Date: 01/08/11 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
ahh so toms' dad is the really cool one in this family, well and it looks like MOST of toms family, but it looks as if his step-bitch not so much. well this is going to be a painful confrontation i can just see it coming now.
Date: 01/08/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh i can't wait to meet toms' family. but i'm glad that bill's dad SEEMS to be getting along with things, even though he loudly protests. if he was really against them he could have made tom sleep on the couch. but he LET tom stay in bills room. which says something you know? like his macho image won't let him say out loud that he's happy for his son, but yet he's giving a few inches you know? in his actions if not his words. hopefully toms' family will be at least as accepting.
Date: 01/08/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh i'm so glad that gustav is okay. and i'm glad that bill's mom stood up to his dad. hopefully bill's family (dad) will eventually warm up to tom.
Date: 01/08/11 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh no.. now i'm wondering is gustav the one with the tongs who always says "not allowed" ? Im picturing him waving those around in the gun-man's face screaming at that guns and hold-ups in general are NOT ALLOWED. which of course would make a jumpy burgler shoot him poor thing. and of course fred deserves his chewing out the fucking loser. because YEAH he probably WAS sitting on his fat-ass playing mah=jong. and you would think getting one of his employees shot because of his laziness would encourage him to get off said ass, but of course not, he's still sitting there when bill gets back.
*grrr* makes me want to pummel that greasy fat bastard.
Date: 01/08/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
hmm for some reason, tom makes me suspicious. please please please don't let him be lying and only out to get some tail... please?
Date: 01/08/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
aww that was good. I'm sorry that it was so painful for him, but it was nice that tom finally found the right spot. I imagine that it will take a few times before they finally get to a point where it feels good all the time, and maybe more preperation as well. i'll really enjoy reading more of this.
Date: 01/08/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh my... now that is a dilemma. do you want to spend time with your boyfriend and possibly have the privacy to REALLY get intimate? There's a chance tom won't push, if he really loves bill he'll wait as long as it takes for bill to be comfortable with giving up his virginity. and besides, what if TOM is the uke? *snickers at that thought* I mean, here bill's probably freaked about bottoming, but what if TOM wants him to TOP? which would be scary for a virgin I guess, but not nearly as scary as being bottom for the first time.
Date: 01/08/11 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh man i hope bill isn't going to be an asshole, and just a silly scared virgin. breaking up right now would be a disaster... everyone has to fall in love for the first time and risk that broken heart whether they want it or not. sometimes it gets utterly shattered and you struggle the rest of your life to put the pieces back together. and sometimes, everything goes as it should and that first love really is a lasting one. but you can't know unless you risk it.
Date: 01/08/11 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh my a handjob... nice one tom! and good for bill for standing up to his domineering dad! of course he's gonna pay for it later but it will have worth it for that handjob.
Date: 01/08/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
the image of bill running away from wild turkeys while tom laughs his ass off just made my day. I remember when my nephew was about 2 1/2 a gang of about 20 wild turkeys came right up against my sister's house. so close you could stand in the bay window and see the whites of their eyes. She pointed to them and told her son "look ryan, turkeys!" and her son at the time who was still learning new words and to identify objects let out a heavy sigh and responded.." No mommy, try again. they're CHICKENS!" Which is just how my sister would reply when he identified something wrong... "no, try again..." it made my sister laugh so hard she didn't have the heart to correct him. She just laughed and said... " Okay baby.. but their really BIG chickens!"
Date: 01/08/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha.. ooh first make out session.. poor bills is flailing like mad...
Date: 01/08/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh this goofball romance is just so cute. of course once the real heat starts it will just make it all the more poignant for all the sweet emotion we can already see from them both.
Date: 01/08/11 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
haha.. oh man busted scrubbing toilets! what a second impression! you goofball! but of course i'm grinning probably as widely as bill right now....
i should tell you that i'm totally new to tokio hotel, and that this story was recommended to me by someone. so hope you don't mind a new reader that tends to make off-the-wall, and lengthy comments sometimes. ;)
Date: 01/08/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww that's too cute. I love the open relationship he has with his mom. and the voicemail was adorable.
Date: 01/08/11 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh i like this. and the last line is priceless. I can almost hear the excited squeek being squelched as I type this. can't wait to read further.
Date: 12/27/10 03:20 am Title: Epilogue.
Aww my loved it! :D
Date: 12/26/10 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Aw! This is where you drove through my heart. How sweet. Everything the boys said to each other was sweet. I loved it :) I hearted it x)
Date: 12/26/10 11:53 am Title: Chapter 19
Oooooooooo thank God I dont have to wait to find out :D
Date: 12/26/10 11:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Hahahahahahaha assertive xD ASSertive ;D Teehee x)
Date: 12/26/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG guess what!... I'm baaaaaack :D Been UBER depresed but I'm getting better. I still love your story :3