dunno how many times i read this masterpiece, but every time i love it more and more
Date: 02/08/16 09:06 am Title: Stars Aligned
I read the whole book in 2 days ! I loved it 😍.
Date: 01/23/16 03:36 pm Title: Faith has its turns
My god
I m so HAPPY that u finished this story,definitly one of my favorite so far.
Seems so real and so true, does it make sens ? Lol
Thanks for sharing ur feelings with us :)
Date: 01/03/16 03:10 pm Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
LOVED IT :) Everytime I hear the song "Impossible" now I have to cry haha. it reminds me so much of poor little Bill being treated like shit by cowardy tommy. Thanks for the amazing fic.
XOXO
Date: 08/23/15 11:22 am Title: Breaking down the walls II
Hey there, just checking if anyone's told you about the typo of Tom's name. Bill's last name in this is Kaulitz right? But you wrote 'you're Tom fucking Kaulitz' so I figured I'd point it out. Other than that, great work~
Date: 08/22/15 08:58 pm Title: Epilogue: Intertwined wires
I have lost Count on how many times I've read this story now! God, it has it all! Everything! I fell in love With it when i first read it, and I will probably keep Reading it ^^ It's amazing, you've done a hell of a job writing this great piece!!
Date: 06/23/15 08:08 am Title: Stars Aligned
I'll miss the characters..
Date: 02/22/15 01:09 am Title: Stars Aligned
One of the best stories on here...period!
Yes please....outtakes would be great.
Thank you for writing and sharing this incredible story.