Date: 03/01/09 02:59 am Title: Chapter 3: Therapy
Dude! I hate sad stories! But this story is so addicting to read for some reason man...
Date: 02/25/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Worrisome Situation
Omg! This chapter is awesome *tries to hold in insane laughter at work*
It's so suspensful & thrilling.
Author's Response: Thank you you much! Stay tuned.
Date: 02/11/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Gosh, I'm literally breathless here. This story is so tense and CREEPY. I love this! The image of Specter Bill's smile is now engraved in my head. Oh yeah, this would make a kickass movie.
Author's Response: *brings over oxygen tank* Don't want you passing out on me. :D There's lots more to come! I'm glad you're enjoying this and you really made my day saying that this could be a film. High compliments from you, hon, so you get cyber cupcakes! Thank you. :D
Date: 02/03/09 08:19 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Ok, it's me again. It seems I can't edit a review, but I just wanted to add that for an insane moment, while reading the part where little Bill forces Tom to revisit the part of Bill's accident, I thought the the big revelation would be that it was really Simone behind the wheel! haha That she wanted to kill off one of the twins because she knew they were commiting incest and wanted them to stop! Ok, it's like 5am and I'm gonna stop sounding crazy now and go back to sleep. Sorry for the randomness.
Author's Response: Wow. That is an interesting plot twist, but not the plot twist at work here. But seriously, if I were reading this story and someone else were writing it? That would be a crazy but intriguing turn of events. Something to make me go: "Whoa.". :DDD I love hearing other people's interpretations of things and what you thought actually gave me shivers.
Date: 02/03/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
I woke up randomely at 3:30am and couldn't go back to sleep, so decided to read some fluffy billxtom love. What I got was your fic which totally CREEPED me out!!! That was so scary but so good! You did really well with building up the suspense here. I kept looking at my door while readig the story expecting someone outside to be turning my doorknob!! Oh gosh! It's still scary when I think about it, and the evil grin from little Bill at the end was also terrifying. Despite all the creepiness, I found the scene of Bill & Tom at the bar to be very poignant.
This is my favorite chapter so far and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work and don't make us wait too long please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your enthusiastic review! :D I'm happy you are enjoying this story and I will try not to take too long with the next chappie. *cuddles* Sorry for scaring you, even though I'm happy my story is doing what it's supposed to. :D
Date: 01/29/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
This is a wonderful story. You've written the perfect mix of sweet and sorrow, it's captivating! Keep up the great work! :D
Author's Response: I appreciate your review. Stay tuned for more!
Date: 01/29/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
I rarely read anything here anymore, but I still get e-mail alerts when my favorites update. I can't resist coming back to read this story and I am anxiously awaiting the conclusion.
This story is wonderfully complex and emotional.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hugs*
Date: 01/28/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
i love this story!
i can't wait till the next chapter and the next!
eep, so excited!
you're great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Stay tuned! :D
Date: 01/27/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Wow, this chapter was just so intense. I can't wait for the new chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'll update again as soon as I am able. :D
Date: 01/27/09 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
this chapter was kinda weird, but it was still good. so glad you updated, and i cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Weird how? Please elaborate at my email: bratwaite@msn.com. Stay tuned for more.
Date: 01/27/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
OH MY GAAAAAAD!!! You're freaking me out!!! Gosh... this was creepy!! Especially the last part, damn it!! I thought I just imagined Gage from Stephen King's Pet Cemetery with Spector Bill right there!! OMAGAAAAAAD!!! I'm so loving this more!! I can't wait for the next one!!XD
Does that mean Tom was supposed to die too? Lol I wish you could answer that, but it's okay if you don't. I'll just have to figure it out myself... I sooo love suspense thrillers and mind-boggling stuffs so I gotta love you for this!!XD I LOVE YOOOUUUU!!! *glomps Nightshade*
Keep it going!! I'm always waiting! Lol!!XD And Bless your mom, she's finally out in the hospital! *huggZz*
Author's Response: *glomps emraud* Thanks so much for the review. Your excitement made me grin. :DDD Stay tuned for more. And thanks, also, about my mom. We are so relieved.
Date: 01/26/09 11:25 pm Title: Prologue: A Promise
Oh i was waiting for an update!...I have to say that this story is creepy, sad and interesting... I like it so much! :D , but i need to admit that i'm a little bit confused right now but u will make my doubts disappear little by little.. please continue soon!!
Author's Response: I like that you like it. I know it can be confusing, but I promise you the signs are all there in the story. It's really heavy with symbolism and foreshadowing, so you've just got to pick it apart to see where this is all going. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/26/09 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Oh dear God this is good. So much suspense! Your descriptions are absolutely amazing, and Tom's dream is incredibly realistic.
All of this is wonderful! I was literally on the edge of my seat, and gasped quite loudly at the end.
Beautiful, simply beautiful. I can't wait for more!!
-Ami
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. Stay tuned for more! :D
Date: 01/26/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
This is so creepy an confusing. Like a movie.
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's so confusing. This story is very much written to be like one of those pyschological horror films. It's a lot to do with symbolism and foreshadowing. Everything means SOMETHING in this story. Nothing is left to chance. From Tom's dreams, to the circumstances revolving around Bill's death--everything that happens means something. The only thing that I can tell you is to, when you have time, re-read and try to look at everything in an abstract POV. Thanks for reading and I hope you continue to read. :D
Date: 01/26/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 8: These Scars Do Not Heal
What's going on?
Author's Response: All will be revealed in time. Thanks for reading.
Date: 01/26/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Worrisome Situation
Wow uber creepy!
Date: 01/26/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
Woah. When the narrative in Simone's POV said that she had heard a second voice over the moniter... That was like something creepy from a ghost movie.
Author's Response: Oh good. I meant for it to come off creepy. ^_^
Date: 01/26/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
OH, I don't want Bill to be evil. That's too depressing. I guess this show's Bill's always been a bit nutty. But they're twins... they're supposed to be together... Was Tom supposed to die to? Did Bill set it up? No, he wouldn't have.. Ugh! Confused! NEED MORE NOW!
Author's Response: Don't worry. Bill is not evil or nutty. But there's a bigger picture here and it will all be revealed at the end. This story is trying to show that true love goes beyond the deepest, darkest recesses of your soul--even beyond the grave. Bill and Tom's connection is that strong to me in real life and this is my interpretation of it through this fic. :D
Date: 01/26/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
it is 2:24 in the morning.I finished a homework i have to return to my teacher tomorrow.I don't know why i decided to readthis now,and now i'm still trembling.Gosh,that was beyond scary,it was terrifying!
Author's Response: *cuddles you* Thanks for reading and I'm sorry I scared you. :D
Date: 01/26/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 9: Revelations
Oh God. Oh no. D: I may not be understanding it right, though I think I've got it, and it's just... horrible. All so tragic. I look forward to Tom making more of the revelation in the next chapter.
Author's Response: *coaxes little ducklings forward to comfort you* Yes, very tragic but hopefully all will work out in the end. Thanks for reading.