Date: 11/08/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ah, a nice little dose of intrigue. So who is this woman and why is Tom running away? Can't wait to find out.
I love how Bill was freaking out in his head and then just says, "I dunno. Guess I'm nervous." That was an understatement.
And it was a great chapter... I don't know why you were worried. :)
Author's Response: I always worry. I'm very critical on myself. But I am glad that you liked it! ^_^ I have the new one up. (Which I'm nervous bout, too....) But hope you like it!
Date: 11/08/10 10:25 am Title: Chapter 15
very very cute!
Author's Response: Much love!
Date: 11/08/10 10:23 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh no...not the mom-dun dun dun...looking forward to the next chapter to see the interaction between Bill, Tom and Toms mother!
Author's Response: Well. I have it up! *huggles the Jazmyne*
Date: 11/08/10 10:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Love Bill's parent's-his mom is cool and funny and his dad is typical! Oh boy-Bill meeting Toms parents--thinking the next chapter may be quite funny...
Date: 11/08/10 09:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Don't tell me it's Tom's step-mother being all grumpy and shit -.- poor Tomi, good he has his amazing and sweet father! (yeah, I love father and son love, ehe) this is great, looking forward to more :D xoxo
Author's Response: *much love* Glad you liked it! I have the next chapter up. Hope you like it!
Date: 11/08/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter 15
It's official, I love Bill's mom! Of course, Tom's grandma and great aunts were hilarious as well. And I like that bit at the end...it's a nice hint of drama. I loved this chapter and I think you did a great job setting up the family get-together/birthday. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked them. I modeled them after my relatives. Heh. XD Anyways, I have the new chapter up. Hope you like it!
Date: 11/08/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 15
Honey. It is a fine chapter (: no worries. *hugs*
Author's Response: *huggles you back* Thank you!
Date: 11/08/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 15
So I'm guess that was his step-mom? And he doesn't like her? But lol at "See my pecs? Aren't they lovely?" xDD I got a new chapter up btw :D I like how we are reading each others xD Love yours! Hope you love mine! Can't wait for more, laters :D/
Author's Response: I do love yours! That's why I always am bugging you for an update. *coughsupdatecoughs* Jeez! Had something in my throat there! ;)
Date: 11/08/10 03:06 am Title: Chapter 15
uh oh...I wonder who that is. Is it is mom? an ex? thanks for the update!
Author's Response: *huggles you* Thanks, Love. I've got the newest one up, now.
Date: 11/08/10 02:07 am Title: Chapter 15
Ooooh! That must be the STEP-MOM! Love that Jorg was checking out Bill. Someone's gonna have some happy dreams tonight. :p
Love this! Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: HA! XD I've got the newest one up, I hope you like it! *huggles*
Date: 11/08/10 01:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Dun,dun,dun. Tom's step mother I assume? He doesn't like her now does he? Is she Amy's mom? I loved Bill looking for a shirt and Tom finally saying green. I am extremely excited for part 2. Hurry up and write missy!
Author's Response: For the record, yes, she's Amy's mom. And I made it a three parter. :P
Date: 11/06/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
lol awesome. Can't wait to see what happens at the barbeque! It's gonna be awesome! : D
Author's Response: I just posted the latest chapter, I hope you like it, and thanks for the review! *huggles*
Date: 11/04/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay! A bbq, TSOA style! :D This is gonna be good. Poor Bill, his parents, like I know they mean well, but dayumn. They need to ease up off the poor boy a bit. *pets* At least Tom hasn't run away screaming, lol! XD
Author's Response: Maybe he'll run away screamin' about this one....
Date: 11/04/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG! Not only is this chapter hot as hell It's also adoable and hilarious! I love how you've characterized Bill's parents XD absolutely brilliant! You are a GENIUS xD
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, but remember that your health comes first :3
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the encouragement! I have the next chapter up, I hope you like it. As for my health, it is on the mend! *huggles*
Date: 11/04/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
Biu is SUPER pleased by this!! *pets tomibear!*
Author's Response: *loves on*
Date: 11/04/10 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
OW! FABIOLOUS CHAPTER! and a good damn freaking good sex-part!!!! I love iiit :D
Buttsex
Author's Response: Well, I am glad that you liked it! *much love*
Date: 11/04/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 14
I love Bill's family! They're so hilarious. "Extreme" is the word, all right. And I can't wait to see how Bill meeting Tom's family goes.
I hope you're feeling better. Thanks for the update, and looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: I am glad that you love Bill's fam. I have the next chapter up, I hope you enjoy it! And I am feeling better, thanks for that! *huggles*
Date: 11/03/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
SEXII. : DDDD
Ohhh, barbeque sounds.. interesting!
Author's Response: *huggles you* I am glad that you think so...
Date: 11/03/10 11:29 am Title: Chapter 14
I can't wait!
Author's Response: Wait no more! (It's up! :P)
Date: 11/03/10 07:23 am Title: Chapter 14
Finally Bill gets to met Tom's family! Not going to lie, I've been really curious to see what the dynamics are like in Tom's family and how they'll react to and treat Bill. So can't wait!
Author's Response: I think you will be pleasantly surprised.... It's up, btw. *huggles you*