Date: 02/05/12 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so sweet :')
Date: 05/11/11 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1
This was soo cute, adorable to the max!!! A very believable scenario for Tom. Bill is a very sneaky little boy, but they both owe him big time for opening his big mouth. Haha :) well done!
Date: 08/22/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe I love it so much it was so good
It was romantically funny so AMAZING! =D
Date: 07/28/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
He stared into her dark blue eyes, the color of the ocean on a stormy night; that was his favorite thing about her. How when she was pissed her eyes would swim and you could actually see the storm brewing in her eyes…But when she was happy it was as if the sun was shining directly onto her ocean-esque eyes, making them brighter than ever. Though he’d only seen that once; and it wasn’t because of him. When she was sad, it was as if the sky was weeping, that’s the only way Tom could describe it when he looked into her eyes when she was sad. An ocean weeping. God, he’d become such a wuss!
....I'm aorry, did I actually just read that?? It's descriptive.. but ridiculously cheesy and overdone. I'm loling. sorry.
Author's Response: Thank you for being honest.
Date: 07/27/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful!! =D
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/27/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.